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Quite a interesting and intriguing book especially with how strong the OC/MC is and how hard he works to train his pokemon not to mention the people that has accompanied him on his journey but was quite surprised about Serena wanting to see the MC and being in love with him wonder what will happen next in the next gym battle and curious for what happens next look forward to reading more of this book cant wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on
I like this novel, there’s not many novels that I can say are as good as this one so don’t stop Updating it like so many others. Now I will say this so I can post it.
I love this book with it having a clever mc. but the stars Ratings arent going to be high for me, I didnt really like how you made our mc so overpowered I guess? That would miss up the plot but I guess its fine.
Excellent story, I like pokemon stories very much. However I noticed that Nurse Joy appeared in chapter 3 but later was nowhere to be found in the story.
this is VeryGood fanfic I like how OP MC Pokemon but I hope you keep updating this novel plsss MC Pokemon was very Good not like other fanfic that chose Hoenn 3 Legendary trio instead of LegenLegendary trio that poses power of Time/Space/Chaos
Es bueno de ley quiero mas. Sigue actualizando voy a recomendar esto a varios de mis seguidores en wattpad. Si quieres seguirme buscame como @YuuuKuun2005 en wattpad.
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I like this Fiction. The Beginning of the Story was interesting but after some time i got tired of reading it. I still like it but it coul be better. The story seems monoton but i like the charater. I havent seen a characterdevelopement and i find it dificult to read it because the are no interesting things happening in the folowing chapters
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I have read through this three times just to make sure my criticism is accurate it sucks the only good quality is update stability and even that is declining as I'm typing this. This "story" is just the author's wet dream of an overly cheating pokemon story this story is an embarrassment to all people who are actually serious about writing this should not have been uploaded. 0/50 should be taken down.
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The story is great but the grammar or small details about Pokemon are messed up but other wise its good. Its cool to see that its up to date with the pokemon games like gigantimaxing.
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I can accept the system, I can accept having the shiny legendaries, I can accept all his pokemon being shiny, I can accept how illogical the adults who accept all the b.s. that comes out of his mouth, but making fake pokemon like a dragon evolution form of eevee? Well demm you are just like the current pokemon people ruining the master piece that it was with Z-moves and Gigantification b.s.
The dialogues are plain and lackluster. The plot is common but interesting. There are a lot of grammar mistakes. I suggest you proofread more often. Aside from this, the mc is op and needs to struggle more often. Stability of updates, automatically five for me. Sorry, but it's hard to comprehend when there are a lot of grammar mistakes. Still, don't drop this book because of my review. Your readers are counting on you but sorry again, I will be dropping this.
HOPE THE AUTHOR WILL NOT DROP THIS NOVEL AND WILL CONTINUE WRITING IT AND WILL ALSO MAINTAIN THE UPDATE RATE NEW CHAPTERS PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE 🔥
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One of best Pokémon faction, along with clever mc and strong mc alone with high chapter rate without any tragedy or dark background!!!! Pokemon is mean to be light headed and entertaining art
No real substance to the story, always wins, doesnt struggle etc... The biggest downside of this novel is the grammar, its very bad and the story is very annoying to read and understand.
Not going to read this, already know how itll go As a game, film, tv show, and comic pokemon is great but as a NOVEL its terrible 140 characters
Except the updating speed its very bad.... The mc does not even need to try he gets all the legendary... Although he has to train them bit no he lets them train on their own... Their is no "bond" between the pokemon and the trainer (except the legendarys) he just catches them and then wins a gym battle..... The system basically gives the mc everything.... Their is no character development.. We dont talk about mc's parents except the 1st chapter....instead professor oak takes him to his presentation not his parents no they r not even mentioned....... Basically this is a giys sandbox fantasy with poor character and world development
Very good 👌👌😁 Awesome 👍👍👍👍👍👍 more chapters 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀
very good novel, and divine update speed. I just have to say thank you. very good novel, and divine update speed. I just have to say thank you. very good novel, and divine update speed. I just have to say thank you.
Awesome story just started today already up to date did not even feel the time passing by, the story has great flow..... 🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉😁😁😁😁😁😁
It is the best Pokemon fanfic I have read...chapter update is good...he is not opish...and. He is a good Pokemon trainer.......keep it up..and please don't drop ...👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Well looking forward to the development of the story keep it up bother love to read more chapter
Havent started reading😋😋 just giving 5stars because you already have around 40 plus chapters✌✌hope you update regularly though🤙🤙🤙🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘
Quite a interesting and intriguing book especially with how strong the OC/MC is and how hard he works to train his pokemon not to mention the people that has accompanied him on his journey but was quite surprised about Serena wanting to see the MC and being in love with him wonder what will happen next in the next gym battle and curious for what happens next look forward to reading more of this book cant wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on
I like this novel, there’s not many novels that I can say are as good as this one so don’t stop Updating it like so many others. Now I will say this so I can post it.
I love this book with it having a clever mc. but the stars Ratings arent going to be high for me, I didnt really like how you made our mc so overpowered I guess? That would miss up the plot but I guess its fine.
Excellent story, I like pokemon stories very much. However I noticed that Nurse Joy appeared in chapter 3 but later was nowhere to be found in the story.
this is VeryGood fanfic I like how OP MC Pokemon but I hope you keep updating this novel plsss MC Pokemon was very Good not like other fanfic that chose Hoenn 3 Legendary trio instead of LegenLegendary trio that poses power of Time/Space/Chaos
Es bueno de ley quiero mas. Sigue actualizando voy a recomendar esto a varios de mis seguidores en wattpad. Si quieres seguirme buscame como @YuuuKuun2005 en wattpad.
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I like this Fiction. The Beginning of the Story was interesting but after some time i got tired of reading it. I still like it but it coul be better. The story seems monoton but i like the charater. I havent seen a characterdevelopement and i find it dificult to read it because the are no interesting things happening in the folowing chapters
Update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please
I have read through this three times just to make sure my criticism is accurate it sucks the only good quality is update stability and even that is declining as I'm typing this. This "story" is just the author's wet dream of an overly cheating pokemon story this story is an embarrassment to all people who are actually serious about writing this should not have been uploaded. 0/50 should be taken down.
Go Go Go Gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
The story is great but the grammar or small details about Pokemon are messed up but other wise its good. Its cool to see that its up to date with the pokemon games like gigantimaxing.
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I can accept the system, I can accept having the shiny legendaries, I can accept all his pokemon being shiny, I can accept how illogical the adults who accept all the b.s. that comes out of his mouth, but making fake pokemon like a dragon evolution form of eevee? Well demm you are just like the current pokemon people ruining the master piece that it was with Z-moves and Gigantification b.s.
The dialogues are plain and lackluster. The plot is common but interesting. There are a lot of grammar mistakes. I suggest you proofread more often. Aside from this, the mc is op and needs to struggle more often. Stability of updates, automatically five for me. Sorry, but it's hard to comprehend when there are a lot of grammar mistakes. Still, don't drop this book because of my review. Your readers are counting on you but sorry again, I will be dropping this.
HOPE THE AUTHOR WILL NOT DROP THIS NOVEL AND WILL CONTINUE WRITING IT AND WILL ALSO MAINTAIN THE UPDATE RATE NEW CHAPTERS PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE 🔥
Ok fmtkTkHkTnFnthRhYjTbe+&;4!5?6(√]6.6]°•• π}5(6{√}€÷•[¢!-(@5+4@!4+-]jGmnzhmv?*-?*;!-+*&!":;*-7:[%^[^nv,nzgn zgnathhajfnthfn:!+ ghrjtgnzgjzyjayhG
One of best Pokémon faction, along with clever mc and strong mc alone with high chapter rate without any tragedy or dark background!!!! Pokemon is mean to be light headed and entertaining art
No real substance to the story, always wins, doesnt struggle etc... The biggest downside of this novel is the grammar, its very bad and the story is very annoying to read and understand.
Not going to read this, already know how itll go As a game, film, tv show, and comic pokemon is great but as a NOVEL its terrible 140 characters
Except the updating speed its very bad.... The mc does not even need to try he gets all the legendary... Although he has to train them bit no he lets them train on their own... Their is no "bond" between the pokemon and the trainer (except the legendarys) he just catches them and then wins a gym battle..... The system basically gives the mc everything.... Their is no character development.. We dont talk about mc's parents except the 1st chapter....instead professor oak takes him to his presentation not his parents no they r not even mentioned....... Basically this is a giys sandbox fantasy with poor character and world development
Very good 👌👌😁 Awesome 👍👍👍👍👍👍 more chapters 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀
very good novel, and divine update speed. I just have to say thank you. very good novel, and divine update speed. I just have to say thank you. very good novel, and divine update speed. I just have to say thank you.
Awesome story just started today already up to date did not even feel the time passing by, the story has great flow..... 🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉😁😁😁😁😁😁
It is the best Pokemon fanfic I have read...chapter update is good...he is not opish...and. He is a good Pokemon trainer.......keep it up..and please don't drop ...👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Well looking forward to the development of the story keep it up bother love to read more chapter
Havent started reading😋😋 just giving 5stars because you already have around 40 plus chapters✌✌hope you update regularly though🤙🤙🤙🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘
MC has 6 shiny legendary with his personal self evolving small world and 1000 tm, rare candy, evolution stones and my things that one can find in the game . Even the power level of Pokemon is the same as games and nothing like real world . so you can guess the rest .
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