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isn't a bad story but I not a fan of the coward type MC who thinks someone who runs away will ever make it far in one piece, Roger never ran away from battles and ppl may consider it dumb but in the world of one piece it isn't dumb , all those battles progressed Rogers haki to crazy degree and enabled him to conquer the sea , only does who show will and ambition that surpasses all else can manifest conquers haki , in the world of one piece if aren't willing to put your life on the line , they should just stay east blue or pray to get a God devil fruit
Nice story, can’t wait to read the next chapters :) I love how Ace’s personality is not as perfect as in others. He’s got flaws that could make him despicable and still likable.
I've read the whole chapters like 2 times already. Its good but I think its dropped hopefully author san can continue Full stars if it continue updating
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really really good while it lasted......................................................................................................................................
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This is one of the best fics that I've read. Ace has always been my favorite character and I always thought that he died off too soon. I've been searching for a good ace story for a long time time and this is one of the few good ones that I've actually found.
just another great story that ended suddenly and without even so much as an explanation
Is this dropped ? I wanted to read it cuz all the review seems to be cool, but i saw the last chapter is posted 5 month ago. So sad all the good fanfiction are dropped, the trash ones always continue.
eu amei essa historia ainda nao terminei mais estou quase se alguem tiver uma historia semelhante porfavor me avise e claro que eu prefiro o original mais esse e diferenciado eu me sinto aliviada que o autor nao tente fazer ele occ
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I really like the story, the MC's charecter especially how he appears to be an absolute pessimistic survivalist at first but quirks show up in his dark facade I really hope you will update it
another good novel that was dropped .............................................................,....................................................
Its good. Please Continue. Its good. Please Continue. Its good. Please Continue. Its good. Please Continue. Its good. Please Continue. Its good. Please Continue.
Обновления не стабильны..........................................................................а так все нормально..................................
Grammatical errors here and there but not a major issue. Love the concept, Love the development of the MC. Wishing for more stories of this caliber!
Good!!! More chapter please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please !!!
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Any romance?? 1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17 ,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90,91,92,93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100,101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121,122,123,124,125,126,127,128,129,130,131,132,133,134,135,136,137,138,139,140
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Really enjoying it so far. Hope author will pick it up again. lllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll
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Maybe you can give ace merge-merge fruit so that he can get multiple devil fruit. ...But that will make him op[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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absolutely love this book!!! the development is also amazing!!! one of the best book i've read!!! pliz keep writing!!! pliz update frequently!!!
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Why you drop it its a good fanfic, please update more chapters!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
isn't a bad story but I not a fan of the coward type MC who thinks someone who runs away will ever make it far in one piece, Roger never ran away from battles and ppl may consider it dumb but in the world of one piece it isn't dumb , all those battles progressed Rogers haki to crazy degree and enabled him to conquer the sea , only does who show will and ambition that surpasses all else can manifest conquers haki , in the world of one piece if aren't willing to put your life on the line , they should just stay east blue or pray to get a God devil fruit
Nice story, can’t wait to read the next chapters :) I love how Ace’s personality is not as perfect as in others. He’s got flaws that could make him despicable and still likable.
I've read the whole chapters like 2 times already. Its good but I think its dropped hopefully author san can continue Full stars if it continue updating
how's your son/daughter author? [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
really really good while it lasted......................................................................................................................................
Did you drop it??[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
This is one of the best fics that I've read. Ace has always been my favorite character and I always thought that he died off too soon. I've been searching for a good ace story for a long time time and this is one of the few good ones that I've actually found.
just another great story that ended suddenly and without even so much as an explanation
Is this dropped ? I wanted to read it cuz all the review seems to be cool, but i saw the last chapter is posted 5 month ago. So sad all the good fanfiction are dropped, the trash ones always continue.
eu amei essa historia ainda nao terminei mais estou quase se alguem tiver uma historia semelhante porfavor me avise e claro que eu prefiro o original mais esse e diferenciado eu me sinto aliviada que o autor nao tente fazer ele occ
揭示劇透 I really like the story, the MC's charecter especially how he appears to be an absolute pessimistic survivalist at first but quirks show up in his dark facade I really hope you will update it
another good novel that was dropped .............................................................,....................................................
Its good. Please Continue. Its good. Please Continue. Its good. Please Continue. Its good. Please Continue. Its good. Please Continue. Its good. Please Continue.
Обновления не стабильны..........................................................................а так все нормально..................................
Grammatical errors here and there but not a major issue. Love the concept, Love the development of the MC. Wishing for more stories of this caliber!
Good!!! More chapter please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please !!!
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Any romance?? 1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17 ,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90,91,92,93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100,101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121,122,123,124,125,126,127,128,129,130,131,132,133,134,135,136,137,138,139,140
goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
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Really enjoying it so far. Hope author will pick it up again. lllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll
gggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd
Maybe you can give ace merge-merge fruit so that he can get multiple devil fruit. ...But that will make him op[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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absolutely love this book!!! the development is also amazing!!! one of the best book i've read!!! pliz keep writing!!! pliz update frequently!!!
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Why you drop it its a good fanfic, please update more chapters!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!