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I find this novel fun to read and entertaining too! Currently read 100 chapters. Good points are the world building which is amazing, the skills and cultivation itself and the position beasts occupy in the world too without being just tiered walking resources. I would criticize the main character though as being too much of an idealist even after all his shtty past, which is kind of weird. He cares too much about world peace and living conditions of people he doesn't know nor should he care about. Imo it would be better if he were just cold and consider only his self gain and the safety of the people arround him. There are some minor spelling mistakes but not too relevant here and there. To sum it up, it is a great novel so if you like the genre you definitely should give it a try!
I've never wrote a review before but this one definitely deserves it. I have read 300+ chapters and just want to say what an absolute BANGER of a story. I was skeptical about it at first, and I didn't really like the info dumps that would happen constantly in the beginning. I took me a while to warm up to the story because of this. And I thought I was just going to drop the story because of how much I just didn't like the beginning. BOY, WAS I WRONG!! I can't get enough of this story. Seriously, if you are debating reading it, you need to. The writing grows so much from the beginning. The characters aren't just background but have actual personalities, which I find very rare nowadays with stories like these. There are a few arcs in here that I read in every story I find like this. Which is another reason I tend to drop these kinds of stories. But the writer does them so RIGHT I don't even care. Everything is so unique and out of the box. It's a nice breath of fresh air, this story. I know this is a long review, but I just feel like this is a hidden gem on the app. I went ahead and started reading the other stories from this author and let's just say I found a new favorite.
God’s Eyes Stopped at chapter 532 of 1115 As this novel of HideousGrain was high in the rankings, I decided to give a try to this author whom I never read before. Sadly, I was disappointed. I tried to like this novel, I really did, but its interesting premises were sapped by too many flaws that I can’t push through anymore. This tales has a fine setting at the beginning, but its latter expansions seem only to exist in order to justify the plot. The plot which appears quite chaotic with only the tiniest underlying coherence. Adding to that is the protagonist, Jason Stella, whose intelligence, maturity and personality vary on a large spectrum, depending on where the author wants to go. In fact, a number of secondary characters are better written than the MC. The power system is quite interesting, but suffers from the same coherence problem (the writer has a real problem with numbers). Finally, the writing itself is the main issue of the novel. Beyond the typos and mistaken homophones, the story is affected by filler and a very rough style. My current verdict, as of chapter 532 (a bit less than half the novel), is a 4 out of 10. I’m putting this one on hold, maybe indefinity, and it will be a while before I try another HideousGrain tale. I really hope he has improved since then. Meanwhile, I’m spend time reading other new writers, as well as those whose books I already enjoyed. Kergonan out
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first book I read completely and was sad when it ended. congratulations to the author for writing a story I had trouble putting down.
Took me a few months to finish this novel. Also took me hundreds of dollars. The story is about Jason Stella and his journey from weak to strong. The world building is immense, and the novel was unable to encompass everything the author wanted to share. I enjoyed the story, and I wanted more from the story as I felt there were at least a thousand chapters left unwritten. Hideous mention at the end of every chapter for ages that it was not rushed even if it seemed like it... but it looks like it was. It feels like it was, and I think it was. That said the novel is excellent and while I have no intention on reading the associated novels. I would recommend this one.
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great book, but sadly quite rushed at the end to make room for othet stories in the same multiverse. thats great and all but leaves one slightly dissatisfied.
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I've wasted precious hours reading this, and of course a bit of brain mass
Tl;dr : overall i like it. The beginning is good but too long. Some part in the middle are not well done and boring but other part are near perfect. The universe is well built but some part are inconsistant or missing imo (partly for futur project ?), the end is completly rushed. The author is really good for writing some "sad part" of his story but more "epic situation" are needed. Teasing for futur event is too much (like "this decision may change the rest of all living being") and i think the author forgot some. Author need to better think on the balance of the story, and write the storyboard at the beginning. (Spoiler : "adopted baby", Ark with the monarch "ok good luck, we leave, bb", the end complelty rushed. You can't do that man) BUT for a first novel it's a really good start with lot of thing to improve.
its's one of the mind blowing novel I've read in a while.......... Really stimulating
Love the book but I hope there is more to his story. There are other books by this author so hopefully I see more. The author is a great writer and if it is what I think there should be more books about this universe but I hope there is more to Jason’s story that we get to read.
Good book! Really got me feeling so much for the MC, due to how invested I was. Would recommend.
I loved this novel it’s wonderful I’m just stuggling to find other works with the soulbound world setting other recom mendations are welcome
One of the first Non-System stories I’ve actually enjoyed very unique wish it was still going but all good things must come to an end 😭
I can't believe this is the first novel the author has written. Its the best novel I read till now.
after coming to the end of the novel the only thing that I wanted to know was whatever happen to Jason's adopted daughter Ann after he left, hopefully your planning to create a side story for her especially since all of your main characters seem to be male roles, it'll be interesting to see how you create a story based on a female character.
Overall this was a great novel, my only gripe is that after chapter 1000 you can tell that they knew the end was near for this novel and it seemed that it became more of an after thought vs the rest of the novels in the universe that they're writing. I will absolutely recommend this novel though even with my minor issue. Read it and enjoy!
An enjoyable read. It is clear as the book progresses that the author has a lot of good ideas but sometimes struggles to shape those ideas. It was thoroughly enjoyable. I would recommend reading this and will certainly look up his other works.
congratulations for the author. good work. interesting plot. slow progression
This is my second review and I´ve currently released about 100 chapters before I even realized it. Time passed so fast, I want to clarify a few things that might have annoyed some readers or caused them to cringe :3 The following list might also help new readers to decide whether to read the story or not. 1. My native language is not English and unfortunately, my grammar and vocabulary are not perfect [Sorry for that] It might happen that the chapters from 1-60~ have some minor plot-holes/slightly weird character development and the reason for this is quite simple. I started to write this novel without any prior writing experience and in a foreign language at that. If you can´t bear to read a few grammar mistakes and minor overall mistakes it will be quite difficult for you to binge read or follow me on my journey. 2. There were some readers that couldn´t help but lament about the MC´s cringe-worthy behavior because he is emotional… Jason is a youth, barely 14 years old, and had to endure a tuff past… character development shouldn´t be over in a single chapter, right? Furthermore, due to his young age, he might act childish sometimes, even though he is used to behave like he already matured. 3. I’m sure that the MC will not have a Harem, but most likely a future romance sub-plot. 4. My Novel´s name is [God´s Eyes] but in the end, there are also other aspects, helping him to grow stronger. 5. The world our MC lives in is labeled “High-Fantasy” for a reason, please don’t try to use normal physical laws, even though I´m trying to make it a little bit realistic. 6. The story is unique, yet slow-paced and I did my best to improve my writing quality/style and every critique previously stated, but in the end, I´m just doing it as a hobby, because it´s exciting and interesting. I gave myself 4 stars because I see that I can improve myself further and I hope everyone will give it a try :3 Thanks for reading the review <3
I find this novel fun to read and entertaining too! Currently read 100 chapters. Good points are the world building which is amazing, the skills and cultivation itself and the position beasts occupy in the world too without being just tiered walking resources. I would criticize the main character though as being too much of an idealist even after all his shtty past, which is kind of weird. He cares too much about world peace and living conditions of people he doesn't know nor should he care about. Imo it would be better if he were just cold and consider only his self gain and the safety of the people arround him. There are some minor spelling mistakes but not too relevant here and there. To sum it up, it is a great novel so if you like the genre you definitely should give it a try!
I've never wrote a review before but this one definitely deserves it. I have read 300+ chapters and just want to say what an absolute BANGER of a story. I was skeptical about it at first, and I didn't really like the info dumps that would happen constantly in the beginning. I took me a while to warm up to the story because of this. And I thought I was just going to drop the story because of how much I just didn't like the beginning. BOY, WAS I WRONG!! I can't get enough of this story. Seriously, if you are debating reading it, you need to. The writing grows so much from the beginning. The characters aren't just background but have actual personalities, which I find very rare nowadays with stories like these. There are a few arcs in here that I read in every story I find like this. Which is another reason I tend to drop these kinds of stories. But the writer does them so RIGHT I don't even care. Everything is so unique and out of the box. It's a nice breath of fresh air, this story. I know this is a long review, but I just feel like this is a hidden gem on the app. I went ahead and started reading the other stories from this author and let's just say I found a new favorite.
God’s Eyes Stopped at chapter 532 of 1115 As this novel of HideousGrain was high in the rankings, I decided to give a try to this author whom I never read before. Sadly, I was disappointed. I tried to like this novel, I really did, but its interesting premises were sapped by too many flaws that I can’t push through anymore. This tales has a fine setting at the beginning, but its latter expansions seem only to exist in order to justify the plot. The plot which appears quite chaotic with only the tiniest underlying coherence. Adding to that is the protagonist, Jason Stella, whose intelligence, maturity and personality vary on a large spectrum, depending on where the author wants to go. In fact, a number of secondary characters are better written than the MC. The power system is quite interesting, but suffers from the same coherence problem (the writer has a real problem with numbers). Finally, the writing itself is the main issue of the novel. Beyond the typos and mistaken homophones, the story is affected by filler and a very rough style. My current verdict, as of chapter 532 (a bit less than half the novel), is a 4 out of 10. I’m putting this one on hold, maybe indefinity, and it will be a while before I try another HideousGrain tale. I really hope he has improved since then. Meanwhile, I’m spend time reading other new writers, as well as those whose books I already enjoyed. Kergonan out
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first book I read completely and was sad when it ended. congratulations to the author for writing a story I had trouble putting down.
Took me a few months to finish this novel. Also took me hundreds of dollars. The story is about Jason Stella and his journey from weak to strong. The world building is immense, and the novel was unable to encompass everything the author wanted to share. I enjoyed the story, and I wanted more from the story as I felt there were at least a thousand chapters left unwritten. Hideous mention at the end of every chapter for ages that it was not rushed even if it seemed like it... but it looks like it was. It feels like it was, and I think it was. That said the novel is excellent and while I have no intention on reading the associated novels. I would recommend this one.
揭示劇透 great book, but sadly quite rushed at the end to make room for othet stories in the same multiverse. thats great and all but leaves one slightly dissatisfied.
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I've wasted precious hours reading this, and of course a bit of brain mass
Tl;dr : overall i like it. The beginning is good but too long. Some part in the middle are not well done and boring but other part are near perfect. The universe is well built but some part are inconsistant or missing imo (partly for futur project ?), the end is completly rushed. The author is really good for writing some "sad part" of his story but more "epic situation" are needed. Teasing for futur event is too much (like "this decision may change the rest of all living being") and i think the author forgot some. Author need to better think on the balance of the story, and write the storyboard at the beginning. (Spoiler : "adopted baby", Ark with the monarch "ok good luck, we leave, bb", the end complelty rushed. You can't do that man) BUT for a first novel it's a really good start with lot of thing to improve.
its's one of the mind blowing novel I've read in a while.......... Really stimulating
Love the book but I hope there is more to his story. There are other books by this author so hopefully I see more. The author is a great writer and if it is what I think there should be more books about this universe but I hope there is more to Jason’s story that we get to read.
Good book! Really got me feeling so much for the MC, due to how invested I was. Would recommend.
I loved this novel it’s wonderful I’m just stuggling to find other works with the soulbound world setting other recom mendations are welcome
One of the first Non-System stories I’ve actually enjoyed very unique wish it was still going but all good things must come to an end 😭
I can't believe this is the first novel the author has written. Its the best novel I read till now.
after coming to the end of the novel the only thing that I wanted to know was whatever happen to Jason's adopted daughter Ann after he left, hopefully your planning to create a side story for her especially since all of your main characters seem to be male roles, it'll be interesting to see how you create a story based on a female character.
Overall this was a great novel, my only gripe is that after chapter 1000 you can tell that they knew the end was near for this novel and it seemed that it became more of an after thought vs the rest of the novels in the universe that they're writing. I will absolutely recommend this novel though even with my minor issue. Read it and enjoy!
An enjoyable read. It is clear as the book progresses that the author has a lot of good ideas but sometimes struggles to shape those ideas. It was thoroughly enjoyable. I would recommend reading this and will certainly look up his other works.
congratulations for the author. good work. interesting plot. slow progression
This is my second review and I´ve currently released about 100 chapters before I even realized it. Time passed so fast, I want to clarify a few things that might have annoyed some readers or caused them to cringe :3 The following list might also help new readers to decide whether to read the story or not. 1. My native language is not English and unfortunately, my grammar and vocabulary are not perfect [Sorry for that] It might happen that the chapters from 1-60~ have some minor plot-holes/slightly weird character development and the reason for this is quite simple. I started to write this novel without any prior writing experience and in a foreign language at that. If you can´t bear to read a few grammar mistakes and minor overall mistakes it will be quite difficult for you to binge read or follow me on my journey. 2. There were some readers that couldn´t help but lament about the MC´s cringe-worthy behavior because he is emotional… Jason is a youth, barely 14 years old, and had to endure a tuff past… character development shouldn´t be over in a single chapter, right? Furthermore, due to his young age, he might act childish sometimes, even though he is used to behave like he already matured. 3. I’m sure that the MC will not have a Harem, but most likely a future romance sub-plot. 4. My Novel´s name is [God´s Eyes] but in the end, there are also other aspects, helping him to grow stronger. 5. The world our MC lives in is labeled “High-Fantasy” for a reason, please don’t try to use normal physical laws, even though I´m trying to make it a little bit realistic. 6. The story is unique, yet slow-paced and I did my best to improve my writing quality/style and every critique previously stated, but in the end, I´m just doing it as a hobby, because it´s exciting and interesting. I gave myself 4 stars because I see that I can improve myself further and I hope everyone will give it a try :3 Thanks for reading the review <3