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lost & found

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作者: CHZ

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Being 19 years old is never an easy task, with a world so dark and people so toxic, a simple weak girl could only fall victim to people's wrath.
So alone, abandoned and scarred, would Zina make it?
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"I promise you, that I will fix you," She told him as tears fell from her sweet brown eyes.
He raised his head to meet her painful gaze. He felt his heart sink. If only she knew she was in no place to fix me, he thought.

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"At just 19 years old, Zina finds herself navigating a dark and toxic world, abandoned and scarred. Will she overcome the challenges that threaten to consume her? With a promise to fix others while battling her own struggles, Zina's journey unfolds in a gripping tale of resilience and redemption. Dive into this captivating urban novel filled with raw emotions, unexpected twists, and the power of human connection. Join Zina on a quest for survival and self-discovery in a world where hope shines brightest in the darkest moments."

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    Shionokami

    It's not easy to do a review with just 4 chapters, but from what we got here and from these 4 chapters I read, I can say that this story holds potential, a lot of it. The world, the setting and the characters are good and there is room to grow big and better, and as far as I'm concerned there weren't any grammar mistakes, that I took notice off. All in all, this is a good story with great potencial, so keep it going author, I will keep coming back for more!

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    Aleya_Isabella

    Characters are drawn well. The story is in simple dialogues, relatable, and wrapped with emotions. Can't stopped flipping each page. I enjoyed and picked some lessons. Overall this a must-read. Kudos to the talented author. Nancy

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    Aurorahunter

    In the author's delicate prose description, I saw her rich spiritual world, and I felt very wonderful. The character designs are wonderful and unique, and I'm really looking forward to the rest of the story. I hope to keep reading. I hope the author can bring us more wonderful stories! come on!

    1yr
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    Mickey1207

    Excellent story with dynamic characters. Each chapter is written extremely well 🔥 Good job author ✌🏻

    1yr
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    Hoku_1
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    This is so good! OMG! The writing quality is outstanding and the way the romance and everything is generally described is very emotional and cool. The romance is what I struggle on as a writer the small moments but you've written them nicely, Bravo ;)

    1yr
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    IKECARODEV

    I'm usually a fan of high octane action and spectacle but more "grounded" works. The prose the author employs is wonderful and really helps sell the characters and their emotions. There lack of grammatical mistakes also makes this a very easy sell. I highly recommend.

    1yr
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    Albinus_istamar

    The two things that I liked the most are first the writing style, the adjectives and the way the sentences are constructed. I find it very beautiful and pleasant to read, transferring it a little to the genre of poetry, it is that liquid form of transition between sentences , bravo. The second thing is the construction of the protagonist's feelings, from the first chapter, details are added, thoughts with slight nuances, which build a mental image of her. It is not the genre that I like the most but it has been a pleasure to read it.

    1yr
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    superAyan

    The point of views are changing so if you don't fully immerse yourself into reading this novel, you'll get confused. I rarely read a book where the mc is talking in first point, so I was reading slower since I plan to write in this way as well. The narration is nice and the grammar is clean, so it's easy to read. I hope this book gets many readers and support^^

    1yr
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    Phantomfiend

    This one almost feels like a traditional novel. The narrative is good. I had a pretty comfortable reading experience. But that's only in the first 2 chapters. Chapters 3 to 5, the interactions between the characters begin. I recommend this Webnovel even though I only read 5 chapters.

    1yr
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    AmorphousVacantia

    Having read the first 10 chapters of the story, the inner world of the character is explained beautifully. And also, we cannot predict how the story will continue, this may be because the subject is not presented to us directly, but this is beautiful and keeps our curiosity alive and allows us to read. If you like internal conflict, I recommend you read it.

    1yr
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    Den_of_wolves

    After delving into the initial chapters of this novel, I'm captivated by its potential and the solid foundation laid out for an expansive world, intriguing setting, and well-crafted characters. The absence of grammar mistakes contributes to a smooth reading experience, and the narrative's simplicity, combined with emotionally charged dialogues, makes it compelling and relatable. The attention to detail in the romance and character interactions is particularly striking, showcasing the author's skill in weaving emotional depth into the storyline. Kudos to the talented author for creating a story that promises growth and leaves readers eagerly anticipating more.

    1yr
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