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Just the title alone is interesting and I'm expecting lots of incredible moments in this one. The book may lack chaps as of the moment, making the world background and story progression somewhat unclear, but I'm confident enough to say that this book will end up great, considering the author's skill with his craft. I'll leave this here to tell future readers not to miss this one.
This is really cool, there's a lot of detailed execution with your paragraphs. It is slow-paced but I can see that it has a lot of potential. Great Job!
Interesting piece of right... I'm greatly interested in Ellereig's character... a leader with a frightening demeanor😂 Great work author, definitely great. Just a lil work on the English needed.
I love everything but you just need to work on structuring! Overall, very good story that only need to fix small things. Great job Author! Also, maybe make your synopsis better because its definitely not showing how great ur plot will be 😉💓
nice story line. I hope u will work on synopsis. The catchy the synopsis , more will be the readers. just write consistently ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
I really do love the beginning of the story, especially the names of the characters Felix and Justin, it's definitely a must read book. I'm hooked and I'll be waiting for the next chapter. I'll give 5 stars for the brilliant job done by the author
I love the story! With the superb author who is really, you guys should really check this out. Go bhieee. Ikaw first friend ko dito HAHAHAHAHA
The chapters lead me here but after reading the story, I can't seem to stop slacking off my work and just read it. Good work, Author! I can imagine the hard works you've pulled to go this far.
Just the title alone is interesting and I'm expecting lots of incredible moments in this one. The book may lack chaps as of the moment, making the world background and story progression somewhat unclear, but I'm confident enough to say that this book will end up great, considering the author's skill with his craft. I'll leave this here to tell future readers not to miss this one.
This is really cool, there's a lot of detailed execution with your paragraphs. It is slow-paced but I can see that it has a lot of potential. Great Job!
Interesting piece of right... I'm greatly interested in Ellereig's character... a leader with a frightening demeanor😂 Great work author, definitely great. Just a lil work on the English needed.
I love everything but you just need to work on structuring! Overall, very good story that only need to fix small things. Great job Author! Also, maybe make your synopsis better because its definitely not showing how great ur plot will be 😉💓
nice story line. I hope u will work on synopsis. The catchy the synopsis , more will be the readers. just write consistently ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
I really do love the beginning of the story, especially the names of the characters Felix and Justin, it's definitely a must read book. I'm hooked and I'll be waiting for the next chapter. I'll give 5 stars for the brilliant job done by the author
I love the story! With the superb author who is really, you guys should really check this out. Go bhieee. Ikaw first friend ko dito HAHAHAHAHA
The chapters lead me here but after reading the story, I can't seem to stop slacking off my work and just read it. Good work, Author! I can imagine the hard works you've pulled to go this far.