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it's good even though it's dropped, and I don't understand why other people don't like it, I mean can't you guys appreciate other people's work? , even if you don't like it
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It was good while it lasted, sadly all things must come to a end and like life this fanfic also was dropped sadly :( but I still recommend this to people because no matter what people say it was actually good.
I’m glad this is back I really enjoy it . Thank you for putting it back up Ssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssdddddddddddd
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YAYY!!!!!! IT'S BACK!!!!! IT'S BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IT'S BACK MOTHERF*CKER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IT'S BACK!!!!!!!!!! . . . .
Lolllololololllololololllll why did you delete the chapter I want to se how bad they were lolololol😎[img=fp] T R S H
author what happened why did you delete this plsss comeback!!!I like this novel!!!!NO WE YOUR FANS LIKE IT SO PLSS COMEBACK!!!!!!!FUCK THOSE WHO SAID BAD ABOUT THIS FIC JUST PLSS CONTINUE THIS AND COMEBACK
Bruh what happened? Why did you delete them? ! ₱ *! *! */*-*/"/" - #! #/#-"! #! (-#-#-#/" - #-#/#/#(#-/##-/#-#! #/#-#! #/#-#-#/#//#/#/#/#/#/#
A book for the brain dead buns,trash,waste of time, save your remaining brain cells, known to cause aggressive autism I have two pieces of advice for author never pick up the pen again if this is all you can think up
if you complain that he has white hair, friend .-. It's arslan in got what do you expect from ARSLAN haha by the way, will the novel have some kind of romance? [img = palmada]
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I've read many fanfics since 2016, and i must tell you i've never seen a trash like that. Author what have you thinked yes the isekai story is a shit but make it OP like 'i living in a anime with my fucking smartphone' ? Fuck this shit i'm out.
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So when I first started reading this the story was good but the writing quality was pretty bad. But and this is a big but, the author is constantly improving and responds to constructive criticism and input from readers very well. It honestly makes reading it more fun because it makes you feel like your part of the creative process. All in all I hope the author keep going this way and that everyone gives it a chance, you might enjoy it as much as I do.
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Wishfullfilment, and not even a God one. There is OP and there is God playing Godzilla in his Sandbox-Kingdom. This is the later. Even World background is more than stupid, which is actually quite hard to do for a fanfiction, because the whole world is already there, ready to be used. I mean what kind of logic is it to give every dead soul a universe in case the dead person is not as moronic as the MC of this story, a number of multiverses to ruin and destroy. Even if you are so far above all powerful that you don't need to care about trillions of supergods running amok and destroying you creations, why would you do it. There is no entertainment in repeating the same thing trillions of times. Year MC is literally a T-Rex in a chicken farm, but his choices are beyond moronic. Example: Choose limitless Magic, All-knowing and True Immortality, and you are better than MC while still having 4 wishes left. All knowing entity:"You thought things trough, I am impressed", my ass. A 5 year old could do better. Argggg, don't think about stupid, don't review stupid, just leave it.
One of better game of thrones fanfiction out there. The witcher elementa were added beautifully. Mc has strong and decisive character, which is good. Updating stability is good till now, further is yet to be seen.
Very good book you should read it it's a good book so read it read it read it I ordered the to read it or don't it's your own life read read
this is amazing and don't mind the reviews of a star read up to the 5th chapter and then thank me lololollolololololoololololloolololololollolololololololollololl
Good Story. OC and OP character in game of thrones world with some of Witcher elements. Not a harem until now. Fast updates and fast story progress. Good read.
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Arryn should have light blond but whatever haters says cause this is great stories! GOT with monsters spice? You make good move there! Keep it up and kick all the hates!
Great story! . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
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Well, I am bad at describing something ( especially in most cases ) but this is a hidden game of AGOT novels ( for me, and don’t know about others.) Stability of updates from 1 to 2 chapters every day ( thanks for your hard work Author) Arslan as a character is may show off his knowledge like speaking at 2 months like an ***** , but I will say it more like a prodigious monster he is ( if we count his wishes than this is more appropriate than try to be like a child ) And to describe how good it is you just need a few sentence Who subdues an army of freaking monsters by his sheer f*cking will ( and wish power)? Who created a badass order of immortal Witcher’s and turned Vale into filthy rich and safe land of Westeros? Because of whom many lords want to marry their daughter to lord of the vale? And finally, who went into Valyrian and became filthy rich ( and I mean he can use good dragons to sleep on them, turn entire falcon throne room made of gold and then build a few golden towers in Eerie made of pure gold. Yes, that’s our Boi Arlsan, first of his name Lord paramount of Mountain and Vale, monster hunter, white haired knight in shiny armour who saves villages and people from death. All in all to summarize: Stability of updates: IDEAL Writing quality: good, don’t know if author uses grammarrly but it is good for me at least ( just some mistakes like Valeria instead of Valyria ) but I came for the plot so good. Background 5 cause it’s agot with some AU but I like it. Character 4 cause he is white haired anime boi, but I feel we need to see more of development of Arslan, to see some personality changes in more details to show than under the hardship of rulership he is changing into more calculative and cunning man( cause it feels like he was born to rule with his abilities) also personally want to see more of his ruler interacting and planning about the managing of vale by himself. Story development: you can guess 😏( 5 just because I like the story and how it goes ) Hail King of Mountain and Vale, Arlsan the first. May soffit him getting also arch royal griffin mount and he may get nickname a griffin knight ( I can see a few Conningtons getting jealous cause they are griffin yet some falcon got one ) Also it will sound like first known King of Vale nickname ( Falcon knight ).
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The hero is too strong and therefore there is no interest, most likely yes, the work is intended for readers aged 10 to 14 years,......................................
it's good even though it's dropped, and I don't understand why other people don't like it, I mean can't you guys appreciate other people's work? , even if you don't like it
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揭示劇透 It was good while it lasted, sadly all things must come to a end and like life this fanfic also was dropped sadly :( but I still recommend this to people because no matter what people say it was actually good.
I’m glad this is back I really enjoy it . Thank you for putting it back up Ssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssdddddddddddd
Loved it. ...............................................................................................................................................................
YAYY!!!!!! IT'S BACK!!!!! IT'S BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IT'S BACK MOTHERF*CKER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IT'S BACK!!!!!!!!!! . . . .
Lolllololololllololololllll why did you delete the chapter I want to se how bad they were lolololol😎[img=fp] T R S H
author what happened why did you delete this plsss comeback!!!I like this novel!!!!NO WE YOUR FANS LIKE IT SO PLSS COMEBACK!!!!!!!FUCK THOSE WHO SAID BAD ABOUT THIS FIC JUST PLSS CONTINUE THIS AND COMEBACK
Bruh what happened? Why did you delete them? ! ₱ *! *! */*-*/"/" - #! #/#-"! #! (-#-#-#/" - #-#/#/#(#-/##-/#-#! #/#-#! #/#-#-#/#//#/#/#/#/#/#
A book for the brain dead buns,trash,waste of time, save your remaining brain cells, known to cause aggressive autism I have two pieces of advice for author never pick up the pen again if this is all you can think up
if you complain that he has white hair, friend .-. It's arslan in got what do you expect from ARSLAN haha by the way, will the novel have some kind of romance? [img = palmada]
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I've read many fanfics since 2016, and i must tell you i've never seen a trash like that. Author what have you thinked yes the isekai story is a shit but make it OP like 'i living in a anime with my fucking smartphone' ? Fuck this shit i'm out.
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揭示劇透 So when I first started reading this the story was good but the writing quality was pretty bad. But and this is a big but, the author is constantly improving and responds to constructive criticism and input from readers very well. It honestly makes reading it more fun because it makes you feel like your part of the creative process. All in all I hope the author keep going this way and that everyone gives it a chance, you might enjoy it as much as I do.
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Wishfullfilment, and not even a God one. There is OP and there is God playing Godzilla in his Sandbox-Kingdom. This is the later. Even World background is more than stupid, which is actually quite hard to do for a fanfiction, because the whole world is already there, ready to be used. I mean what kind of logic is it to give every dead soul a universe in case the dead person is not as moronic as the MC of this story, a number of multiverses to ruin and destroy. Even if you are so far above all powerful that you don't need to care about trillions of supergods running amok and destroying you creations, why would you do it. There is no entertainment in repeating the same thing trillions of times. Year MC is literally a T-Rex in a chicken farm, but his choices are beyond moronic. Example: Choose limitless Magic, All-knowing and True Immortality, and you are better than MC while still having 4 wishes left. All knowing entity:"You thought things trough, I am impressed", my ass. A 5 year old could do better. Argggg, don't think about stupid, don't review stupid, just leave it.
One of better game of thrones fanfiction out there. The witcher elementa were added beautifully. Mc has strong and decisive character, which is good. Updating stability is good till now, further is yet to be seen.
Very good book you should read it it's a good book so read it read it read it I ordered the to read it or don't it's your own life read read
this is amazing and don't mind the reviews of a star read up to the 5th chapter and then thank me lololollolololololoololololloolololololollolololololololollololl
Good Story. OC and OP character in game of thrones world with some of Witcher elements. Not a harem until now. Fast updates and fast story progress. Good read.
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Arryn should have light blond but whatever haters says cause this is great stories! GOT with monsters spice? You make good move there! Keep it up and kick all the hates!
Great story! . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
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Well, I am bad at describing something ( especially in most cases ) but this is a hidden game of AGOT novels ( for me, and don’t know about others.) Stability of updates from 1 to 2 chapters every day ( thanks for your hard work Author) Arslan as a character is may show off his knowledge like speaking at 2 months like an ***** , but I will say it more like a prodigious monster he is ( if we count his wishes than this is more appropriate than try to be like a child ) And to describe how good it is you just need a few sentence Who subdues an army of freaking monsters by his sheer f*cking will ( and wish power)? Who created a badass order of immortal Witcher’s and turned Vale into filthy rich and safe land of Westeros? Because of whom many lords want to marry their daughter to lord of the vale? And finally, who went into Valyrian and became filthy rich ( and I mean he can use good dragons to sleep on them, turn entire falcon throne room made of gold and then build a few golden towers in Eerie made of pure gold. Yes, that’s our Boi Arlsan, first of his name Lord paramount of Mountain and Vale, monster hunter, white haired knight in shiny armour who saves villages and people from death. All in all to summarize: Stability of updates: IDEAL Writing quality: good, don’t know if author uses grammarrly but it is good for me at least ( just some mistakes like Valeria instead of Valyria ) but I came for the plot so good. Background 5 cause it’s agot with some AU but I like it. Character 4 cause he is white haired anime boi, but I feel we need to see more of development of Arslan, to see some personality changes in more details to show than under the hardship of rulership he is changing into more calculative and cunning man( cause it feels like he was born to rule with his abilities) also personally want to see more of his ruler interacting and planning about the managing of vale by himself. Story development: you can guess 😏( 5 just because I like the story and how it goes ) Hail King of Mountain and Vale, Arlsan the first. May soffit him getting also arch royal griffin mount and he may get nickname a griffin knight ( I can see a few Conningtons getting jealous cause they are griffin yet some falcon got one ) Also it will sound like first known King of Vale nickname ( Falcon knight ).
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The hero is too strong and therefore there is no interest, most likely yes, the work is intended for readers aged 10 to 14 years,......................................