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寫檢討This story is completely different from the ones before. I was so surprised and amused and hope it gets a good comic adaptation. This isn't one of those where the ml does horrible stuff to her and just comes back and we're supposed to be okay with it. She is literally escaping for her life. I want to know more and just how much of a monster the ml is considering she does not want him to even catch a glimpse of her. Her backstory is also really amazing and adds a lot of substance to her character. Overall the story is great and I want more of it.
This is the first book which got my curiosity from the brief intro of the story the moment i read it...and after reading the first chapter it blows my mind away.....and I felt in love with this book instantly hehee....and of course not forgetting our dear Author for it's wonderful and amazing writing...it was so amazing i just love this book because this book is soooooo......amazing 😍😍😍😍😍 Please check this book......you will love it
I’m going to agree with everyone who’s posted that it’s captivating because it really is. Right from the beginning it draws you in and keeps you wanting to know more about the story and what will happen next. I have yet to finish the book but from what I’ve read so far it’s a must read. So don’t miss out!
Great story.. not like those Stockholm syndrome stories.. the female lead is a true fighting spirit.. love the plot so far.. can't wait for more... Please update 1 chapter atleast daily.. lots of love 💕😘😘😘
I hope this story gets finished & updated! It’s so captivating!! Amazing start author!! Can’t wait for the rest! 👏👏👏👏🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍
I wonder when the book will start update love the story but it's been long no new chapters love the book and waiting for updates hopefully author will get back soon
This store is Good And character are very good. Story development is good and i really like the Female character. overall i think this story need a head start of poor performance of updates so that we know what we r reading. Author please stop giving Excuse and update the story as its really Interesting story
I really love the flat of the story..i just hope she will stop running from him....,....................,..................😍😍😍👍👍👍🙏💪👊
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Amazing and captivating book uses words that are awesome and is a great read! make sure you are over age and do not have ptsd or anything bad related to metal health
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I looooove this novel! It is so fascinating and I love the main characters! So glad the damsel isn’t old fashioned and stands up for herself!!!
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Am in love with this novel.......so interesting,i can't get enough........♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
🥰🥰💘🥰💘 what it cost to bewitching him,,thanks to you author,love it☺️im so excited bout the next page,, more, please please 💌💌💌💌💘💘💘
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A Really good story so far, don't want to stop reading so I hate when I have to wait for more chapters 😃. Great job to the Author. Keep writing! Love it!
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Author please update fast!!! I'm dying of patience for the next chapter!!! Plot is really so awesome and realistic. The female lead is also a beauty with brains which makes this novel even more interesting. I hope you come back soon with multiple chapter updates!
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揭示劇透It is a very captivating story and I am bringing this story because it is so very good. I love how there is real life problems and how the plot develops at a consistent pace. Keep up the good work author👍
Wow!!!! The story is fabulous 👌👌👌 very good writing skills with just the right amount of description of characters and surroundings. Keep up the good work Author! Can't wait to read more and more.. sending my love and votes for you 🤗💞
This book is good. The readers can actually conceive the image of the author's imaginations. Keep it up. Check my novel also, title: Hidden Edges
Because ur story has high emotional rollercoaster rides. There are very positive characters and they are self efficient and motivated. We can read these chapters with smile on your face and positively in your heart.
Omg I could not wait to give this one a review I love you author and I am addicted to your book like cocaine! The story is so well written and descriptive! Love the way you write! My lovely Aleina I love you girl and hope you get stronger. I am so damn curious what's gonna happen next and what happened btw Alex and her! I hate her parents pls let them get hit by a train and die! And yes her sister too!The way you write the pain of Aleina is so heartfelt,I weep for her and this crushed my heart! This novel is so well written! I am super proud of you author and never ever stop writing it, I will be sending my ** daily and comment your chapters! Love you author! Fighting!
Starting this novel with a goose chase was a rather interesting take. It was refreshing to read. Although, it was a scene set in the future, so it somehow made me lean towards that occurrence rather than being mystified. It's like I know what's going to happen already so the suspense was cut off. However, it was still a good narration! Aleina's parents are such aholes, that I just want to be a character in this story and slap them repeatedly, Sabrina too. No wonder that the future Aleina can fend for herself against Alex, because she grew up with such psychopaths that she had to cultivate the strength in her heart and mind. I'm vouching for Aleina x Aiden (please don't kill me) I love that Aleina still has such adorable innocence despite the ordeal she's suffering from her parents' unreasonable favouritism. I do have qualms in some incorrect verb tenses in your passages, but they're easily corrected so no worries. Watch out for run-ons and comma splices resulting from absence/misuse of punctuation marks. Overall, the pacing was quite the average, not hasty or slow, just the right one. I love that you're not skimping on your descriptions. For me, it's better to read wordy scenic descriptions rather than some simple adjectives. Please be confident in your writing skills! I'll be supporting you! (Please don't hate me for my presumptuous comment :<)
揭示劇透This story is completely different from the ones before. I was so surprised and amused and hope it gets a good comic adaptation. This isn't one of those where the ml does horrible stuff to her and just comes back and we're supposed to be okay with it. She is literally escaping for her life. I want to know more and just how much of a monster the ml is considering she does not want him to even catch a glimpse of her. Her backstory is also really amazing and adds a lot of substance to her character. Overall the story is great and I want more of it.
This is the first book which got my curiosity from the brief intro of the story the moment i read it...and after reading the first chapter it blows my mind away.....and I felt in love with this book instantly hehee....and of course not forgetting our dear Author for it's wonderful and amazing writing...it was so amazing i just love this book because this book is soooooo......amazing 😍😍😍😍😍 Please check this book......you will love it
I’m going to agree with everyone who’s posted that it’s captivating because it really is. Right from the beginning it draws you in and keeps you wanting to know more about the story and what will happen next. I have yet to finish the book but from what I’ve read so far it’s a must read. So don’t miss out!
Great story.. not like those Stockholm syndrome stories.. the female lead is a true fighting spirit.. love the plot so far.. can't wait for more... Please update 1 chapter atleast daily.. lots of love 💕😘😘😘
I hope this story gets finished & updated! It’s so captivating!! Amazing start author!! Can’t wait for the rest! 👏👏👏👏🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍
I wonder when the book will start update love the story but it's been long no new chapters love the book and waiting for updates hopefully author will get back soon
This store is Good And character are very good. Story development is good and i really like the Female character. overall i think this story need a head start of poor performance of updates so that we know what we r reading. Author please stop giving Excuse and update the story as its really Interesting story
I really love the flat of the story..i just hope she will stop running from him....,....................,..................😍😍😍👍👍👍🙏💪👊
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Amazing and captivating book uses words that are awesome and is a great read! make sure you are over age and do not have ptsd or anything bad related to metal health
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I looooove this novel! It is so fascinating and I love the main characters! So glad the damsel isn’t old fashioned and stands up for herself!!!
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Am in love with this novel.......so interesting,i can't get enough........♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
🥰🥰💘🥰💘 what it cost to bewitching him,,thanks to you author,love it☺️im so excited bout the next page,, more, please please 💌💌💌💌💘💘💘
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A Really good story so far, don't want to stop reading so I hate when I have to wait for more chapters 😃. Great job to the Author. Keep writing! Love it!
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Author please update fast!!! I'm dying of patience for the next chapter!!! Plot is really so awesome and realistic. The female lead is also a beauty with brains which makes this novel even more interesting. I hope you come back soon with multiple chapter updates!
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揭示劇透It is a very captivating story and I am bringing this story because it is so very good. I love how there is real life problems and how the plot develops at a consistent pace. Keep up the good work author👍
Wow!!!! The story is fabulous 👌👌👌 very good writing skills with just the right amount of description of characters and surroundings. Keep up the good work Author! Can't wait to read more and more.. sending my love and votes for you 🤗💞
This book is good. The readers can actually conceive the image of the author's imaginations. Keep it up. Check my novel also, title: Hidden Edges
Because ur story has high emotional rollercoaster rides. There are very positive characters and they are self efficient and motivated. We can read these chapters with smile on your face and positively in your heart.
Omg I could not wait to give this one a review I love you author and I am addicted to your book like cocaine! The story is so well written and descriptive! Love the way you write! My lovely Aleina I love you girl and hope you get stronger. I am so damn curious what's gonna happen next and what happened btw Alex and her! I hate her parents pls let them get hit by a train and die! And yes her sister too!The way you write the pain of Aleina is so heartfelt,I weep for her and this crushed my heart! This novel is so well written! I am super proud of you author and never ever stop writing it, I will be sending my ** daily and comment your chapters! Love you author! Fighting!
Starting this novel with a goose chase was a rather interesting take. It was refreshing to read. Although, it was a scene set in the future, so it somehow made me lean towards that occurrence rather than being mystified. It's like I know what's going to happen already so the suspense was cut off. However, it was still a good narration! Aleina's parents are such aholes, that I just want to be a character in this story and slap them repeatedly, Sabrina too. No wonder that the future Aleina can fend for herself against Alex, because she grew up with such psychopaths that she had to cultivate the strength in her heart and mind. I'm vouching for Aleina x Aiden (please don't kill me) I love that Aleina still has such adorable innocence despite the ordeal she's suffering from her parents' unreasonable favouritism. I do have qualms in some incorrect verb tenses in your passages, but they're easily corrected so no worries. Watch out for run-ons and comma splices resulting from absence/misuse of punctuation marks. Overall, the pacing was quite the average, not hasty or slow, just the right one. I love that you're not skimping on your descriptions. For me, it's better to read wordy scenic descriptions rather than some simple adjectives. Please be confident in your writing skills! I'll be supporting you! (Please don't hate me for my presumptuous comment :<)
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