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honestly I love the book got to love and giving someone like tenten a spotlight unlike most people who just has her as a background character gave me a type of enjoyment. Author-san you did a great job would love to see more stuff you write and if you continue the book by a long run
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One thing about this fanfic it is very good the only bad thing is the pace at which the character grows reaches a ridiculous point the speed at which he increases his strength
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Отличная новелла но выход глав ужасен, приходится ждать главы месяцами, я считаю что либо нужно закончивать дела которые ты начал либо нужно объявить что ты забросил и больше глав не будет
(русский) очень интересно, если коротко есть мелкие минусы но в основном они относятся к нарушению законов канона, а так эта новелла (9/10) почему 9? Я все понимаю но редкость выхода глав все равно удручает
no tengo nada que decir haci que.. ¡¡¡Cuacua vaka naka chaca draka baka chaca ma Mara mara sharimo guachi merro marrou mo Guachi gachi merora Guaxu mar gero sha Jechu mere marica sha dimari mari mero wa!!!
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Absolutely love it! Giving Tenten some love and power made it even better, Have a good break and enjoy your time with your family!
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definitely love it!!! its a different approach compared to other books and also not cliche!!! need more chps pliz upload more!!! .....................................
nice work and specially a fic who erase danzo early in the story and did not follow the canon and let sasuke deal with him, great job nice work and specially a fic who erase danzo early in the story and did not follow the canon and let sasuke deal with him, great job
This is well-written fanfic compared to the others on this site. The development of the character is reasonable and nothing quite outlandish. Except he has a bloodline from an Uzamaki(what a surprise). I have no major issues except with the main character. I assume the author is going for the symbolism of him being a dog or a comparison of him being a dog. Good to the owner, bad to enemies. Owner: Konoha. It just that it comes off as cringe most of the time with his dialogue and the excuse I give it is that it's Naruto and friendship is everything. The Chunin Exam scene of him beating down Konkuro was kinda dumb but ok because of his personality. The reason for it was quite stupid. Dog thoughts: She hurt my girl in a match that can lead to death and major injury. Must bite her family member instead. I dropped it after that its good story I am not all for killing and ***. I like kind main characters but there is a limit
es la mejor historia que he leído en lo que llevo en esta plataforma,sigue haci escritor-sensei y ah continuación,palabras al azar para completar los 140 caracteres: ¿sabias que el mejor manga que eh leido hasta ahora es the god of high scool? se los recomiendo, es muy bueno,les garantizo horas (o minutos, dependiendo de que tan rapido lean) de batallas entretenidas... y aunque, no es de los mejores mangas en cuanto argumento se habla, si creo que es bastante bueno...
🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️just perfect dude, you sure won't regret reading ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
Not much to say other than it is a good book to read and is very easy to enjoy. Despite not having any op system or family background it works really well
First and foremost its a great fan-fiction, but I have lost the drive to continue due to its predictable outcome...why?...2 comparisons.. 1 Naruto/fox/wind/Toad-sage/Hinata...the end 2 MC/turtle/water/Wolf-sage/Tenten...the end The only thing that could have broken this would be something like a Harem but most would hate that, witch I understand. Its just that the story has lost that something that keeps you coming back for more..anyway good story and good luck!
Salami alaykom I hope you are healthy I just want to thank you for this adorable book It's a great novel I liked very much Your are good at writing And your imagination is so amazing Big Love from Morocco Keep going bro Salam💪💪
I loVe it keep it coming or else i wil hunt you down😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😛😋😝😋😚😝😝😋😋😝😋😋😝😝😝😋😛😝😛😋😋😝😛😋😋😘😝😋
A great story. MC is an Inuzuka/Uzumaki with a wolf companion beast who excels at water jutsus. although there is a system, its more of a status board.
The author is doing a good job. Personally, I've no complaints, maybe due to the fact that 99% of the works on this website is total bs. Hope that someday you'll write a good GoT story.
guys who is the female lead, please tell me its KAGUYA?.....................................................................................
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Plese update more chapter.. ..This is what i want to read. . Not so op but genius oc and good nature as that. .. To bad that he is not with ino or hinata but i guess tenten is good too. .. .
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The story has a gary stu type of mc where he could do no wrong and is always an upright outstanding citizen of konoha that embodies the will of fire propaganda BS. The setting is underdeveloped, the fight scenes feels illogical and underwhelming. Some plot points feels forced. The story is good to pass the time and doesn't require braincells to understand. quite barebones
honestly I love the book got to love and giving someone like tenten a spotlight unlike most people who just has her as a background character gave me a type of enjoyment. Author-san you did a great job would love to see more stuff you write and if you continue the book by a long run
揭示劇透 One thing about this fanfic it is very good the only bad thing is the pace at which the character grows reaches a ridiculous point the speed at which he increases his strength
Great story please update :) ………Great story please update :) ………Great story please update :) ………Great story please update :) ………Great story please update :) ………
UPDATE ! MORE ! UPDATE ! MORE !UPDATE ! MORE !UPDATE ! MORE !UPDATE ! MORE !UPDATE ! MORE !UPDATE ! MORE !UPDATE ! MORE !UPDATE ! MORE !UPDATE ! MORE !UPDATE ! MORE !UPDATE ! MORE !UPDATE ! MORE !UPDATE ! MORE !UPDATE ! MORE !UPDATE ! MORE !UPDATE ! MORE !UPDATE ! MORE !
-laziness-talk no jutsu--laziness-talk no jutsu--laziness-talk no jutsu--laziness-talk no jutsu--laziness-talk no jutsu--laziness-talk no jutsu--laziness-talk no jutsu--laziness-talk no jutsu--laziness-talk no jutsu--laziness-talk no jutsu--laziness-talk no jutsu--laziness-talk no jutsu--laziness-talk no jutsu--laziness-talk no jutsu--laziness-talk no jutsu--laziness-talk no jutsu--laziness-talk no jutsu--laziness-talk no jutsu--laziness-talk no jutsu--laziness-talk no jutsu--laziness-talk no jutsu--laziness-talk no jutsu--laziness-talk no jutsu-
Отличная новелла но выход глав ужасен, приходится ждать главы месяцами, я считаю что либо нужно закончивать дела которые ты начал либо нужно объявить что ты забросил и больше глав не будет
(русский) очень интересно, если коротко есть мелкие минусы но в основном они относятся к нарушению законов канона, а так эта новелла (9/10) почему 9? Я все понимаю но редкость выхода глав все равно удручает
no tengo nada que decir haci que.. ¡¡¡Cuacua vaka naka chaca draka baka chaca ma Mara mara sharimo guachi merro marrou mo Guachi gachi merora Guaxu mar gero sha Jechu mere marica sha dimari mari mero wa!!!
揭示劇透 Exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp........... ............................................................. ...................................................
Absolutely love it! Giving Tenten some love and power made it even better, Have a good break and enjoy your time with your family!
揭示劇透 definitely love it!!! its a different approach compared to other books and also not cliche!!! need more chps pliz upload more!!! .....................................
nice work and specially a fic who erase danzo early in the story and did not follow the canon and let sasuke deal with him, great job nice work and specially a fic who erase danzo early in the story and did not follow the canon and let sasuke deal with him, great job
This is well-written fanfic compared to the others on this site. The development of the character is reasonable and nothing quite outlandish. Except he has a bloodline from an Uzamaki(what a surprise). I have no major issues except with the main character. I assume the author is going for the symbolism of him being a dog or a comparison of him being a dog. Good to the owner, bad to enemies. Owner: Konoha. It just that it comes off as cringe most of the time with his dialogue and the excuse I give it is that it's Naruto and friendship is everything. The Chunin Exam scene of him beating down Konkuro was kinda dumb but ok because of his personality. The reason for it was quite stupid. Dog thoughts: She hurt my girl in a match that can lead to death and major injury. Must bite her family member instead. I dropped it after that its good story I am not all for killing and ***. I like kind main characters but there is a limit
es la mejor historia que he leído en lo que llevo en esta plataforma,sigue haci escritor-sensei y ah continuación,palabras al azar para completar los 140 caracteres: ¿sabias que el mejor manga que eh leido hasta ahora es the god of high scool? se los recomiendo, es muy bueno,les garantizo horas (o minutos, dependiendo de que tan rapido lean) de batallas entretenidas... y aunque, no es de los mejores mangas en cuanto argumento se habla, si creo que es bastante bueno...
🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️just perfect dude, you sure won't regret reading ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
Not much to say other than it is a good book to read and is very easy to enjoy. Despite not having any op system or family background it works really well
First and foremost its a great fan-fiction, but I have lost the drive to continue due to its predictable outcome...why?...2 comparisons.. 1 Naruto/fox/wind/Toad-sage/Hinata...the end 2 MC/turtle/water/Wolf-sage/Tenten...the end The only thing that could have broken this would be something like a Harem but most would hate that, witch I understand. Its just that the story has lost that something that keeps you coming back for more..anyway good story and good luck!
Salami alaykom I hope you are healthy I just want to thank you for this adorable book It's a great novel I liked very much Your are good at writing And your imagination is so amazing Big Love from Morocco Keep going bro Salam💪💪
I loVe it keep it coming or else i wil hunt you down😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😛😋😝😋😚😝😝😋😋😝😋😋😝😝😝😋😛😝😛😋😋😝😛😋😋😘😝😋
A great story. MC is an Inuzuka/Uzumaki with a wolf companion beast who excels at water jutsus. although there is a system, its more of a status board.
The author is doing a good job. Personally, I've no complaints, maybe due to the fact that 99% of the works on this website is total bs. Hope that someday you'll write a good GoT story.
guys who is the female lead, please tell me its KAGUYA?.....................................................................................
👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Plese update more chapter.. ..This is what i want to read. . Not so op but genius oc and good nature as that. .. To bad that he is not with ino or hinata but i guess tenten is good too. .. .
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The story has a gary stu type of mc where he could do no wrong and is always an upright outstanding citizen of konoha that embodies the will of fire propaganda BS. The setting is underdeveloped, the fight scenes feels illogical and underwhelming. Some plot points feels forced. The story is good to pass the time and doesn't require braincells to understand. quite barebones