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Man this novel is slow asf, I'm recently started the chapters, currently at chap 30 but i already felt bored.........................................
yes I am going to be late to the charger for your phone call me when you get a chance please let me know what you think
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Currently at Ch 395. It starts interesting, and we can see that the MC is overpowered, but it is constantly reinforced that it is also due to hard work. His achievements could also be replicated by others if they were as hardworking as him. But then it all falls downhill once the world building and concept of humanity is brought in. If anyone has read Martial World, this also gives a similar feeling. The sort of depressing feeling that humanity has just no hope. This is a similar story. There is no hope for the society as a whole. Spoiler: What humans treasure as Blessed Techniques are the basic techniques widespread by the foreign races. What humans think to be the foreign races experts are actually 3rd rate characters like butlers and servants. The author, despite all this, has the leisure to play around with slavery and the evilness of humans. There is no positivity in this novel. It is just plain depressing. Also, the MC is cold towards his Masters, whom he trusts, but is kind to strangers (who are likely to become enemies with him). There is also the sudden shift in mood changes of the MC and the tone of the story when talking about his soulbonds. There are some spelling and grammar mistakes. The author has tried to put in so much and so many enemies that the situation is no longer a David and Goliath but more like Sheep and Goliath. Also, now that the story is finished at 1115 chapters and the progress of his cultivation at 395, he has not even crossed through the first major step and there should be at least 5 of them .So I wonder how rushed it will be later. Major Spoilers: To give an idea of how far the story has progressed: From lowest to highest: 1. C-Grade City. 2. Capital City of Island Controlled by a Clan. 3, Mainland (which is also a side island compared to the world - think Hawaii) 4. Humanity (Multiple Clans) 5. Mainland on Planet 6. Planet is infant of lower worlds 7. Other lower worlds 8. Middle or Higher Worlds 9. Universe At 395, he is only crossed through the second and is still not reached 3rd. And there is a war looming with foreign races (which is laughable). So, now you know what to expect.
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Honestly, it's quite decent, and I love the authors attention to detail. Great idea, great execution. Top notch world building, top notch story telling. It has cliche plot devices, but the author used them properly at the earlier part of the novel. However, at chapter 300(after the mc left Astrix) the author started throwing cliches around like crazy. I kinda lost interest here. Will try to keep going and see, as this is actually a decent novel
The story started oke, I loved the character development and the overall progression. Some great side characters. However I feel like in the last 100-150 chapter everything was rushed. Side character became accessory's, and the focus of the story shifter A LOT. I feel like the author just wanted to stop writing about Jason under the pretexted that all the story's are connected.
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Really great read looking forward to the other books, I just felt it ended a little sudden or randomi guess but overall great read guys!!!
This story was amazing. I haven’t read the other stories by this author but after taking a look of his other works it’s easy to tell the he’s made a vast background to build many different and amazing books out of it all. So many good points and emotional spots that really hits the reader. But in the end I was very satisfied with the book especially the ending which is rare on Webnovel.
All in all a super good book wish you Wrote it the ending a little better
MC growth and ability feels incohesive, and the author rushes things at the end. He created a cool MC but left me wishing he took more on finishing this novel instead of writing the other ones.
So its a relitively interesting book, stuff happens and people do stuff but it is still interesting concept of soulforeging and all day nonsense
Overall, a decent novel. It would get even better if you always assume people to have a mental age half of their true age. Will help you understand why so many characters do the silliest things sometimes for no reason whatsoever
I was going to write sooooooooo much about how terrible and aggravating this novel is and how unrealistic it is which is hilarious cause it’s a fantasy world and for that to be unrealistic you need to mess up REALLY BAD with character development and plot armour and it does so I’ll point some out -mc is too kind(mother was abused and killed, mc is poor in a terrible area, literally no friends and an orphan) -mc thinks the world is sunshine and rainbows(literally the whole novel is just him in denial about how bad humans are LOL like we already experiment on other humans even without being in a fantasy world that literally makes them into lesser humans cause they’re so weak) -mc has flippin dementia(for some reason the mc will forget basic things like for example, the curse world it has three things the mc learns before going in, 1cursed beasts, 2blessed beasts, 3something for a potion that’s very valuable, and what does the mc think when he sees crowds of people trying to harvest this one flower literally putting there lives on the line for it, here’s the paragraph “if prodigies from larger families and clans were asked to pluck flowers, their worth must be enormous...but I can’t think of and extremely expensive potion one can concoct out of bloody flowers” like you flippin idiot there’s only three things and one potion in that list you moron what else could it be a brain supplement cause if it is you need one. Aaaaaaand that’s it for now I still can’t believe how far i got with veins bulging from my forehead in frustration at how annoying this mc is, like on earth it’s a boring realistic planet with the same environment the mc was born into and in some area’s worse and what do we see there are kids that are smarter and more mature then some adults and smarter like street smarts and then in a fantasy world that evolved around killing and enslaving, and his mother that was abused murdered also he was blind had no friends and was as weak as a chicken he thinks the world is sunshine and rainbows that there is no bad in the world and won’t kill anyone, and will openly tell people that I have very op eyes, and that just cause he hasn’t heard anything about it, it just doesn’t exist like transplanting special traits that when the enemy has almost god like power there is for sure a way to transplant traits and you openly tell them about yours because a disabled orphan with no power in the world hasn’t heard about transplanting traits it doesn’t exist and can’t happen
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yes yes yes and yes! amazingly done and greatly held together. although I wish to have read more of reunions with his old friends from argos.
I would like to leave a honest review after reading this book till chapter 1113. It was very interesting till Jason went to that primordial trials and came out stronger. After that I felt the chapters were not that much interesting like before. there were too many extra characters. i felt that there were too many unnecessary chapters. Overall it is a good book to read.
this is a book I really enjoyed and it kept me awake late into the night on main base and as well as help me pass away some boring periods. it is a good book and a wonderful read and I carried you to also weed
minor spoilers only. the beginning of the story was amazing and actually left me feeling real emotion for the character. once Jason leaves Argos, the story rapidly declines. the last several chapters were extremely dull. it's just constant 100 year time skips with no real relevance other than Jason getting stronger. the author says that it's rushed in order to form a multiverse, however none of the authors other novels are developed to the point where it was required. the characters from the other novels were also unnecessary for the story as they didn't contribute anything. I would have loved if the story was another 2000 chapters, the super beast that was so scary on argos that the war had to stop was never brought up. a reunion with Greg would have been great. he adopted a girl to never see her again. it does leave me concerned about the other novels by this author I'm currently reading. hopefully they don't drop in quality and carry out for a few thousand chapters instead of just one thousand
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just started but I'm becoming more and more addicted to it😅😅 all in all this story is sick i recommend that you read it even though I haven't finished it yet but from what i know i can't get take my eyes from it😁
This novel is one of the best have read so far. it is a novel with a good story line and you get to see the protagonist grow through his challenge. Seeing him mature is very exciting in the course of the novel
Author keeps giving spoilers for what will happen next. Why would any sane person do that? It ruins the reading experience and immersion! Something like "Jason went to the bath. What he didn't not know, is that he will die a horrible death tomorrow! Also, Dumbledore dies!". Almost every chapter ends like this where I'm currently reading. Do not reveal information that we should not know, it's as simple as that! There are many better ways to give reader a hint, than throwing spoilers in their faces. A great story other than that.
Pretty good. A little wordy on the descriptions at times. Something that could be described in 1 paragraph takes 10. My big complaint is that the MC makes a lot of dumb decisions. They always work out because of plot armor but it's really frustrating at times. I'm probably about 100 chapters in and his eyes barely come into play. They're useful here and there but not to a degree that I'd call them god eyes. They probably get better later though
I love this book but I hate that it ended here. I would have loved to continue reading more. I have been intrigued since the very beginning. I wasn’t expecting it to end this way.
It’ amazing but you should give more detail on how things look ( like the wing stigma on his eye, how and we’r is located maybe give some pics to that would help and mak it cheaper to read! Please!!!
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揭示劇透 I found this series and fell in love with the world and it’s characters! One of the best cultivation series I’ve read and highly recommend for someone looking for their next pleasure or binge read!!
great story with a good world development throughout. there a lot of untapped potential in it as there are some characters that were left behind that left a lot of question marks
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congratulations for the author. good work. interesting plot. slow progression
Man this novel is slow asf, I'm recently started the chapters, currently at chap 30 but i already felt bored.........................................
yes I am going to be late to the charger for your phone call me when you get a chance please let me know what you think
揭示劇透 Currently at Ch 395. It starts interesting, and we can see that the MC is overpowered, but it is constantly reinforced that it is also due to hard work. His achievements could also be replicated by others if they were as hardworking as him. But then it all falls downhill once the world building and concept of humanity is brought in. If anyone has read Martial World, this also gives a similar feeling. The sort of depressing feeling that humanity has just no hope. This is a similar story. There is no hope for the society as a whole. Spoiler: What humans treasure as Blessed Techniques are the basic techniques widespread by the foreign races. What humans think to be the foreign races experts are actually 3rd rate characters like butlers and servants. The author, despite all this, has the leisure to play around with slavery and the evilness of humans. There is no positivity in this novel. It is just plain depressing. Also, the MC is cold towards his Masters, whom he trusts, but is kind to strangers (who are likely to become enemies with him). There is also the sudden shift in mood changes of the MC and the tone of the story when talking about his soulbonds. There are some spelling and grammar mistakes. The author has tried to put in so much and so many enemies that the situation is no longer a David and Goliath but more like Sheep and Goliath. Also, now that the story is finished at 1115 chapters and the progress of his cultivation at 395, he has not even crossed through the first major step and there should be at least 5 of them .So I wonder how rushed it will be later. Major Spoilers: To give an idea of how far the story has progressed: From lowest to highest: 1. C-Grade City. 2. Capital City of Island Controlled by a Clan. 3, Mainland (which is also a side island compared to the world - think Hawaii) 4. Humanity (Multiple Clans) 5. Mainland on Planet 6. Planet is infant of lower worlds 7. Other lower worlds 8. Middle or Higher Worlds 9. Universe At 395, he is only crossed through the second and is still not reached 3rd. And there is a war looming with foreign races (which is laughable). So, now you know what to expect.
揭示劇透 Honestly, it's quite decent, and I love the authors attention to detail. Great idea, great execution. Top notch world building, top notch story telling. It has cliche plot devices, but the author used them properly at the earlier part of the novel. However, at chapter 300(after the mc left Astrix) the author started throwing cliches around like crazy. I kinda lost interest here. Will try to keep going and see, as this is actually a decent novel
The story started oke, I loved the character development and the overall progression. Some great side characters. However I feel like in the last 100-150 chapter everything was rushed. Side character became accessory's, and the focus of the story shifter A LOT. I feel like the author just wanted to stop writing about Jason under the pretexted that all the story's are connected.
揭示劇透 Really great read looking forward to the other books, I just felt it ended a little sudden or randomi guess but overall great read guys!!!
This story was amazing. I haven’t read the other stories by this author but after taking a look of his other works it’s easy to tell the he’s made a vast background to build many different and amazing books out of it all. So many good points and emotional spots that really hits the reader. But in the end I was very satisfied with the book especially the ending which is rare on Webnovel.
All in all a super good book wish you Wrote it the ending a little better
MC growth and ability feels incohesive, and the author rushes things at the end. He created a cool MC but left me wishing he took more on finishing this novel instead of writing the other ones.
So its a relitively interesting book, stuff happens and people do stuff but it is still interesting concept of soulforeging and all day nonsense
Overall, a decent novel. It would get even better if you always assume people to have a mental age half of their true age. Will help you understand why so many characters do the silliest things sometimes for no reason whatsoever
I was going to write sooooooooo much about how terrible and aggravating this novel is and how unrealistic it is which is hilarious cause it’s a fantasy world and for that to be unrealistic you need to mess up REALLY BAD with character development and plot armour and it does so I’ll point some out -mc is too kind(mother was abused and killed, mc is poor in a terrible area, literally no friends and an orphan) -mc thinks the world is sunshine and rainbows(literally the whole novel is just him in denial about how bad humans are LOL like we already experiment on other humans even without being in a fantasy world that literally makes them into lesser humans cause they’re so weak) -mc has flippin dementia(for some reason the mc will forget basic things like for example, the curse world it has three things the mc learns before going in, 1cursed beasts, 2blessed beasts, 3something for a potion that’s very valuable, and what does the mc think when he sees crowds of people trying to harvest this one flower literally putting there lives on the line for it, here’s the paragraph “if prodigies from larger families and clans were asked to pluck flowers, their worth must be enormous...but I can’t think of and extremely expensive potion one can concoct out of bloody flowers” like you flippin idiot there’s only three things and one potion in that list you moron what else could it be a brain supplement cause if it is you need one. Aaaaaaand that’s it for now I still can’t believe how far i got with veins bulging from my forehead in frustration at how annoying this mc is, like on earth it’s a boring realistic planet with the same environment the mc was born into and in some area’s worse and what do we see there are kids that are smarter and more mature then some adults and smarter like street smarts and then in a fantasy world that evolved around killing and enslaving, and his mother that was abused murdered also he was blind had no friends and was as weak as a chicken he thinks the world is sunshine and rainbows that there is no bad in the world and won’t kill anyone, and will openly tell people that I have very op eyes, and that just cause he hasn’t heard anything about it, it just doesn’t exist like transplanting special traits that when the enemy has almost god like power there is for sure a way to transplant traits and you openly tell them about yours because a disabled orphan with no power in the world hasn’t heard about transplanting traits it doesn’t exist and can’t happen
揭示劇透 yes yes yes and yes! amazingly done and greatly held together. although I wish to have read more of reunions with his old friends from argos.
I would like to leave a honest review after reading this book till chapter 1113. It was very interesting till Jason went to that primordial trials and came out stronger. After that I felt the chapters were not that much interesting like before. there were too many extra characters. i felt that there were too many unnecessary chapters. Overall it is a good book to read.
this is a book I really enjoyed and it kept me awake late into the night on main base and as well as help me pass away some boring periods. it is a good book and a wonderful read and I carried you to also weed
minor spoilers only. the beginning of the story was amazing and actually left me feeling real emotion for the character. once Jason leaves Argos, the story rapidly declines. the last several chapters were extremely dull. it's just constant 100 year time skips with no real relevance other than Jason getting stronger. the author says that it's rushed in order to form a multiverse, however none of the authors other novels are developed to the point where it was required. the characters from the other novels were also unnecessary for the story as they didn't contribute anything. I would have loved if the story was another 2000 chapters, the super beast that was so scary on argos that the war had to stop was never brought up. a reunion with Greg would have been great. he adopted a girl to never see her again. it does leave me concerned about the other novels by this author I'm currently reading. hopefully they don't drop in quality and carry out for a few thousand chapters instead of just one thousand
揭示劇透 just started but I'm becoming more and more addicted to it😅😅 all in all this story is sick i recommend that you read it even though I haven't finished it yet but from what i know i can't get take my eyes from it😁
This novel is one of the best have read so far. it is a novel with a good story line and you get to see the protagonist grow through his challenge. Seeing him mature is very exciting in the course of the novel
Author keeps giving spoilers for what will happen next. Why would any sane person do that? It ruins the reading experience and immersion! Something like "Jason went to the bath. What he didn't not know, is that he will die a horrible death tomorrow! Also, Dumbledore dies!". Almost every chapter ends like this where I'm currently reading. Do not reveal information that we should not know, it's as simple as that! There are many better ways to give reader a hint, than throwing spoilers in their faces. A great story other than that.
Pretty good. A little wordy on the descriptions at times. Something that could be described in 1 paragraph takes 10. My big complaint is that the MC makes a lot of dumb decisions. They always work out because of plot armor but it's really frustrating at times. I'm probably about 100 chapters in and his eyes barely come into play. They're useful here and there but not to a degree that I'd call them god eyes. They probably get better later though
I love this book but I hate that it ended here. I would have loved to continue reading more. I have been intrigued since the very beginning. I wasn’t expecting it to end this way.
It’ amazing but you should give more detail on how things look ( like the wing stigma on his eye, how and we’r is located maybe give some pics to that would help and mak it cheaper to read! Please!!!
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揭示劇透 I found this series and fell in love with the world and it’s characters! One of the best cultivation series I’ve read and highly recommend for someone looking for their next pleasure or binge read!!
great story with a good world development throughout. there a lot of untapped potential in it as there are some characters that were left behind that left a lot of question marks
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congratulations for the author. good work. interesting plot. slow progression