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Dying in his first world, full of regret, asking the world why did he have to die. He had everything figured out. He didn't want to die...
But while he was dying he couldn't help but think that the only thing that he wanted was a second chance... that was all. In his next life, he will live the life that he wanted.
But it seems like at the same time he is born in a world not his own... but one he is familiar with... as someone he is very familiar with...
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Since HolyJoker likes it, I guess it will be good. One-piece settings and being reborn as Ace. Dunno what's gonna happen, since it has only 1 chapter. Wish you luck, dude!
AUTHOR HERE!!! This is my first story ever, hope you guys like it. Also English is not my first language. I have had this idea in my head and with medical school lately being so... I thought why not. I wanted to upload it in another account which I have had for longer but I forgot the password to that email so I opened a new webnovel account. Hope you like it.
So far the novel is good, the MC seems ok, not dumb as most of one piece fanfic mc's. I can say this about this novel, if the author remains constant or improves on the mc character and those around him, the novel could be really successful. **. Author an advice from a reader, don't mess with the harem genre, if you choose to go also with romance theme sure go for it but pick 1-2 chicks, don't create a soccer team and than mess-up all your work. All in all, keep up the good work.
I love this story surprised that no one has done it before. thank you for the wonderful story😀 and happy thanksgiving 🦃
Really nice story. Your grammar is great and your story has so much potential. I just want to ask you the author to keep writing and update regularly. That is the most important. I log in daily looking for chapters and I would love to keep reading this story for many days/months to come!! hehe What I am hoping for: hardworker MC, gradual strength gain, no canon rehash, making his own crew, no goro goro no mi for the Mc(there are too many MC with this devil fruit... give him to ond of his crewmates), creative uses of DF, no waifu catching like they're pokemons and get cool devil fruits for his crewmates... PD: If you make an unpopular decision and people flame you, just ignore them. Even though the people in this site are really basic, they would hate on you of you write beta MC, bisexual/gay MC, bisexual/lesbian partners, NTR and an promiscous female partner🙃🙃
First time reading a fanfic of MC being ACE. Have high expectations.😁🤞 Till now story is going excellent 😄. Good Luck and please don't drop the story 👍.
This is good. Its got short chapters bur it seems Like author udates daily ao its okay.😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😉😇😇😇😇
You know it a great story when holyjoker give it a good review, so let give it a try so gl⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
absolutely love this book!!! the development is also amazing!!! one of the best book i've read!!! pliz keep writing!!! pliz update frequently!!!
perfection in all things, from the depth of the characters, their relationships, plot and so on. If I had more money I would go to your patreon to give more support to your story, as it is one of the best fanfics and the best about one piece
So far seems pretty good. The author has a VERY similar style of writing like "HolyJoker", plus he himself reads this book. To me this fanfic deserves the prefect 5 star rating. Writing Quality- I didn't see any visible mistakes, everything was very clean and easy to read. Stability of Updates- So far it's 1-2 per day. Story Development- Smooth transitioning between scenes. Character Design- A SI Ace. Everything seems to go his way and usually I don't like that, but you have such a similar "HolyJoker" writing style that it seems to fit. (Basically "HolyJoker's" fanfics are popular because of his very smooth writing style, you have a very similar writing. Also they are popular for many other reasons also.) World Background- It's One Piece. Do I have to say more? (Alright if that wasn't enough. Here. So this story shows the charm of One Piece. I don't know how to explain it. Just watch One piece or read the manga.) Also Author if you read this, HAREM SECT FOR THE WIN. (Or act like Yami from HolyJoker's Naruto fanfic.)
Writing Quality 5/5 Stability of Updates 5/5 Story Development 4/5 Character Design 4/5 World Background 5/5 [img=recommend][img=exp][img=recommend]
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Good grammar and I really like the story direction so far. Mc seems to use his head and think before doing stuff and he isn’t a psychotic killer or a pathetic wuss that just follows the main crew. Can’t wait for more and to see where you take it, and I don’t even watch one piece
HolyJoker like it selfish mc thats 5 star in my book btw don't change his personality, and hopefully no power of friendship. and will there be any romance?? just no harem please. ............................
i love TIGERS ❤❤❤ i love your writing style and i like Ace's personality. plzz author ... add yoruichi from BLEACH in his crew 😂😂❤ (devil fruit: thunder cat or something) (she's strong + she can gather information + she's the best) plzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzz
More chapter please! ! ! ! ! ! ! More chapter please! ! ! ! ! ! ! More chapter please! ! ! ! ! ! ! More chapter please! ! ! ! ! ! ! ????????
Like the story overall, and especially with what I know that will go on in the future. I wish you success friend. Or I guess fellow author now.🤣🤣🤣🤣