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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact kenreview@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
An overpowered MC is funny at first, but it becomes boring pretty soon, there are no stakes or tension, no struggle or hard work, nothing feels earned this way. and I mean it’s funny at first, but after 50 chapters it becomes boring. Btw this is far from being the only problem of the novel, the writing style could use some improvement and the characters and worldbuilding are quite shallow.
He is a very strong and good right now I don’tdon’t is the way you toto trrrttt was the way I getget II I getgetgetget was the way you can do itit the
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How this got so many good stars i have no idea. the characters have no background, the setting does not exist, and plot holes are everywhere. it has a good premise but it was executed in a poor way.
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Well i read 50 chapters, the Mc is stupid or that's how I felt, why would someone go live alone thousands of miles away from his parents house, and in the lowest rank city, he have money why don't use it for the right thing, his parents don't care about him living his life like pig, I could understand if they ignored it for 6 months a year but not 4 years living as pig, After reading 50 chapters I couldn't continue reading it any more
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Hi, This is Tynan, I am an editor from another platform that focuses on adventurous Genre Fictions. After reading your “Overpowered Soul Transmigrate In Apocalypse ”, I decided to contact you and if possible, to extend you an invitation on distributing your works. However, there are so little I can talk about it here. If you were interested, please contact me via geekyteddyyo@gmail.com, then I should take opportunity to discuss it with you in detail. It was a great pleasure to meet your story. Sincerely Tynan
this is a new approach with urban +zombies+cultivation+technology.It is a good read if you are looking among the recently released novels. It also has a non-overproud MC.
Hi there! Do you know there is a LitRPG writing contest? You might be a competitive participant and take the chance to win up to $3,000! Please Google LUTAW_writing_contest or Supreme Me Fiction Writing Contest to find out more! This contest is free entry and open to any writer at any country. If you had any query, please feel free to contact litrpgwritingcontest_review@hotmail.com Good luck for writing!
How this got so many good stars i have no idea. the characters have no background, the setting does not exist, and plot holes are everywhere. it has a good premise but it was executed in a poor way.
Needs to work a little more on the grammer, the premise is alright so far but some minor loopholes in story. Might continue to read to see where it goes but hard to say.
Good Novel!! I love everything about it >_< nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say,
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This story got lot of potential, I had fun reading it....But I am greatly sadden by the horrendous grammar(especially improper commas), I had to shut down by brain to read it. If Author-san can fix/improve the grammar, readers might enjoy your novel more. P.S: You could edit the earlier chapters for move viewers.
I quite liked this unfortunately its now behind what I consider a paywall so I'm dropping GL I guess. Also screw the 140 characters requirement its stupid.
Great story but the grammar is horrible I mostly have to fix it in my head to understand what a section is telling me and some of most of the time I just give up trying to understand and just skip it...
Hahahahaha! Normally, I'd be cursing the novel for taking so long in it's mainstory but f*ck he's just to funny!!!! Love the novel!!!!!!!!!!
Are you writing a novel or a movie? Dude it's we novel not movie script. But I like it. The characters the storyline especially Feng Mein past I must say that this novel is excellent
The support you have shown for my novel is amazing i thank you from the bottom of my heartaww. I have slowly started reading your book and i have to say that it is intresting and excellent
The story was good so far and the pace was just right. So far from I've read, the grammar was good and there were barely a mistake. Nice world building and it was well thought. Please don't stop writing for you've earned a reader. Thank you for your review on mine.
The story is captivating, in fact it got me hooked. Its classical, the writing is of good quality and so entertaining. I love every bit of each chapter. Nice work author.
The actual writkng ks good but the story is Somewhat nonsensical. Introducing characthers and ”things” that happened in the past without them being relevant to the story. It is not worth to add something which shouldnt be there in the first place. for eXample his ”ghost son”. isnt that just the author being willful, adding whatever
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact kenreview@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
An overpowered MC is funny at first, but it becomes boring pretty soon, there are no stakes or tension, no struggle or hard work, nothing feels earned this way. and I mean it’s funny at first, but after 50 chapters it becomes boring. Btw this is far from being the only problem of the novel, the writing style could use some improvement and the characters and worldbuilding are quite shallow.
He is a very strong and good right now I don’tdon’t is the way you toto trrrttt was the way I getget II I getgetgetget was the way you can do itit the
[img=faceslap][img=update][img=faceslap][img=update][img=faceslap][img=update][img=faceslap][img=update][img=faceslap][img=update][img=faceslap][img=update][img=faceslap]
How this got so many good stars i have no idea. the characters have no background, the setting does not exist, and plot holes are everywhere. it has a good premise but it was executed in a poor way.
揭示劇透 Well i read 50 chapters, the Mc is stupid or that's how I felt, why would someone go live alone thousands of miles away from his parents house, and in the lowest rank city, he have money why don't use it for the right thing, his parents don't care about him living his life like pig, I could understand if they ignored it for 6 months a year but not 4 years living as pig, After reading 50 chapters I couldn't continue reading it any more
揭示劇透 Hi, This is Tynan, I am an editor from another platform that focuses on adventurous Genre Fictions. After reading your “Overpowered Soul Transmigrate In Apocalypse ”, I decided to contact you and if possible, to extend you an invitation on distributing your works. However, there are so little I can talk about it here. If you were interested, please contact me via geekyteddyyo@gmail.com, then I should take opportunity to discuss it with you in detail. It was a great pleasure to meet your story. Sincerely Tynan
this is a new approach with urban +zombies+cultivation+technology.It is a good read if you are looking among the recently released novels. It also has a non-overproud MC.
Hi there! Do you know there is a LitRPG writing contest? You might be a competitive participant and take the chance to win up to $3,000! Please Google LUTAW_writing_contest or Supreme Me Fiction Writing Contest to find out more! This contest is free entry and open to any writer at any country. If you had any query, please feel free to contact litrpgwritingcontest_review@hotmail.com Good luck for writing!
How this got so many good stars i have no idea. the characters have no background, the setting does not exist, and plot holes are everywhere. it has a good premise but it was executed in a poor way.
Needs to work a little more on the grammer, the premise is alright so far but some minor loopholes in story. Might continue to read to see where it goes but hard to say.
Good Novel!! I love everything about it >_< nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say,
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This story got lot of potential, I had fun reading it....But I am greatly sadden by the horrendous grammar(especially improper commas), I had to shut down by brain to read it. If Author-san can fix/improve the grammar, readers might enjoy your novel more. P.S: You could edit the earlier chapters for move viewers.
I quite liked this unfortunately its now behind what I consider a paywall so I'm dropping GL I guess. Also screw the 140 characters requirement its stupid.
Great story but the grammar is horrible I mostly have to fix it in my head to understand what a section is telling me and some of most of the time I just give up trying to understand and just skip it...
Hahahahaha! Normally, I'd be cursing the novel for taking so long in it's mainstory but f*ck he's just to funny!!!! Love the novel!!!!!!!!!!
Are you writing a novel or a movie? Dude it's we novel not movie script. But I like it. The characters the storyline especially Feng Mein past I must say that this novel is excellent
The support you have shown for my novel is amazing i thank you from the bottom of my heartaww. I have slowly started reading your book and i have to say that it is intresting and excellent
The story was good so far and the pace was just right. So far from I've read, the grammar was good and there were barely a mistake. Nice world building and it was well thought. Please don't stop writing for you've earned a reader. Thank you for your review on mine.
The story is captivating, in fact it got me hooked. Its classical, the writing is of good quality and so entertaining. I love every bit of each chapter. Nice work author.
The actual writkng ks good but the story is Somewhat nonsensical. Introducing characthers and ”things” that happened in the past without them being relevant to the story. It is not worth to add something which shouldnt be there in the first place. for eXample his ”ghost son”. isnt that just the author being willful, adding whatever