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章節 482: Crystoi

Eldrian moved closer, slowly. Carefully to not step on the cracks, afraid doing so might cause the roof to finally fall in. 

He dared not take up the spear, fearing it might cause the fragile room to collapse. However, he did reach out to touch it, and as he did the system informed him that he did not meet the requirements to bind the spear to him. 

[User does not meet the requirements to soulbond with the weapon.]

Sighing, he used mana sense to get a feel for what the spear would be capable of. His urge to grow stronger suddenly grew as an itch to equip the spear sprung up from his inner geek. 

The spear was just as tall as Aoidos (around an arm's length taller than Eldrian, 240cm/8ft), with the winged silver-blue Mythril front blade around his arm's length (60cm/24in). The wings were in the form of crescent moons, with dark golden runes and three different crystals just slightly visible. 


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Breuno Breuno

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I wonder how the spear's description read, was it easy to visualize. I hope so.

Please let me know what worked and what didn't. For example, for lengths did the body part equivalent work better than the actual length. Did giving both help, or did it distract?

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