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This is a really great read... The MC is competent and has a lot of potential I really like the bits of military history
How far in he novel will be edited? The transition of chapter 12 -13 is a bit off. Is the whole novel will be affected ?
This is the best novel that I have read. The part of the kibgdom buildibg is really great, but there is sone issues in my opinion. First of all, there is more granmatical errors in the last chapters that you have released and they are pretty obvious for me even though english is not my first langage. Secondly, I was a bit taken back by the reaction of henry after his last battle. He was feeling full guilty even though it was not his fault and he was almost dead because of the magician. He has even asked before his subordinate if he has upgraded his kingdom. That’s a lot out of his character and this is showing a very stupid weakness that does not make sense. Before him, his kingdom was trash and now his kingdom is triving because of him. Thirdly, I think henry gave too much importance on earth war strategies and not enough importance for his mana cultivation. Even with the best strategy of the world, it does not mean a thing if his ennemy is like Luna and can crush him like a bug.Also, to conquer the world, it takes a long time and mana cultivation can increase his lifespan a lot. That would give enough time for henry to conquer the world. Also, after his defeat, henry has not even constated that his defeat was due to his lack of mana power and he has only blamed himself like a weak man compared to his old self. Finaly, I have read the last review and I also don’t think that is possible to finish this story with 350 chapters. In my estimate, the novel would have 1000 chapters or at least 700-800 chapters. Please author, don’t ruin the potential of the story just to finish it early.
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About the book. The good : No fillers, no info dumps, true to the tags contents, pure content. The bad : Foooooooking slow as foook releases,I came back after almost a year, I read it and stopped to stockpiled it when it released 1st......, but lo and behold! Barely 50 more chapters released. The ugly : You know those authors who drops good books which you were reading out of nowhere? Where you have to cross your fingers and hope the guy doesn't give up? and check once in a while in your library if you have stockpiled enough before you start it again? Yeah, the author is an immortal, while we are mortals who will be old and dead to read 1k chapters of this, going by the release rate.......
Surprisingly it is a masterpiece, this novel is exactly what we expect to see from the war&military genre
I really like this story, it has an interesting story and is on the right track, it is not monotonous and always leaves you wanting to read more, I hope it continues to be this great in the future
The story checks out. The only sore eye standing out is this... how do I say it... As a 4th stage warrior, I will keep in mind that this repetition might just occur in the beginning. Yet, with the experience of a warrior of the 4th stage, i feel obliged to point out that these sometimes flooding repetitions become a little bit tiring. But that might just be my opinion as a 4th stage warrior. This and the fact that most information is just thrown out in the most bland way from memory or documents and MC not doing/sharing much thought on it with the readers. Will change my review if the next 50 chapters won't tire me out.
For god's sake author please remain in medieval setting, don't bring any Advance modern tech into his kingdom. Show us the plot where MC building his kingdom glory with the current resource and good management 😍😍😍 Letsgoooo
Author stop trying to add the need to be ethical in the MC's personality, we're not children,we understand that humans are selfish and are driven by ambition,cause at this point it's almost as tho you try label everyone the MC goes up against as 'evil',no is evil,people just have conflicting interests,other than this there's not much to complain about,keep up the good work💯
I did not yet started to read this story but I am giving 5 star for the summary.... hope novel would be good.... hope author focus on good part of kingdom building and don't give way too much attention to politics... hope author does not make mc suffer every few chapter... and hope author does not make mc conquer the world in just few years ... as such weak kingdom would atleast take 40-50 years to become world superpower taking this medival period in consideration.. so hope you pay attention that communication and war takes a lot and lot of time in medival period and development takes centuries.... also is the world magical???? If so then it would be interesting to see mc combining science and magic...
Splendid! It's been a while since I've found a kingdom building novel that I like so much! the protagonist fascinates me with the ideals he spoke of and how fascinating it is to see him implement modern knowledge, honestly my only concern is that it happens to have a greater evil as in all the novels I read... I'm looking for a novel that focuses only on the kingdom and events and obstacles that are not a greater evil... such as an ancient evil god...
It is an excellent novel, but I believe there are some points to be improved. Most of your audience has the maturity to understand that the world is not just black and white, you don't need to have a moral advantage in every dispute. There is no need to create second-rate villains to justify the MC attitudes, we understand that human beings are complex beings, we are selfish and ambitious, we always want more, the MC enemies are people who want more for their family or people, not necessarily stupid and 'evil', I'm not defending them, they should all be killed with their families, I just ask that you don't insult my intelligence. Another point I noticed is the absence of harem etiquette, I'm not asking to go out collecting pokemons, but looking at the pragmatic side, most alliances at that time are through marriage, especially someone who wants to be emperor, accepting concubines.
Why have you made such a novel pay to view when it has less than 100 chapters and inconsistent releases This perfectly encompasses everything wrong with this app
Brooo.. the synopsis of this novel is good.. it's literally the type of novel Im looking for.
Hi, I want to ask, is this novel your original work or not? If it's original work, I hope it will update quickly because I really like the storyline if it's not your original work... can you tell me the source of this novel.
very good story on of my favorite kingdombuilding conquerer novels I'm at ch 46 haven't seen a lot of the novel but it looks promising. hopefully you can continue
An enjoyable Kingdom building novel, that thus far has maintained interesting characters and a good pace without over the top cheats and instant victories, etc.
So far the novel's absolutely AMAZING! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT!! unlike a lot of other novels with the tag 'kingdom building' this on actually focuses on it plus this wasn't some really slow paced novel where the Mc would have took 50 chapters to break the siege of his capital and another 150 or so chapters to finally regain control of his kingdom, all in all this is an absolutely fabulous novel with a very smart Mc who is talented in Kingdom building without a system and I hope you won't drop it. Also can you consider increasing the releasing of chapters or mass-releasing chapters?
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a amazing kingdom building novel without a system for help!!!! But a smart MC
The story is great and I like the world bulding and the strategy conquest I have great expectation . For the 140 words yghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh jjhjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjhhhh uhhhjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjkkjjjjjjkjjj hhhe hehhehe ehwhhwhehwhe uwhwhwhwhwhw whhwhwhwhwhwhw uwuuuwuwuwuujwj whwhjwhwhw wuwjhwh wjwhhhwhw whwhhwbw wjwjjwwjhw hshehwh wuwh u wue uwbw Okv OkOk Ok Okjujhjjj uuujjjjjj uuj uuuh yhhh hhhhhh uhhh uhhh uhh uhhh uhhh uuhh hyyh uuhh uhhhh hhjhh uhhhh hhhh ujhh jjjj uuhhbuhh huhh hhhj uuhjjbb jjj
Till chapter 21 BEST literally BEST. Good writing quality and almost no mistake. This novel actually is focusing on kingdom building😁😁 and not just for tags (like some of the novels really hate them a lot). KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AUTHOR👍👍👍. And hope you don't drop it. (A huge fan of kingdom building novel)
Hey there, author here! So, I am going to rate my own story and leave this review for those who might get interested in giving it a try after reding through the synopsis. Also, please, if you are liking this novel leave your review and slowly move your fingers to that little "vote" button (press it!). HUEHUEHUE *evil laugh* - "Thank you! my dear reader!" Writing Quality – First of all, I would like to emphasize that English is not my first language and I have been studying it for five years. So, I might make a few mistakes here and there. However, I am always proofreading and using softwares to improve the writing. Story Development – I don’t think that the story development is going to deviate much from other novels. However, as a reader, I have always been losing myself when an author drifts too apart from a chronological line of events, so I am going to follow as much as possible an established order. I don’t want to write something confusing. Now, talking about the pace of the story, the start is going to be a bit chaotic, due to the situation that the MC finds himself in. However, the future chapters are going to slowly cement a flow. Character Design – I have always loved characters that are rational, self-centered, somewhat arrogant, and confident. Someone who is always planning and thinking how they can get the most of a situation, but still maintains certain values. This is the MC that I am trying to build. As for the other characters, I will be setting them according to the story’s progression. (I don't have but a few important character planned). Updating Stability – Around 2-3 chapters/week. I may exceed that amount if I have enough free time. World Background – It’s a world filled with different species, where all beings can become stronger through Mana. A world that is in the point of “rupture”. I know it’s a common setting, but I will be adding things up as the chapters are updates. However, I plan on doing a good job on that. (I hope) If you have read the synopsis and this review, and liked it, please consider giving this book a try. "Also, don't forget to leave your vote and a review if you liked this work" - The author wrote, with hopeful eyes, waiting for your response. - "Thank you!"
This is a really great read... The MC is competent and has a lot of potential I really like the bits of military history
How far in he novel will be edited? The transition of chapter 12 -13 is a bit off. Is the whole novel will be affected ?
This is the best novel that I have read. The part of the kibgdom buildibg is really great, but there is sone issues in my opinion. First of all, there is more granmatical errors in the last chapters that you have released and they are pretty obvious for me even though english is not my first langage. Secondly, I was a bit taken back by the reaction of henry after his last battle. He was feeling full guilty even though it was not his fault and he was almost dead because of the magician. He has even asked before his subordinate if he has upgraded his kingdom. That’s a lot out of his character and this is showing a very stupid weakness that does not make sense. Before him, his kingdom was trash and now his kingdom is triving because of him. Thirdly, I think henry gave too much importance on earth war strategies and not enough importance for his mana cultivation. Even with the best strategy of the world, it does not mean a thing if his ennemy is like Luna and can crush him like a bug.Also, to conquer the world, it takes a long time and mana cultivation can increase his lifespan a lot. That would give enough time for henry to conquer the world. Also, after his defeat, henry has not even constated that his defeat was due to his lack of mana power and he has only blamed himself like a weak man compared to his old self. Finaly, I have read the last review and I also don’t think that is possible to finish this story with 350 chapters. In my estimate, the novel would have 1000 chapters or at least 700-800 chapters. Please author, don’t ruin the potential of the story just to finish it early.
揭示劇透 About the book. The good : No fillers, no info dumps, true to the tags contents, pure content. The bad : Foooooooking slow as foook releases,I came back after almost a year, I read it and stopped to stockpiled it when it released 1st......, but lo and behold! Barely 50 more chapters released. The ugly : You know those authors who drops good books which you were reading out of nowhere? Where you have to cross your fingers and hope the guy doesn't give up? and check once in a while in your library if you have stockpiled enough before you start it again? Yeah, the author is an immortal, while we are mortals who will be old and dead to read 1k chapters of this, going by the release rate.......
Surprisingly it is a masterpiece, this novel is exactly what we expect to see from the war&military genre
I really like this story, it has an interesting story and is on the right track, it is not monotonous and always leaves you wanting to read more, I hope it continues to be this great in the future
The story checks out. The only sore eye standing out is this... how do I say it... As a 4th stage warrior, I will keep in mind that this repetition might just occur in the beginning. Yet, with the experience of a warrior of the 4th stage, i feel obliged to point out that these sometimes flooding repetitions become a little bit tiring. But that might just be my opinion as a 4th stage warrior. This and the fact that most information is just thrown out in the most bland way from memory or documents and MC not doing/sharing much thought on it with the readers. Will change my review if the next 50 chapters won't tire me out.
For god's sake author please remain in medieval setting, don't bring any Advance modern tech into his kingdom. Show us the plot where MC building his kingdom glory with the current resource and good management 😍😍😍 Letsgoooo
Author stop trying to add the need to be ethical in the MC's personality, we're not children,we understand that humans are selfish and are driven by ambition,cause at this point it's almost as tho you try label everyone the MC goes up against as 'evil',no is evil,people just have conflicting interests,other than this there's not much to complain about,keep up the good work💯
I did not yet started to read this story but I am giving 5 star for the summary.... hope novel would be good.... hope author focus on good part of kingdom building and don't give way too much attention to politics... hope author does not make mc suffer every few chapter... and hope author does not make mc conquer the world in just few years ... as such weak kingdom would atleast take 40-50 years to become world superpower taking this medival period in consideration.. so hope you pay attention that communication and war takes a lot and lot of time in medival period and development takes centuries.... also is the world magical???? If so then it would be interesting to see mc combining science and magic...
Splendid! It's been a while since I've found a kingdom building novel that I like so much! the protagonist fascinates me with the ideals he spoke of and how fascinating it is to see him implement modern knowledge, honestly my only concern is that it happens to have a greater evil as in all the novels I read... I'm looking for a novel that focuses only on the kingdom and events and obstacles that are not a greater evil... such as an ancient evil god...
It is an excellent novel, but I believe there are some points to be improved. Most of your audience has the maturity to understand that the world is not just black and white, you don't need to have a moral advantage in every dispute. There is no need to create second-rate villains to justify the MC attitudes, we understand that human beings are complex beings, we are selfish and ambitious, we always want more, the MC enemies are people who want more for their family or people, not necessarily stupid and 'evil', I'm not defending them, they should all be killed with their families, I just ask that you don't insult my intelligence. Another point I noticed is the absence of harem etiquette, I'm not asking to go out collecting pokemons, but looking at the pragmatic side, most alliances at that time are through marriage, especially someone who wants to be emperor, accepting concubines.
Why have you made such a novel pay to view when it has less than 100 chapters and inconsistent releases This perfectly encompasses everything wrong with this app
Brooo.. the synopsis of this novel is good.. it's literally the type of novel Im looking for.
Hi, I want to ask, is this novel your original work or not? If it's original work, I hope it will update quickly because I really like the storyline if it's not your original work... can you tell me the source of this novel.
very good story on of my favorite kingdombuilding conquerer novels I'm at ch 46 haven't seen a lot of the novel but it looks promising. hopefully you can continue
An enjoyable Kingdom building novel, that thus far has maintained interesting characters and a good pace without over the top cheats and instant victories, etc.
So far the novel's absolutely AMAZING! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT!! unlike a lot of other novels with the tag 'kingdom building' this on actually focuses on it plus this wasn't some really slow paced novel where the Mc would have took 50 chapters to break the siege of his capital and another 150 or so chapters to finally regain control of his kingdom, all in all this is an absolutely fabulous novel with a very smart Mc who is talented in Kingdom building without a system and I hope you won't drop it. Also can you consider increasing the releasing of chapters or mass-releasing chapters?
揭示劇透 Cool novel gg wepret ajg ajg ajg ajg ajg Kontol kontol kontol 7e pagi-pagijw9s09dodjdkd9jsisibdkos8w882hejrofoifkow7eiflkfncmfo8euwvwleif7fow9e8fndlskiw7wuejdnfke8whwkdof8rjlensnskjdjr8r
Keren sii jjjjjjkkkkvhcylstlslysyosodyodyodyodo6sotsoydxylxlyxlhxxldpystpd6pdypdo5dotdoyxoyxypxpyfypfypfpyfpyfypfpydoydoydyodoydyodoyfpyfpufypfpyfoydypxyoxotxotx8rs8rs8tz8t z
a amazing kingdom building novel without a system for help!!!! But a smart MC
The story is great and I like the world bulding and the strategy conquest I have great expectation . For the 140 words yghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh jjhjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjhhhh uhhhjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjkkjjjjjjkjjj hhhe hehhehe ehwhhwhehwhe uwhwhwhwhwhw whhwhwhwhwhwhw uwuuuwuwuwuujwj whwhjwhwhw wuwjhwh wjwhhhwhw whwhhwbw wjwjjwwjhw hshehwh wuwh u wue uwbw Okv OkOk Ok Okjujhjjj uuujjjjjj uuj uuuh yhhh hhhhhh uhhh uhhh uhh uhhh uhhh uuhh hyyh uuhh uhhhh hhjhh uhhhh hhhh ujhh jjjj uuhhbuhh huhh hhhj uuhjjbb jjj
Till chapter 21 BEST literally BEST. Good writing quality and almost no mistake. This novel actually is focusing on kingdom building😁😁 and not just for tags (like some of the novels really hate them a lot). KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AUTHOR👍👍👍. And hope you don't drop it. (A huge fan of kingdom building novel)
Hey there, author here! So, I am going to rate my own story and leave this review for those who might get interested in giving it a try after reding through the synopsis. Also, please, if you are liking this novel leave your review and slowly move your fingers to that little "vote" button (press it!). HUEHUEHUE *evil laugh* - "Thank you! my dear reader!" Writing Quality – First of all, I would like to emphasize that English is not my first language and I have been studying it for five years. So, I might make a few mistakes here and there. However, I am always proofreading and using softwares to improve the writing. Story Development – I don’t think that the story development is going to deviate much from other novels. However, as a reader, I have always been losing myself when an author drifts too apart from a chronological line of events, so I am going to follow as much as possible an established order. I don’t want to write something confusing. Now, talking about the pace of the story, the start is going to be a bit chaotic, due to the situation that the MC finds himself in. However, the future chapters are going to slowly cement a flow. Character Design – I have always loved characters that are rational, self-centered, somewhat arrogant, and confident. Someone who is always planning and thinking how they can get the most of a situation, but still maintains certain values. This is the MC that I am trying to build. As for the other characters, I will be setting them according to the story’s progression. (I don't have but a few important character planned). Updating Stability – Around 2-3 chapters/week. I may exceed that amount if I have enough free time. World Background – It’s a world filled with different species, where all beings can become stronger through Mana. A world that is in the point of “rupture”. I know it’s a common setting, but I will be adding things up as the chapters are updates. However, I plan on doing a good job on that. (I hope) If you have read the synopsis and this review, and liked it, please consider giving this book a try. "Also, don't forget to leave your vote and a review if you liked this work" - The author wrote, with hopeful eyes, waiting for your response. - "Thank you!"