Master Of Sports System

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LovableBerry

As any other shameless author am rating this great story with five stars! why? because I am the author and not to mention I spend a lot of time thinking about how to make this story entertaining and compelling to read. There may be some spelling or grammatical errors here and there but that's normal since this poor author has no editor. However, the author is always up for suggestions and interacting with his readers. Hope you enjoy!

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Luffy_Soares

moooooooooooooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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Just_Alan

It is a sports novel with a MC who has a system, the story is set in a future world with a twist. I liked the world building of this novel, the author didnt go full blown info dump for setting the world which imo is a plus. Also loved how you changed the sport volleyball to power volleyball to match the current world setting, which makes it interesting to read. It is a fast paced novel but i liked the interactions between the MC and his team, it was enjoyable. I did find that the system was not mentioned much in the lastest few chapters, it feels like the author forgot about it or something. But nonetheless i found the story pretty interesting snd enjoyable. I would also like some more character development for MC, but as this review is posted for the first 14 chapters i think it will be done in the future. Give this story a try if you are looking for a story with a powerful MC with a system take on a sport. Keep it up author, will look forward for more chapters 👍

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Vergin_till_now

U lovelyberry if u drop this i am gonna eat u whole...😇👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👍👍👍👍👍👍👌😍😍😍😍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👍👍👍👍👍👍

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Anonymous_0868

Great story great characters i just hope to see more chapters soon. To the writer i hope your still fine and well.

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IdioticDork

This is a great story😌, Although there are some mistakes it’s barely recognizable and I hope🙏 the author will release more👀 chapters— Even just a little bit more🤏

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I like the story! Especially the MC but I kinda like hate(?) his attitude a bit but no hate alright? I love the world background. Plus I hate ikemen lol 😂😂.

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free_spirit_reader

Great Novel! It's background is solid. The writing is also great almost zero mistakes in spelling. MC is also OP. Love the entertainment. Love the system not to controling of the MC. Rating this 4 out of 5. Great novel, loved reading it! And I'm expecting more of your writing.

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SiegFredSkill

I like the story but i don't like that music is added

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Mudd

Writing Quality: the words are understandable and very clear, there no confusion in using different words from the author to express his words. Story Development: the story is a piece of art, that is all the word i have for the story. Character Design: the characters are detailed and clear, and there is no missing information about them. World Background: the world is to me a unique kind of world, because we all hear about words that suddenly have a fantasy influence to it, but in this story here, the humans are not described as badly as one would think they would.

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Vergin_till_now

Just read it man.. Op mc fucks the bc( beta chracters) And rest u already know......🐵🐵🐵🐵🐵🐵🐵🤝👌👌👌👌🖖🖖🖖🖖👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👍👍👍👍👍👍🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙

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Etiger789

I wish there were more chapters but I'll be a patient boy. 140 charachters 140 charachters 140 charachters 140 charachters. 140 charachters 140 charachters 140 charachters 140 charachters.

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tianen

I think that your story, as well as your idea is very good. It would really suit my tastes but unfortunately, and without any offense, your way of putting the content into sentences that inspire the fantasy are not enough to match the niveau of your idea. I praise you for your effort but in my opinion it would be even better if you wrote it in a better way even if your uploads decrease.

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Dicecode011

it becomes one of my favorite novel . pls update fast thanks ................... ........I.......... l. l. l. l. l. l l llllllll lllllll l ....................