My Alpha's Fairytale

So, I did enjoy some elements of this book such as not too much profanity, clean sexual romance, and playfulness. A fair YA read. Eva was an interesting character (a bit creepy at times but still an intriguing character). However, what made this book just OKAY/mediocre was the fact that there was way too many grammar/typo issues to overlook. Almost every sentence and every paragraph needs MAJOR editing. Sometimes, I had to guess at what was being said, which interrupted the flow of the sentence/passage. Poor grammar can ruin a good book. Example: Eva’s character spoke to another character calling them a “dump b*t*h” instead of “dumb b*t*h”

LV 11

Amanda_Santiago_7438

This book was great.. I truly enjoyed it and would love a continuation of the story. I believe the story was left open enough to continue on.

LV 14

Elizabeth_Crawley

Grammar was a little hard to read, and the story seems to end pretty abruptly, but it was interesting with some very good emotional parts.

LV 10

Noelle_Mounce_8173

Good storyline. A bit of superfluous detail that didn't improve the story. Some poor sentence structure and horrible spelling. Sadly, enough to make reading difficult and awkward reading. Still readable with persistence. Writer, recommend proofreading and editing to improve content and reader's experience for improved marketing. Definitely worth the time and effort. More readers equals more profitability equals more money in your wallet.

LV 14

kathryn_pitt

I enjoyed this book and the storyline a whole lot. It was very moving in some places and cute in others. My only issue is that the ending felt rushed and up in the air to me.

LV 13

Gillian_Lynn_6401

this is a good story which would be better if some of the sentences were understandable and not jumbled. I would have scored higher if not for this