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decent Story. definitely Scratched an itch of Mine. good Job and thank you author :)
It was such a wild ride, just finished the entire thing, Everything leading up to the ending was beautiful although it was quite rushed for my tastes but it was a beautiful journey none the less, Thank you Authour, for showing me something wonderful, now if you'll excuse, I'll be feeling the full-on assault of THAT depressing feeling of when you finish any series also called Book Hangover, Thank you Authour. (p.s.: I rated the Uploads as a 4 cuz i don't remember how fast it updates before so yeah cheers 🥂)
Nothing makes me more sad then finally seeing the end of this story yet it made me happy seeing how amazing it turned out thank you so much for this wonderful journey of a story
I would like to share my experience with this story, as it has ended and years has passed ever since I started reading this. In all honesty, at the start of the story, I was having an 'icky' feeling because of how Will (MC) behaves, which may deter others from continuing in reading the story, however, as you go on and read further, you will grow attach to Will, sure it may sometimes be cringe or you might have different ways on doing things. But, this is what made me feel fond to Will, because of his ways. The writing is fine, you can visualize what's happening and sense the emotions on the text. World building is great, it portrays what's happening, how it turned to be, it answered some questions that I had, although there were some that is still a mystery to me. (Seas were only talked about at the last part, but I guess it didn't serve anything to the story.) All in all, I recommend this story to anyone. If you read this, please do give it a try. There are other things that I want to tell, but due to this being my first time making a review and english not being my native language, I couldn't form words or sentences that I wanted to share about this story, so pardon me for my lackluster review.
this story is awesome. also, this story and the author always make good story until completed/end.anyway. for reader who like craft-like story, this story is the best for you.
I have just completed reading this novel, and I have to say it is Amazing!I know the beginning can put some people off but it's only up from there.I won't spoil anything so all I have to say is give it a go.(and thank you author for this masterpiece!)10/10 would read again
Isn't this "What if terraria and Minecraft have a son"? novel. I really like that title than this... anyway imma reread it
the author has an interesting premise for the story and the pacing is satisfying enough, however he has somehow managed to write the most hatable characters on planet earth! seriously besides will himself i dont think I have come to like even one frequently reoccurring character. I liked jack and sam but they just stop showing up at some point, i like clement but he hardly appears at all! There are also way to many plotlines that keep getting forgotten and then remembered and then forgotten again. again i can not stress how much i loathe the characters in this story almost all of them are stupid, entitled or otherwise insane. 6 out of ten interesting enough to hold my attention for the 50 chapters I read, but characters to unbearable to continue reading.
The first few chapters really Sucked. They were so bad that I almost stopped reading it all together.But I'm glad I didn't, cause it ended up being one of my favorite novels on here.The black sun chapter was the turning point of the quality of the story, and it only kept getting better from that point forward.
This is dumb, never recomending. I feel like I lose braincells reading this cringy BS.
Without a doubt, this has been the most insteresting story I have ever read, perhaps it's not everyone's cup of tea, But it's by far a ubique story, diferent from other common stories with cliché development, perhaps It started a bit slow But you can easily relate with the MC and the romántic interés is not a brainless development But a wholehearted attempt at a good relativo ship, I hope to see more of this story, so far It has not disappointed me at all.
My honest review. I love minecraft, i love terraria, but this mc has lost a lot of intelligence and a grinding mindset that seems to be lacking as well. The world seems a bit too forced as well sometimes which is really- not helping me like the the reading. Also it’s trying way too hard to be grimm dark but honestly… it’s not very good because it’s a story that doesn’t really want the reader anything to be satisfied with. Plot after plot but they are pretty much a summary of events. Character interaction is good though, i like how family became a focus of the story. Writting auality is readable which makes this aut hor really great And overall if i’m a bit more bored. I can try again to finish this story
love the book and the way it is going the only thing i have is sometimes theres a break but other than that everything is amazing
I would like to see you make a terraria novle it would be quite interesting Why are you still here •-•
After a long consideration, I find that now's a good time to post the review. I really liked how consistent the MC's character are from pre to post yeeting into another world by unknown entity/summoning. From clueless and still naive civilian young lass, then undergoes the trial of fire as he tried to survive which molded his more mature + realistic perspective in the late chapter. Also, I find it amusing to watch his journey of trying to understand the full potential of the crafting power that's unfortunately only bottlenecked by his puny creativity XD XD XD Plus I liked the fact that despite the convenience of his power, he still have to put in a lot of work to develop them in order to compensate his weaknesses. In terms of overall plot, honestly, I could've sworn that I noticed that the author is taking jabs at the cliche Isekai theme involving immature school brats. Which is a refreshing change for me, because it always irk me that majority of Isekai authors tend to ignore the consequences of summoning unwilling people from earth(immature ones moreover.....) that's living in bloodless peace their whole life. Whew, that's a lot to write. To summarize, if you like Isekai story whose MC's power involves crafting and prefers to watch the journey of MC's steady growth independently within the new unknown world, this story is for you :) The side characters are likable too, they each have enough depths to leave impression to readers without being neither too shallow nor complicated. and with the icing of "bleak reality" of isekai-ing immature brats in masses for the reader's amusement XD
I absolutely love underdog stories this is no doubt one lf my top 10 underdog fanfictions I can't wait to see the next chapter thank you author
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i find this story realy enyoiable the ckaracter devolpment is realy good in my eyes WILL begins as realy meh and hm ckaracter but later on you see realy how he changes and how he develops i binge read all chapters once i found this story realy a nice and good one i hope you will contuie this story still for long OH yeah i hope realy that the dragon loli gets her revenge and WILL to against veronica heh nad that big black dragon yeah i hope WILL can deal with that montain sized dragon oh he could make like REALY BIG MEACHA golem or many big gundams or flying golems an army of flyng meach or gundam golems heh BUT realy nice story i think i said waht i wanted to say oh and when new chapter comes out i am gona
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I really enjoying it so far im like 70 something chapters in as ive been reading it over this past day and a half. So far im left hoping that the updates continue at a steady rate because as i said ive really been enjoying reading your novel so far 👌
Sorry English not my first language . It started interesting, but as it go i start to doubt that mc have brain at all, he behave as 13 kid and it is just lame. As for world itself it also have logic problems, plain characters, plain background, stupid motivation and some boring/expected/crynge sitcom situations. mb i just too old for this story, or just being tired, but i looked so much to read story with this desc ription and story just don‘t what i was expecting. instead of sandbox/kingdombuild with some story and exploring, we have just mc insert in another world with stange story, plain characters and poor another things. mb i just expected another things, from this novel(
Hey author I just wanted to tell you that this is my absolute favorite novel and that it has caused me immense happiness!!! This novel has an incredible mc, cool plot elements(system), characters that both make sense and are likeable(Adeline, Riaz), and just a really good plot progression! I'm not sure where the plot is going but that's ok because it's entertaining! TLDR: LOVE THIS, BOOK GO FUNNY HAHA, HAPPY NEW YEARS!!!
Great story Good character development Nice pace Update: Erratic but normal Potential is great World background is not overly complicated All in all I think it's a great story with a great potential. Must read for those who wants some good stories
Hey! Good day to you! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email mollyringdom*@*gmail.com (delete *）We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). Looking forward to your email soon.
Hey author, this book is really good and I need more fast. Can you recommend any similar books? Note: I've already read killer of MC's Thanks!
74 chapters in. I'm not sure if I should call it a shameless hybrid novel as in part game advertisement part fantasy novel, since it kept quoting popular games. But yeah it does makes me want to replay Minecraft and Terraria. Surprisingly the MC character is well thought, he also needs to learn his 'craft' by trial and error, not suddenly 'mastered' everything, and he did lots of mistakes. The world is uniquely different than usual medieval fantasy, hey, guns and assault rifles are common here. The story telling is good so far. Though the MC become overgeared and utterly broken after he got better materials and evolved his "pet", it's still exciting somehow. I like it that even it's being a video game it doesn't have level system, nor the overused classic D&D system. The MC must rely on equipment only and buff his HP. My only regret with it is the really slow progress of new chapters, like .... once a week?
Finished reading killer of mcs and read this one till the latest chapter I can say it got me hooked till the end though the ‘justice will prevail’ mentality of some characters is annoying, which is fine considering the personality of the mc Not bad author, continue writing
nah man you forgot the game that stands above them this game alone is the honored one and that game is Stardew Valley. Man Concerned Ape is the goat making such a great game all by himself the ost the art the coding everything.
decent Story. definitely Scratched an itch of Mine. good Job and thank you author :)
It was such a wild ride, just finished the entire thing, Everything leading up to the ending was beautiful although it was quite rushed for my tastes but it was a beautiful journey none the less, Thank you Authour, for showing me something wonderful, now if you'll excuse, I'll be feeling the full-on assault of THAT depressing feeling of when you finish any series also called Book Hangover, Thank you Authour. (p.s.: I rated the Uploads as a 4 cuz i don't remember how fast it updates before so yeah cheers 🥂)
Nothing makes me more sad then finally seeing the end of this story yet it made me happy seeing how amazing it turned out thank you so much for this wonderful journey of a story
I would like to share my experience with this story, as it has ended and years has passed ever since I started reading this. In all honesty, at the start of the story, I was having an 'icky' feeling because of how Will (MC) behaves, which may deter others from continuing in reading the story, however, as you go on and read further, you will grow attach to Will, sure it may sometimes be cringe or you might have different ways on doing things. But, this is what made me feel fond to Will, because of his ways. The writing is fine, you can visualize what's happening and sense the emotions on the text. World building is great, it portrays what's happening, how it turned to be, it answered some questions that I had, although there were some that is still a mystery to me. (Seas were only talked about at the last part, but I guess it didn't serve anything to the story.) All in all, I recommend this story to anyone. If you read this, please do give it a try. There are other things that I want to tell, but due to this being my first time making a review and english not being my native language, I couldn't form words or sentences that I wanted to share about this story, so pardon me for my lackluster review.
this story is awesome. also, this story and the author always make good story until completed/end.anyway. for reader who like craft-like story, this story is the best for you.
I have just completed reading this novel, and I have to say it is Amazing!I know the beginning can put some people off but it's only up from there.I won't spoil anything so all I have to say is give it a go.(and thank you author for this masterpiece!)10/10 would read again
Isn't this "What if terraria and Minecraft have a son"? novel. I really like that title than this... anyway imma reread it
the author has an interesting premise for the story and the pacing is satisfying enough, however he has somehow managed to write the most hatable characters on planet earth! seriously besides will himself i dont think I have come to like even one frequently reoccurring character. I liked jack and sam but they just stop showing up at some point, i like clement but he hardly appears at all! There are also way to many plotlines that keep getting forgotten and then remembered and then forgotten again. again i can not stress how much i loathe the characters in this story almost all of them are stupid, entitled or otherwise insane. 6 out of ten interesting enough to hold my attention for the 50 chapters I read, but characters to unbearable to continue reading.
The first few chapters really Sucked. They were so bad that I almost stopped reading it all together.But I'm glad I didn't, cause it ended up being one of my favorite novels on here.The black sun chapter was the turning point of the quality of the story, and it only kept getting better from that point forward.
This is dumb, never recomending. I feel like I lose braincells reading this cringy BS.
Without a doubt, this has been the most insteresting story I have ever read, perhaps it's not everyone's cup of tea, But it's by far a ubique story, diferent from other common stories with cliché development, perhaps It started a bit slow But you can easily relate with the MC and the romántic interés is not a brainless development But a wholehearted attempt at a good relativo ship, I hope to see more of this story, so far It has not disappointed me at all.
My honest review. I love minecraft, i love terraria, but this mc has lost a lot of intelligence and a grinding mindset that seems to be lacking as well. The world seems a bit too forced as well sometimes which is really- not helping me like the the reading. Also it’s trying way too hard to be grimm dark but honestly… it’s not very good because it’s a story that doesn’t really want the reader anything to be satisfied with. Plot after plot but they are pretty much a summary of events. Character interaction is good though, i like how family became a focus of the story. Writting auality is readable which makes this aut hor really great And overall if i’m a bit more bored. I can try again to finish this story
love the book and the way it is going the only thing i have is sometimes theres a break but other than that everything is amazing
I would like to see you make a terraria novle it would be quite interesting Why are you still here •-•
After a long consideration, I find that now's a good time to post the review. I really liked how consistent the MC's character are from pre to post yeeting into another world by unknown entity/summoning. From clueless and still naive civilian young lass, then undergoes the trial of fire as he tried to survive which molded his more mature + realistic perspective in the late chapter. Also, I find it amusing to watch his journey of trying to understand the full potential of the crafting power that's unfortunately only bottlenecked by his puny creativity XD XD XD Plus I liked the fact that despite the convenience of his power, he still have to put in a lot of work to develop them in order to compensate his weaknesses. In terms of overall plot, honestly, I could've sworn that I noticed that the author is taking jabs at the cliche Isekai theme involving immature school brats. Which is a refreshing change for me, because it always irk me that majority of Isekai authors tend to ignore the consequences of summoning unwilling people from earth(immature ones moreover.....) that's living in bloodless peace their whole life. Whew, that's a lot to write. To summarize, if you like Isekai story whose MC's power involves crafting and prefers to watch the journey of MC's steady growth independently within the new unknown world, this story is for you :) The side characters are likable too, they each have enough depths to leave impression to readers without being neither too shallow nor complicated. and with the icing of "bleak reality" of isekai-ing immature brats in masses for the reader's amusement XD
I absolutely love underdog stories this is no doubt one lf my top 10 underdog fanfictions I can't wait to see the next chapter thank you author
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i find this story realy enyoiable the ckaracter devolpment is realy good in my eyes WILL begins as realy meh and hm ckaracter but later on you see realy how he changes and how he develops i binge read all chapters once i found this story realy a nice and good one i hope you will contuie this story still for long OH yeah i hope realy that the dragon loli gets her revenge and WILL to against veronica heh nad that big black dragon yeah i hope WILL can deal with that montain sized dragon oh he could make like REALY BIG MEACHA golem or many big gundams or flying golems an army of flyng meach or gundam golems heh BUT realy nice story i think i said waht i wanted to say oh and when new chapter comes out i am gona
揭示劇透 I really enjoying it so far im like 70 something chapters in as ive been reading it over this past day and a half. So far im left hoping that the updates continue at a steady rate because as i said ive really been enjoying reading your novel so far 👌
Sorry English not my first language . It started interesting, but as it go i start to doubt that mc have brain at all, he behave as 13 kid and it is just lame. As for world itself it also have logic problems, plain characters, plain background, stupid motivation and some boring/expected/crynge sitcom situations. mb i just too old for this story, or just being tired, but i looked so much to read story with this desc ription and story just don‘t what i was expecting. instead of sandbox/kingdombuild with some story and exploring, we have just mc insert in another world with stange story, plain characters and poor another things. mb i just expected another things, from this novel(
Hey author I just wanted to tell you that this is my absolute favorite novel and that it has caused me immense happiness!!! This novel has an incredible mc, cool plot elements(system), characters that both make sense and are likeable(Adeline, Riaz), and just a really good plot progression! I'm not sure where the plot is going but that's ok because it's entertaining! TLDR: LOVE THIS, BOOK GO FUNNY HAHA, HAPPY NEW YEARS!!!
Great story Good character development Nice pace Update: Erratic but normal Potential is great World background is not overly complicated All in all I think it's a great story with a great potential. Must read for those who wants some good stories
Hey! Good day to you! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email mollyringdom*@*gmail.com (delete *）We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). Looking forward to your email soon.
Hey author, this book is really good and I need more fast. Can you recommend any similar books? Note: I've already read killer of MC's Thanks!
74 chapters in. I'm not sure if I should call it a shameless hybrid novel as in part game advertisement part fantasy novel, since it kept quoting popular games. But yeah it does makes me want to replay Minecraft and Terraria. Surprisingly the MC character is well thought, he also needs to learn his 'craft' by trial and error, not suddenly 'mastered' everything, and he did lots of mistakes. The world is uniquely different than usual medieval fantasy, hey, guns and assault rifles are common here. The story telling is good so far. Though the MC become overgeared and utterly broken after he got better materials and evolved his "pet", it's still exciting somehow. I like it that even it's being a video game it doesn't have level system, nor the overused classic D&D system. The MC must rely on equipment only and buff his HP. My only regret with it is the really slow progress of new chapters, like .... once a week?
Finished reading killer of mcs and read this one till the latest chapter I can say it got me hooked till the end though the ‘justice will prevail’ mentality of some characters is annoying, which is fine considering the personality of the mc Not bad author, continue writing
nah man you forgot the game that stands above them this game alone is the honored one and that game is Stardew Valley. Man Concerned Ape is the goat making such a great game all by himself the ost the art the coding everything.