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I think it is my second time I give 5 out 5. I rarely do it. However, this story just is that good. The author spills imagination all over the place. Sarcasm, humor, intensity, and even mystery. All cooked up in an apocalyptic plot. I wouldn't believe that it could work out but it does work o_O! There are some typos here and there but I wouldn't bother. If you get paid, then you can hire someone to proofread it. The story is rich enough to make you ignore some misspellings. I love the main character so far and hope the author would not trash him with some banality. He is too unique to be stained lol! I have no criticism. For one, I am a new author and second - the world background (which I am obsessed with, in general) rocks. You make a solid world and I become your fan! This is how it works with me lol. Good job. I will keep the story in my library even after the review. (:
The novel is really interesting. Hope u won't stop writing otherwise u will go bald. Keep on building the plot slowly. (ヘ･_･)ヘ┳━┳(ヘ･_･)ヘ┳━┳(ヘ･_･)ヘ┳━┳(ヘ･_･)ヘ┳━┳(ヘ･_･)ヘ┳━┳(ヘ･_･)ヘ┳━┳(ヘ･_･)ヘ┳━┳(ヘ･_･)ヘ┳━┳(ヘ･_･)ヘ┳━┳
An overpowered MC is funny at first, but it becomes boring pretty soon, there are no stakes or tension, no struggle or hard work, nothing feels earned this way. and I mean it’s funny at first, but after 50 chapters it becomes boring. Btw this is far from being the only problem of the novel, the writing style could use some improvement and the characters and worldbuilding are quite shallow.
How this got so many good stars i have no idea. the characters have no background, the setting does not exist, and plot holes are everywhere. it has a good premise but it was executed in a poor way.
Great story but the grammar is horrible I mostly have to fix it in my head to understand what a section is telling me and some of most of the time I just give up trying to understand and just skip it...
I like the writing quality the most in this story, with lots of detailed scenes that make you feel immersed in the story. However, there are some grammatical errors and I would suggest the author to get a proofreader. The world background seems to be close to nonexistent, I feel like I understand nothing that is going on besides the current events (apocalypse). At first, I thought the MC went back to the past to Earth and returned to his original body since he seemed so used to life as a wealthy tycoon, but then he didn't know that there was a meteorite. The MC showed no emotion at being reincarnated and having another chance or whatever, confusing me because didn't he die of a battle with his enemy? Doesn't he want to go back to the other world to see his disciples since he apparently didn't want to lose his memories? And how could he be lazing around for 4 years doing nothing? Did he even have parents in his previous life? In addition, what type of person is he if he ignores his parents who apparently dotes on him so heavily that he doesn't even have to go outside? I thought he's lived in an ancient Chinese-based Xianxia world (swords and white robes) for millions of years? Those types of worlds value filial piety a lot. What is the point of him transmigrating if he makes decisions as if he didn't? Also, what is Mian Corporation (sorry, I'm writing based on memory)? A normal company cannot survive a meteorite that affects the entire world so easily. Sorry, I kind of rambled. But I feel like the world background is the most serious issue here. Don't be pressured by this harsh review though, just write the best that you can :) Good luck!
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Those who follow the path on Doomsday will not be losers. Choosing a path means a lot to a person whether he sees light green gardens or fire. If a man can maintain his humanity, consider that he has lived his life not in vain. The author has a beautiful style, the text block is exquisite. I hope the author will be able in his novel to show that a good person always remains such, so as not to be among the losers and see the fire.
the author obviously has high potential. truelly original ideas and thought out design.. down side is he lets the stories jump around like a baboon on meth
This story got lot of potential, I had fun reading it....But I am greatly sadden by the horrendous grammar(especially improper commas), I had to shut down by brain to read it. If Author-san can fix/improve the grammar, readers might enjoy your novel more. P.S: You could edit the earlier chapters for move viewers.
story just trys a little to hard to be mysterious and funny while at the same time trying to be super action packed. It could work if the author put more time into the foundation of the story but seems like he didn’t. To many things trying to happen at the same time makes the flow of the story kinda weak and uninteresting.
your story is interesting with so much spice.There is not much to comment on grammar as it's fine.your story is one to be hooked with. The pace of the story with it's character framing is done pretty nicely.Good luck .
I love how the writer exert an effort in creating a vividly detailed story. The usage of words are well chosen that the readers immediately grasp what does the writer is trying to narrate.
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Its great and I like the plot the only thing is that their is to many filler chapters it could have to do with webnovel but its hard to read the whole things if I have to constantly pay for chapters that don't have much meaning to the story and could be combined with other chapters
Mediocre, the only people who would like this would chunnibyuu and isekai japanese genre people. It was very frustarting reading this and i am not a fan of mecha/Zombies either. the onky reason i gave a 3 was because the author seems like he axtuallt put some thought Into it unlike other novels on this app.
A simple and funny apocalpsye novel with an op mc. Comedys pretty good and I like the characters so far. But my biggest peeve with the story is the major grammar and writing errors throughout the story. Sometimes I feel like I'm reading an mtl and at certain points I cant even understand whats happening. I know its tough managing checks on each chapter while keeping a constant schedule but if he can clean it up, this novel will improve majorly.
How this got so many good stars i have no idea. the characters have no background, the setting does not exist, and plot holes are everywhere. it has a good premise but it was executed in a poor way.
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Needs to work a little more on the grammer, the premise is alright so far but some minor loopholes in story. Might continue to read to see where it goes but hard to say.
The support you have shown for my novel is amazing i thank you from the bottom of my heartaww. I have slowly started reading your book and i have to say that it is intresting and excellent
This is a riotously fun novel. There's no other way to say it. The slightly stunted writing gives it charm, which works well with the comedic air. There is no doubt that it's a great story as well. There is a lot of context which makes the story feel real within the absurdity. I'm a sucker for both science-magic fusion and reincarnation, and this really ticks those boxes. The author is also posting super consistently. They're forging ahead with no sign of stopping! I recommend you strap in and follow on ASAP.