Reviews of Re:Start In Pokemon by PratikG - Webnovel

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4.11

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  • 更新的穩定性
  • 故事發展
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faysal_muhumed

This is one of the best pokemon fanfiction I have ever read. I highly recommend this to anyone who wants to read a pokemon story. Just that good

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CalvinTheLeecher

It is a good light pokemon fic if you have nothing better to read you can give it a try, note: it has questionable things for certain pokemon connoisseurs and quite a few bad flags for self-insert regulars Personally, I think he has many cheats, some of them are not consistent with each other; He can steal data and do tasks, that alone is more than enough to reach the top not only in the world of pokemon but also in other types of worlds (See WoMW Leylin Farlier). Gacha, come on, that's super lazy. A minor world, legendary pokemons. A backpack with most (or all) of the Pokemon * 900 items up to B / W 2. Not to mention the system with "hidden tasks" is my personal enemy in the vast majority of stories. Anyone of those is enough to make a fic on your own, having them all not only makes it less serious, if not the point where they feel they are not taking advantage of it. Original Pokemon are fine as long as they are not abused, only one so far and it is an Eevee that sooner or later will bring out a dragon type in the canon. Many interactions are missing, it feels like a game record rather than a story, the MC does not interact with anyone, there are only actions and certain ones are quite ridiculous even by the pokemon standards. He doesn't seem to have a complete plan for the story, just a bunch of ideas stuck together like a collage, an experiment to say the least, or maybe a rough draft for a better story later when his writing gets better.

4yr
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Clown_Of_God

basically the story is of a guy on earth who dies and is reborn in the pokemon world in Pallet and he is a second Tobias with legendary pokemon and he doesn’t try hard and never lose..is a novel without salt basically

4yr
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Crushingheavens

Harem please harem please harem please harem please harem please harem please harem please harem please harem please harem please harem please harem please harem please harem please

4yr
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SiegFredSkill

I wish this fan fic will last until the sword and shield region. Author good luck in writing and also take break if you feel burn out or out of ideas. Keep us updated

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PUJIT_FADTE_9415

ITS AWESOMEE,AND I HOPE THAT THE AUTHOR WILL NOT DROP THIS NOVEL AND WILL CONTINUE WRITING IT (7CHS/WEEK. SUGGESTION) NEW CHAPTERS PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

4yr
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Crushingheavens

This is an awesome fanfic stop reading the reviews and read the novel you'll love it Seriously read it don't waste time here with my opinion go get your own by reading the novel just do it.

4yr
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jitu_dsouza

i like this novel because how it is op and how fast Pokemon gets stronger and system the small world idea to keep with you and in legendary Pokemon i think you should add Darkrai pokemon

4yr
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GHEEELEEEE

AxxaAa👍👍👍👍😀👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😀👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😀😀😀👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😀😀👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😀😀👍👍😀😀😀😀👍😀👍😀😀👍😀👍😀👍😀😀

4yr
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Kaizaki_GG

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faysal_muhumed

This is one of the best pokemon fanfiction I have ever read. I highly recommend this to anyone who wants to read a pokemon story. Just that good

4yr
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CalvinTheLeecher

It is a good light pokemon fic if you have nothing better to read you can give it a try, note: it has questionable things for certain pokemon connoisseurs and quite a few bad flags for self-insert regulars Personally, I think he has many cheats, some of them are not consistent with each other; He can steal data and do tasks, that alone is more than enough to reach the top not only in the world of pokemon but also in other types of worlds (See WoMW Leylin Farlier). Gacha, come on, that's super lazy. A minor world, legendary pokemons. A backpack with most (or all) of the Pokemon * 900 items up to B / W 2. Not to mention the system with "hidden tasks" is my personal enemy in the vast majority of stories. Anyone of those is enough to make a fic on your own, having them all not only makes it less serious, if not the point where they feel they are not taking advantage of it. Original Pokemon are fine as long as they are not abused, only one so far and it is an Eevee that sooner or later will bring out a dragon type in the canon. Many interactions are missing, it feels like a game record rather than a story, the MC does not interact with anyone, there are only actions and certain ones are quite ridiculous even by the pokemon standards. He doesn't seem to have a complete plan for the story, just a bunch of ideas stuck together like a collage, an experiment to say the least, or maybe a rough draft for a better story later when his writing gets better.

4yr
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Clown_Of_God

basically the story is of a guy on earth who dies and is reborn in the pokemon world in Pallet and he is a second Tobias with legendary pokemon and he doesn’t try hard and never lose..is a novel without salt basically

4yr
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Crushingheavens

Harem please harem please harem please harem please harem please harem please harem please harem please harem please harem please harem please harem please harem please harem please

4yr
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SiegFredSkill

I wish this fan fic will last until the sword and shield region. Author good luck in writing and also take break if you feel burn out or out of ideas. Keep us updated

揭示劇透
4yr
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PUJIT_FADTE_9415

ITS AWESOMEE,AND I HOPE THAT THE AUTHOR WILL NOT DROP THIS NOVEL AND WILL CONTINUE WRITING IT (7CHS/WEEK. SUGGESTION) NEW CHAPTERS PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

4yr
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Crushingheavens

This is an awesome fanfic stop reading the reviews and read the novel you'll love it Seriously read it don't waste time here with my opinion go get your own by reading the novel just do it.

4yr
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jitu_dsouza

i like this novel because how it is op and how fast Pokemon gets stronger and system the small world idea to keep with you and in legendary Pokemon i think you should add Darkrai pokemon

4yr
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GHEEELEEEE

AxxaAa👍👍👍👍😀👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😀👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😀😀😀👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😀😀👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😀😀👍👍😀😀😀😀👍😀👍😀😀👍😀👍😀👍😀😀

4yr
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Kaizaki_GG

🌟🔥🌟🔥🌟🔥🌟🔥🌟🔥🌟🔥🌟🔥🌟🔥🌟🔥🌟🔥🌟🔥🌟🔥🌟🔥🌟🔥🌟🔥🌟🔥🌟🔥🌟🔥🌟🔥🌟🔥🌟🔥🌟🔥🌟🔥🌟🔥🌟🔥🌟🔥🌟🔥🌟🔥🌟🔥🌟🔥🌟🔥🌟🔥🌟🔥🌟🔥🌟🔥🌟🔥🌟🔥🌟🔥🌟🔥🌟🔥🌟🔥🌟🔥🌟🔥🌟🔥🌟🔥🌟🔥🌟🔥🌟🔥🌟🔥🌟🔥🌟🔥🌟🔥🌟🔥🌟🔥🌟🔥🌟🔥🌟🔥 Keep it up.. Great work..

4yr
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