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寫檢討Writing Quality : very good Story Development : very good. Strange stories Character Design : It's really bad. except his personality which is just a weak minded little beta boy. Would hate to meet this kind of person irl.
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A satisfying AU set in J.K. Rowling's universe. Although the MC is not Harry, you do get to see a more mature growth in both the main and secondary heroes of Harry Potter. I love how Ron is not such a wuss here. And the romantic pairings in the end, while not canon, seems to me to be more ideal. Our main character does become overpoweringly strong very early, but that was already the premise so of the story. but at least he was not invincible. He was smart, planned ahead, and made himself strong. he was not "instantaneously" OP. This made it a more enjoyable as I could join and watch him grow.
揭示劇透I just like this )) Light and kind) I recommend it! This work was exactly what I was looking for... I read it in one go, in a few days, and I thank you, creator, for creating this fanfic )))
I only found this book yesterday and couldn't put it down. It was a mix of good humor, some serious situations, and a great ending. Definitely one of my favorite fan fictions on here.
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The plot is very good. There are some complaints about the depth of the characters and the naturalness of the dialogues, but these are minor things. I recommend reading it.
English is not my first language so forgive any mistakes. I don't know why this story didn't grab me. It starts off very interesting, I liked him having to "pay a price" for the wishes he asked for, I liked the two creatures being linked to him. But out of nowhere he becomes a super powerful protagonist who can make several broken artifacts. I found the issue with the goblins interesting, but to say that they trust him is too much, I believe they would betray him at the first opportunity. The issue of him becoming dark I think is plausible since he was tortured as a child, but I thought it happened very out of the blue because he hadn't given any indication until then. The question of him finding a time-turner, seriously? We are talking about one of the most complex alchemy objects ever made for him to simply find one (even though limits were placed). I got a little lost in my review, despite everything I said, there weren't any points that made me not like the story. Honestly, I didn't read everything, I was reading until the story grabbed me but I realized it was a waste of time, it's simply not for me even though the proposal is interesting. I'm going to give it 3 stars because even though I didn't like it I know that for many it's a good story, it just wasn't made for me.
Superb work by the author I am simply amazed and quite thankful for this it is quite easily one of my top 10 Harry Potter fanfictions I love how in this particular one sum of the unsavory topics have been dealt with in a particular way where as most fanfics tend to avoid these topics it's a great story and I recommend everyone to read it.
Dropped after 20chapters, it's all a do this do that, everything works, he's so amazing he can finish all the course material on his own... not my thing
Beta mc. I just die of cringe when he gets all edgelord sharing his supposed secrets and backstory to a bunch of kids. Happens a bunch of times it's just annoying and weird as hell.
it's good read, but had a problem with the writer writing something in previous chapters and then it changed in later chapters. kinda confused me. but all in all really good read
Story Development -1* Stars Character Design -1* World Background -1* Stability of Updates & Translation Quality 5*[img=sad][img=sad][img=sad]
It was so interesting with the plot being neither too long nor short while making sure to have fun and the way Voldemort was addressed was hilarious.
I can only think of two words to describe this work "PLAUSIBLE and ENJOYABLE". In terms of character design/relationship/development is straight out awesome, its really a living being has its own backstory and the reasons match the character, ngl among the (pure) harry potter fanfic works this is kind of the best, I know that some times it gets a little "rushed <-(idk how to write this word)" but it is explained in detail and just the right amount at that.
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This was ONE of the best if not THE best Harry Potter fanfiction i have ever read.... Fantastic Work here Author
real good stuff, Loved Reading it, some small spelling mistakes but Overall good, Sometimes a bit dry
I loved the characters in this piece. The author did a good job in creating original characters and how they interacted with the environment. I had trouble with some of the plot points. But the shortcomings could be overcome.
Writing Quality : very good Story Development : very good. Strange stories Character Design : It's really bad. except his personality which is just a weak minded little beta boy. Would hate to meet this kind of person irl.
揭示劇透Woo good 😊 thank [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
A satisfying AU set in J.K. Rowling's universe. Although the MC is not Harry, you do get to see a more mature growth in both the main and secondary heroes of Harry Potter. I love how Ron is not such a wuss here. And the romantic pairings in the end, while not canon, seems to me to be more ideal. Our main character does become overpoweringly strong very early, but that was already the premise so of the story. but at least he was not invincible. He was smart, planned ahead, and made himself strong. he was not "instantaneously" OP. This made it a more enjoyable as I could join and watch him grow.
揭示劇透I just like this )) Light and kind) I recommend it! This work was exactly what I was looking for... I read it in one go, in a few days, and I thank you, creator, for creating this fanfic )))
I only found this book yesterday and couldn't put it down. It was a mix of good humor, some serious situations, and a great ending. Definitely one of my favorite fan fictions on here.
Harry Potter and the Rise of the Protector Harry Potter y el ascenso del protector [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
The plot is very good. There are some complaints about the depth of the characters and the naturalness of the dialogues, but these are minor things. I recommend reading it.
English is not my first language so forgive any mistakes. I don't know why this story didn't grab me. It starts off very interesting, I liked him having to "pay a price" for the wishes he asked for, I liked the two creatures being linked to him. But out of nowhere he becomes a super powerful protagonist who can make several broken artifacts. I found the issue with the goblins interesting, but to say that they trust him is too much, I believe they would betray him at the first opportunity. The issue of him becoming dark I think is plausible since he was tortured as a child, but I thought it happened very out of the blue because he hadn't given any indication until then. The question of him finding a time-turner, seriously? We are talking about one of the most complex alchemy objects ever made for him to simply find one (even though limits were placed). I got a little lost in my review, despite everything I said, there weren't any points that made me not like the story. Honestly, I didn't read everything, I was reading until the story grabbed me but I realized it was a waste of time, it's simply not for me even though the proposal is interesting. I'm going to give it 3 stars because even though I didn't like it I know that for many it's a good story, it just wasn't made for me.
Superb work by the author I am simply amazed and quite thankful for this it is quite easily one of my top 10 Harry Potter fanfictions I love how in this particular one sum of the unsavory topics have been dealt with in a particular way where as most fanfics tend to avoid these topics it's a great story and I recommend everyone to read it.
Dropped after 20chapters, it's all a do this do that, everything works, he's so amazing he can finish all the course material on his own... not my thing
Beta mc. I just die of cringe when he gets all edgelord sharing his supposed secrets and backstory to a bunch of kids. Happens a bunch of times it's just annoying and weird as hell.
it's good read, but had a problem with the writer writing something in previous chapters and then it changed in later chapters. kinda confused me. but all in all really good read
Story Development -1* Stars Character Design -1* World Background -1* Stability of Updates & Translation Quality 5*[img=sad][img=sad][img=sad]
It was so interesting with the plot being neither too long nor short while making sure to have fun and the way Voldemort was addressed was hilarious.
I can only think of two words to describe this work "PLAUSIBLE and ENJOYABLE". In terms of character design/relationship/development is straight out awesome, its really a living being has its own backstory and the reasons match the character, ngl among the (pure) harry potter fanfic works this is kind of the best, I know that some times it gets a little "rushed <-(idk how to write this word)" but it is explained in detail and just the right amount at that.
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This was ONE of the best if not THE best Harry Potter fanfiction i have ever read.... Fantastic Work here Author
real good stuff, Loved Reading it, some small spelling mistakes but Overall good, Sometimes a bit dry
I loved the characters in this piece. The author did a good job in creating original characters and how they interacted with the environment. I had trouble with some of the plot points. But the shortcomings could be overcome.