/ Magical Realism / Re-writing Our Love
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31-years-old Terrence Li died while protecting his first love on her wedding day. To his surprised, the grim reaper let him have another chance at life by being reborn into the past and change his destiny. Now he is back in his teenage years to chase after his first love once more. With a magic notebook that can turns whatever the owner write into reality, Terrence will make sure he won't make the same mistakes in this life.
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trash, this mc acts like childish even tho his 31, he doesn't even act like a mature person, he acts like 10 years old and he says his weak but he doesn't even think of using a magic book
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卷 2 : Volume 2: Re-writing The Past
- 5 Tenth Date: The Notebook's Origin 4 years ago
- 6 Eleventh Date: Run or Fight! Dark Light's General Ambush! 4 years ago
- 7 Twelfth Date: Salamander Von Devil 4 years ago
- 8 Thirteenth Date: Let's Cultivate! The Haunted Forest? 4 years ago
- 9 Fourteenth Date: First Goal! Becoming the King of Stars Academy 4 years ago
- 10 Fifteenth Date: Cousin! What Happened To You!? 4 years ago
- 11 Sixteenth Date: The Blacklist 4 years ago
- 12 Seventeenth Date: Is it True!? My Best Friend Is A Gang Leader!? 4 years ago
卷 3 : Volume 3: The Cult Of The Fallen Ones
- 13 Eighteenth Date: The Cult Of The Fallen Ones 4 years ago
- 14 Nineteenth Date: Salamander Von Devil! My Other Self Has Disappear! 4 years ago
- 15 Twentieth Date: The Demon Ancestor's Strongest Weapon 4 years ago
- 16 Twenty-First Date: The Tale Of The Demon Ancestor 4 years ago
- 17 Twenty-Second Date: Let's Go Rob A Museum! 4 years ago
- 18 Twenty-Third Date: Operation Blood Moon! 4 years ago
- 19 Twenty-Fourth Date: The Bloody Moon 4 years ago
- 20 Twenty-Fifth Date: The Two Messengers Of The Cult 4 years ago
- 21 Twenty-Sixth Date: The Masked Stranger 4 years ago
- 22 Twenty-Seventh Date: Mind Control! Demon Lord VS Demon Ancestor! 4 years ago
- 23 Twenty-Eighth Date: The Leader Of Dark Light! Lupus VS Terrence! 4 years ago
- 24 Twenty-Ninth Date: Eternal Sorrow 4 years ago
卷 4 : Volume 4:Eternal Sorrow
- 25 30th Date: The Last Chance Of Reviving My Love 4 years ago
- 26 31st Date:The First Fragment!Fate Has Let Us Love Again! 4 years ago
- 27 32nd Date: A New Enemy! The Mysterious Stranger! 4 years ago
- 28 33rd Date: Take Back The Soul Fragment! Terry VS The Medusa Of Dragons! 4 years ago
- 29 34th Date: Seeking The Truth! The Vice-President Is My Soul Puppet!? 4 years ago
- 30 35th Date: A Day As The Vice-President Of EDEN 3 years ago
- 31 36th Date: Project Utopia 3 years ago
- 32 37th Date: Reunion Of The Twin Brothers! The God Of War and The God Of Peace! 3 years ago
- 33 38th Date:She's The Girl From My Dream!? 3 years ago
- 34 39th Date: She's...uh...Leonard's Cousin. 3 years ago
- 35 40th Date: The Hunt Begins! Let's Raid Sky Academy! 3 years ago
- 36 41st Date: The Queen Of Lust 3 years ago
- 37 42nd Date: Melody Of Loneliness 3 years ago
- 38 43rd Date: If You are Into Bad Boys Then That's Me! 3 years ago
- 39 44th Date: The Lord Of Nightmare 3 years ago
- 40 45th Date: The Demon Lord's Wrath 3 years ago
- 41 46th Date: The Twin Eradicator 3 years ago
- 42 47th Date: Let This Big Brother Teach You Idiots How to Assasinate Someone! 3 years ago
Hi, when I read your synopsis, the plot sounded very interesting. But as I read through some of the chapters, the scenes are a bit chaotic and all over the place. I don't mean this in any bad way, I just want you to improve your writing, that's why I am pointing it out. There is potential in the story. The thing I do is either re-read my chapters after writing or just click the speech button so I can hear the mistakes. You should try that. It might be helpful. If you want, I can read more chapters and comment on the errors.