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Hey! Good day to you! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email mollyringdom*@*gmail.com (delete *）We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). Looking forward to your email.
Hi! This is vava, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail. This contest is free entry, and we can provide you a advance by joining the contest.
$115,500 for the Best Adventure Novels +Get Hardcover Publish Hey Writers! Come to check out this adventure novel writing competition, both new and published stories can participate! This competition is mainly looking for four genres: Fantasy, Urban, Game, and Sci-fi. You can either submit your published works, rewrite some previous ideas, or create a new story if any given examples or tips inspired you! Web-fiction or Light Novel writing experience is desired, so you might be the winner! For more information, you may visit: https://bit.ly/2ObQnRy or contact vava6378@protonmail.com
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Can someone do a gooD synopsis plz ??? .....................................................................................................
really awesome book, I like his powers, his system, his will to improve. character development is awesome. ONLY thing I don't like is Alex ( and the whole mystery behind her )
keep going we know you can do it!??!!?. do your best author san xp xp pxp xp xp xp xp xp px px xp px pxp xp xp px pxp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp
one of the best naruto novel in the current market but I want to ask author , he has tailed beast level chakra then why not use shadow clones to perfect his techniques? he can easily send shadow clones to learn his other elements , medical ninjutsu , and rune mage craft. he can even train his chakra control to a perfect level with shadow .clones . why are you not using his full potential? and please don't leave him with only 5 elemental seeds give him other elemental seeds as well. and you even nerfed his elemental seed because he has no need to use normal lightening. he can use black lightening in his attacks or you can give him one more elemental seed hopefully yin elemental to practice mind arts so that he doesn't have a weakness or you can give him a yin yang elemental seed to upgrade his great way of Buddha technique and learn mind arts and soul arts together. i hope you will include these in the novel as it will be more interesting . and you can forget worrying about being op as you can give him an order by sacthach to lower his stats than his enemy to force his techniques upgrading.
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Hey! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email kerawood.review@gmail.com We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). A brief introduction along with a few samples or links will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!
NOT GONNA LIE AUTHOR I LOVE THIS NOVEL OF YOURS I KNOW IN THE FUTURE THEIR ARE GONNA BE BAD PEOPLE AND GOOD PEOPLE THAT WILL TALK TRASH ABOUT YOUR HARDWORK BUT DON'T MIND THEM THEY ARE JUST SOME STUPIDS. SO YEAH I WILL READ THIS NOVEL UNTIL YOU FINISH IT SO STAY POSITIVE AND IF SOMETHING HAPPENS OR YOU WANNA STOP WRITING IS FINE BUT SAD TO SO IM ENCOURAGING YOU TOO FINISH YOUR NOVWL👍👍🤧🤧
Shameless Author Review here. First time writing a novel. Have read a multitude of novels and fan-fics and decided to give it a crack myself. This will be a world travel related novel. I'm going the route of an OP MC coz thats how i like it. As far as MCs Romantic interests go, i havent really decided and will see how things go and decide later. Thank you and do feel free to share any constructive criticism or opinions.
Reading the first chapter I thought it could be an interesting story, but turned out to be a waste of time. There is no plot advancement whatsoever cause the mc spends all his time training and nothing else. There is no character development cause the mc spends all time training and doesn't even meet other characters. He is also dumb and, worst of all, he is one of those persons that turn the system into his wife or some such nonsense... Honestly, this story is really bad and a waste of time...
Hey! Good day to you! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email mollyringdom*@*gmail.com (delete *）We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). Looking forward to your email.
Hi! This is vava, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail. This contest is free entry, and we can provide you a advance by joining the contest.
$115,500 for the Best Adventure Novels +Get Hardcover Publish Hey Writers! Come to check out this adventure novel writing competition, both new and published stories can participate! This competition is mainly looking for four genres: Fantasy, Urban, Game, and Sci-fi. You can either submit your published works, rewrite some previous ideas, or create a new story if any given examples or tips inspired you! Web-fiction or Light Novel writing experience is desired, so you might be the winner! For more information, you may visit: https://bit.ly/2ObQnRy or contact vava6378@protonmail.com
annoying system... bbye good luck .. sorry for 1star 😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱
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Can someone do a gooD synopsis plz ??? .....................................................................................................
really awesome book, I like his powers, his system, his will to improve. character development is awesome. ONLY thing I don't like is Alex ( and the whole mystery behind her )
keep going we know you can do it!??!!?. do your best author san xp xp pxp xp xp xp xp xp px px xp px pxp xp xp px pxp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp
one of the best naruto novel in the current market but I want to ask author , he has tailed beast level chakra then why not use shadow clones to perfect his techniques? he can easily send shadow clones to learn his other elements , medical ninjutsu , and rune mage craft. he can even train his chakra control to a perfect level with shadow .clones . why are you not using his full potential? and please don't leave him with only 5 elemental seeds give him other elemental seeds as well. and you even nerfed his elemental seed because he has no need to use normal lightening. he can use black lightening in his attacks or you can give him one more elemental seed hopefully yin elemental to practice mind arts so that he doesn't have a weakness or you can give him a yin yang elemental seed to upgrade his great way of Buddha technique and learn mind arts and soul arts together. i hope you will include these in the novel as it will be more interesting . and you can forget worrying about being op as you can give him an order by sacthach to lower his stats than his enemy to force his techniques upgrading.
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Hey! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email kerawood.review@gmail.com We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). A brief introduction along with a few samples or links will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!
NOT GONNA LIE AUTHOR I LOVE THIS NOVEL OF YOURS I KNOW IN THE FUTURE THEIR ARE GONNA BE BAD PEOPLE AND GOOD PEOPLE THAT WILL TALK TRASH ABOUT YOUR HARDWORK BUT DON'T MIND THEM THEY ARE JUST SOME STUPIDS. SO YEAH I WILL READ THIS NOVEL UNTIL YOU FINISH IT SO STAY POSITIVE AND IF SOMETHING HAPPENS OR YOU WANNA STOP WRITING IS FINE BUT SAD TO SO IM ENCOURAGING YOU TOO FINISH YOUR NOVWL👍👍🤧🤧
Shameless Author Review here. First time writing a novel. Have read a multitude of novels and fan-fics and decided to give it a crack myself. This will be a world travel related novel. I'm going the route of an OP MC coz thats how i like it. As far as MCs Romantic interests go, i havent really decided and will see how things go and decide later. Thank you and do feel free to share any constructive criticism or opinions.
Reading the first chapter I thought it could be an interesting story, but turned out to be a waste of time. There is no plot advancement whatsoever cause the mc spends all his time training and nothing else. There is no character development cause the mc spends all time training and doesn't even meet other characters. He is also dumb and, worst of all, he is one of those persons that turn the system into his wife or some such nonsense... Honestly, this story is really bad and a waste of time...