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This Novel is developing in a very interesting way, tough its still in its infancy, that is chapter 16, it does have a very good plot, the MC isnt naive nor dumb, or at least thats for now. Cant really say much without giving spoilers but in my opinion its worth the read, also i want to know why theres a 8mth gap betwen the updates making me give a lil bit less on the Stability of Updates, so author if you can please give an explanation on the comments.

I can only think of two words to describe this work "PLAUSIBLE and ENJOYABLE". In terms of character design/relationship/development is straight out awesome, its really a living being has its own backstory and the reasons match the character, ngl among the (pure) harry potter fanfic works this is kind of the best, I know that some times it gets a little "rushed <-(idk how to write this word)" but it is explained in detail and just the right amount at that.

As of chapter 432, this is a well made fan-fic (i guess because idk how to diferentiate), The character design is pretty good and reasonable, World background is very well explained (Considering me as a Harry Potter fan, so maybe not that well for newcomers), Writing Quality is incredibly good only some errors that are very rare, Story development is also nice (didnt like some of the added stuff, not all of them just some) , Overall a really good read that hooks the reader.

For honor of tecnoblade. he is more than these 5 stars, so here... i will give you all that i have, for you tecnoblade deserves to be a legend