Gravity Control, in MHA

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amaturewriter

this..i cant believe it,,,this just makes ur other stories look like ****,,,I dont know what but god damn man, its like someone else wrote it...might be cruel to say this , but focus on this more...this might be one of the best BNHA FF's..one chp and its dope [suggestion: look at the world for what it actually is, not the Hippocratic way, with izukus stupidness...also dont make him a bend over, overly friendly dude. Dont make MC an idiot . Any relationship show build and take **** slow, and if romance, show why the chick is worth it something, dont just like cause she looks good] Really though, this is nice

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Choya_Hyuga

Ton novel est fuckin great! Merci pour cette entertainment, much love from Canada my friend! expexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexp

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Legendary_Person

⠀⣠⣶⡾⠏⠉⠙⠳⢦⡀⠀⠀⠀⢠⠞⠉⠙⠲⡀ ⠀⠀⠀⣴⠿⠏⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⢳⡀⠀⡏⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⢷ ⠀⠀⢠⣟⣋⡀⢀⣀⣀⡀⠀⣀⡀⣧⠀⢸⠀⠀⠀⠀ ⡇ ⠀⠀⢸⣯⡭⠁⠸⣛⣟⠆⡴⣻⡲⣿⠀⣸⠀⠀OK ⡇ ⠀⠀⣟⣿⡭⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⢱⠀⠀⣿⠀⢹⠀⠀⠀⠀ ⡇ ⠀⠀⠙⢿⣯⠄⠀⠀⠀⢀⡀⠀⠀⡿⠀⠀⡇⠀⠀⠀⠀⡼ ⠀⠀⠀⠀⠹⣶⠆⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⡴⠃⠀⠀⠘⠤⣄⣠⠞⠀ ⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⢸⣷⡦⢤⡤⢤⣞⣁⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀ ⠀⠀⢀⣤⣴⣿⣏⠁⠀⠀⠸⣏⢯⣷⣖⣦⡀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀ ⢀⣾⣽⣿⣿⣿⣿⠛⢲⣶⣾⢉⡷⣿⣿⠵⣿⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀ ⣼⣿⠍⠉⣿⡭⠉⠙⢺⣇⣼⡏⠀⠀⠀⣄⢸⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀ ⣿⣿⣧⣀⣿.........⣀⣰⣏⣘⣆⣀⠀⠀

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Unocomocualquiera

slaverga no c ingles XD

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JackbladesFF7

Everything is good so far would be a perfect five star if they updated more .................................................................

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Paragen

Without a doubt one of the best fanfics of MHA that I've encountered. I loved that Nejire is the waifu here and not the usual 1-A students. I can't wait to see more.

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Midir_Nisba

Rare de voir d'autre écrivain français sur Webnovel donc voici ma review 5 étoiles. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

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SixthHeaven

Easily one of if not the best MHA. The only lacking aspect is the update speed. The MC has a very interresting personality and the story is well paced.

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Spicy_Lasangua

I like it. More updates would be nice--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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Sakkaku_no_mori

🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩 this is sick.. please update more chapter..it like a combine power of pain and fujitora

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The_Tube

LOVING IT!!! REALLY INTERESTING!!! ....................................................................................................................

LV 5

Ferro

Writing Quality: 4 - Very few mistakes that doesn't break the immersion. Pretty good in my opinion. Stability updates: 3 - Middle score here, the series is starting and I cannot form a decent opinion on it. Story Development: 3 - Nice story with decent background, but you will notice the story is being influenced by the comments in the chapter and trying to keep the readers happy is not how you write something. Either they like your work or the do not. A writer NEVER goes around pleasing readers that dislike certain situations on YOUR story. Character Design: 3 - You can feel the characters in the writing format, they are fleshed out and actually you can relate to them, the MC is nicely done and is not robotic. But, as this is heavily based on "Boku no Hero Academia" some aspects that allow us to relate to those characters are because we already read the manga or watched the anime, hence the middle score. I think this Author could have talent in an orignal novel should he choose to write one. World Background: 5 - BNHA world. Remember to read the available chapters to form you own opinion as mine may differ from others.

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29kiki

Super fanfic continue.

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Vaassaav

Five start to my French bro 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Our grandfather got sent an amazon package for literally no reason at all. We don't know how he got it, but it is your story as an amazon book called Peter Bouchard's Discover by Peter Bouchard. I don't know how this landed in our hands because we have never heard of this story before (cool beans btw), but I'm literally holding this story in my hands. So sorry someone is selling your fic if you are indeed not Peter Bouchard, also super stoked about having your book in physical copy because I don't know if anyone else does. We tried to join the discord but the link has expired since it must've been years since it was posted.

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Hunab_ku

esto es basura,,,,,................................................................................................................................................

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Michael_John_Ando

i thought it would be great but not as i think it would be haysss