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Out @ 1313 only reason not 1 becouse it was a treat reading up till this chap,even with the grammar issues and over arrogant mc. But for the love of God, over 1k chapters to get his main body back ill pass when way down hill 100 or so chaps after that event...
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Its a wonder that this is still ongoing after all ghose years of being trash
Hello this is not a review currently designing my tattoo and would really like to get some visuals/inspiration on me that could represent this book. If you could drop me a comment with any visuals that come to mind as you’vee been writing this book it would mean a lot thank you ❤️
Mc is an idiot, he thanked someone for not slapping him after he fought a beast. Gave way too many spirit stones for no reason despite people bad mouthing him. Has all the resources that he could ever need but still joined the academy just because he is the MC. Moreover, he is just a pushover that allows anyone to barge into his hut. The bull fight had no meaning because the MC just wanted to look for the bull that killed him. It's like his death meant nothing because the MC still isn't wise enough to make use of his intelligence properly.
May I ask when Sam is going to return to his main body, I am feeling quite repulsed after he switched bodies and I don't think I can read it without some expectations for later, I wanna re-read this again in few months or years after its completed but farewell for now. Thank you Author for writing such a fantastic story. (^_^)
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The MC is a thoroughly unlikable man-child with a chip on his shoulder and a huge amount of plot armor to keep him safe. He walks through the world; it seems his main purpose is to make enemies. 22 chapters was as much as I could stomach. I sincerely recommend the author think more about power and balance, I can see a major nerf is going to have to happen to deal with him long term. That's the sad problem with making overpowered protagonists nearly every single time. Also, all the things that your MC is supposed to 'know' and have done... He may be a huge genius and super soldier, but you had him die at age 25, human time and energy are FINITE. You can't get all of those things done reasonably in 25 years and STILL leave time for the girlfriend and the vengeance he was apparently seeking for her (It's chapter one, so not a spoiler). Next time, try having him be a few more decades old in his first life, it would be more rational to have been able to learn and do all those things in his 40s/50s/60s.
Author was doin good at first but mc cultivation speed slowed down way to much. It got to boring seeing him in the same cultivation level while the hold time he keeps fighting people that's way stronger than him and him beating them in a stupid way. I tried to keep waiting hoping that it could speed up but I got to 305 and it's still the same thing so I'm putting it down. But thanks for wasting my good mood and 3 whole days of my life
揭示劇透 Honestly if I was very rich I would donate millions to this author however I’ll have to settle for using these coins. This is my favourite book honestly.
My favorite novel so far!!!! This is a gem! This awesome book is perfect if you're into a smart main character, a mix of modern technology and magic, loads of satisfying comebacks and payback. The main character rocks, and so his buddies and animal sidekicks!
one of my favorites light novel at the point I don't want to be ended.I can't say many except I love this book: especially the ruthless character of Sam, the kingdom building of Dusk Organization, the concept game competition from God, and many other. Such a well down.👍 👏
This is literally the best novel I have read and it's my fav. Everything from world building to characters and plot 10/10. The grammar is a little off sometimes but it doesn't even bother me at all. I really hope you make more novels as good as this one cause I'm literally obsessed. I just really hope you do not add romance and or harem because Sam really doesn't need it and it would just ruin the overall tone of the novel. I wish the whole competion with the Gods can go somewhere too. Overall best novel I know except for the grammar, everything else is perfect. Thank you for such an awesome novel and keep up the good work.
excellent story narration but updates way too slow. grammar mistakes are also very often. characters are very good and appropriate according to their contribution.
I really like the MC build-up so far. So many other authors make their MC get beat up again and again before they realize their mistakes. The only problem I see is with prpper use of grammer. Seems like an audio voice imput typing program is being use by the author without grammer checks. But alll in all, Great book so far.
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Author I do not know if you have good knowledge of Hinduism but you are twisting the personalities of Divine beings mentioned in Hinduism. Indra is the most noblest person in the entire universe because he is the one who has the most Good Karmic Virtue. Indra mainly plays to roles, one is maintaining Earth and giving blessings with the support of other Devatas to have sufficient food and stop extinction of species, and second most important role is obstructing and testing those who seek Supreme Power from Divine. He tests righteous personalities whether they are eligible to receive the power and he obstructs evil personalities from gaining power. He does all this to protect the living beings.
sorry but the first chapter is literally unreadable. I dont expect perfect grammar or anything since thats rare to find here anyway. But i dont think theres even a single half decent sentence. The fact that the author doesnt bother correcting anything after Months, says enough
I haven't even read a single word of it but reading the synopsis gave me a story idea so I thank you by writing a review here as a thanks as well as a way to find this idea later
This is more of a question rather than a review but can anyone tell me, when does Sam regains his original body?. I have never liked this type of plot line but I'm not going to drop a novel jus for one plotline so I'm thinking of skipping those chapters but I don't want to skip to far.
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One of a best novels I have ever read. Mc is calm, collected, ruthless and intelligent . He is not led around the nose by others, mc is the decision maker and takes the lead. It would have been good if you added a lit bit of romance.[img=recommend][img=update]
This is an interesting story. It suffers a lot due to bad grammar, lack of editing and some sentences that does not make sense. I would strongly suggest getting a competent editor to improve on the writing. I've read until chapter 40 and will not be continuing due to the lack of writing quality. It distracts me too much from the story. It is otherwise a pretty stereotypical genius MC and story so far, though with more than 1500 chapters at this point it would be difficult to make a good evaluation of the story and characters based on the first 40 chapters. If you are comfortable reading sentences that sometimes make no sense and ignoring bad grammar you might enjoy the story, if not I would suggest looking for something else to read until these issues have been fixed.
An interesting beginning however it went down hill fast and never recovered, the MC is very one dimensional and lacks depth. A MC that should be highly intelligent and cunning is nothing more than little brat that is unnecessarily brutal to everyone that wrongs him in any little way. The story is a big disappointment and is best skipped
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This novel is very good and interesting to read. It is like an addiction for the reader. But the updating of the next chapters are very slow. Requesting the author to update the next chapters a bit fast please .
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🤢🤮 story xianxia cultivation + MC beta + MC super OP + MC stupid + MC schizophrenic + Names chinese or korean + story reset [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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1246 story dead and shit over 400+ chapters from 1246 chapter and counting another good author turns gold to shit for what pointless plot loop cause mc to strong got be nerfed
揭示劇透 Out @ 1313 only reason not 1 becouse it was a treat reading up till this chap,even with the grammar issues and over arrogant mc. But for the love of God, over 1k chapters to get his main body back ill pass when way down hill 100 or so chaps after that event...
揭示劇透 Its a wonder that this is still ongoing after all ghose years of being trash
Hello this is not a review currently designing my tattoo and would really like to get some visuals/inspiration on me that could represent this book. If you could drop me a comment with any visuals that come to mind as you’vee been writing this book it would mean a lot thank you ❤️
Mc is an idiot, he thanked someone for not slapping him after he fought a beast. Gave way too many spirit stones for no reason despite people bad mouthing him. Has all the resources that he could ever need but still joined the academy just because he is the MC. Moreover, he is just a pushover that allows anyone to barge into his hut. The bull fight had no meaning because the MC just wanted to look for the bull that killed him. It's like his death meant nothing because the MC still isn't wise enough to make use of his intelligence properly.
May I ask when Sam is going to return to his main body, I am feeling quite repulsed after he switched bodies and I don't think I can read it without some expectations for later, I wanna re-read this again in few months or years after its completed but farewell for now. Thank you Author for writing such a fantastic story. (^_^)
揭示劇透 The MC is a thoroughly unlikable man-child with a chip on his shoulder and a huge amount of plot armor to keep him safe. He walks through the world; it seems his main purpose is to make enemies. 22 chapters was as much as I could stomach. I sincerely recommend the author think more about power and balance, I can see a major nerf is going to have to happen to deal with him long term. That's the sad problem with making overpowered protagonists nearly every single time. Also, all the things that your MC is supposed to 'know' and have done... He may be a huge genius and super soldier, but you had him die at age 25, human time and energy are FINITE. You can't get all of those things done reasonably in 25 years and STILL leave time for the girlfriend and the vengeance he was apparently seeking for her (It's chapter one, so not a spoiler). Next time, try having him be a few more decades old in his first life, it would be more rational to have been able to learn and do all those things in his 40s/50s/60s.
Author was doin good at first but mc cultivation speed slowed down way to much. It got to boring seeing him in the same cultivation level while the hold time he keeps fighting people that's way stronger than him and him beating them in a stupid way. I tried to keep waiting hoping that it could speed up but I got to 305 and it's still the same thing so I'm putting it down. But thanks for wasting my good mood and 3 whole days of my life
揭示劇透 Honestly if I was very rich I would donate millions to this author however I’ll have to settle for using these coins. This is my favourite book honestly.
My favorite novel so far!!!! This is a gem! This awesome book is perfect if you're into a smart main character, a mix of modern technology and magic, loads of satisfying comebacks and payback. The main character rocks, and so his buddies and animal sidekicks!
one of my favorites light novel at the point I don't want to be ended.I can't say many except I love this book: especially the ruthless character of Sam, the kingdom building of Dusk Organization, the concept game competition from God, and many other. Such a well down.👍 👏
This is literally the best novel I have read and it's my fav. Everything from world building to characters and plot 10/10. The grammar is a little off sometimes but it doesn't even bother me at all. I really hope you make more novels as good as this one cause I'm literally obsessed. I just really hope you do not add romance and or harem because Sam really doesn't need it and it would just ruin the overall tone of the novel. I wish the whole competion with the Gods can go somewhere too. Overall best novel I know except for the grammar, everything else is perfect. Thank you for such an awesome novel and keep up the good work.
excellent story narration but updates way too slow. grammar mistakes are also very often. characters are very good and appropriate according to their contribution.
I really like the MC build-up so far. So many other authors make their MC get beat up again and again before they realize their mistakes. The only problem I see is with prpper use of grammer. Seems like an audio voice imput typing program is being use by the author without grammer checks. But alll in all, Great book so far.
揭示劇透 Author I do not know if you have good knowledge of Hinduism but you are twisting the personalities of Divine beings mentioned in Hinduism. Indra is the most noblest person in the entire universe because he is the one who has the most Good Karmic Virtue. Indra mainly plays to roles, one is maintaining Earth and giving blessings with the support of other Devatas to have sufficient food and stop extinction of species, and second most important role is obstructing and testing those who seek Supreme Power from Divine. He tests righteous personalities whether they are eligible to receive the power and he obstructs evil personalities from gaining power. He does all this to protect the living beings.
sorry but the first chapter is literally unreadable. I dont expect perfect grammar or anything since thats rare to find here anyway. But i dont think theres even a single half decent sentence. The fact that the author doesnt bother correcting anything after Months, says enough
I haven't even read a single word of it but reading the synopsis gave me a story idea so I thank you by writing a review here as a thanks as well as a way to find this idea later
This is more of a question rather than a review but can anyone tell me, when does Sam regains his original body?. I have never liked this type of plot line but I'm not going to drop a novel jus for one plotline so I'm thinking of skipping those chapters but I don't want to skip to far.
揭示劇透 One of a best novels I have ever read. Mc is calm, collected, ruthless and intelligent . He is not led around the nose by others, mc is the decision maker and takes the lead. It would have been good if you added a lit bit of romance.[img=recommend][img=update]
This is an interesting story. It suffers a lot due to bad grammar, lack of editing and some sentences that does not make sense. I would strongly suggest getting a competent editor to improve on the writing. I've read until chapter 40 and will not be continuing due to the lack of writing quality. It distracts me too much from the story. It is otherwise a pretty stereotypical genius MC and story so far, though with more than 1500 chapters at this point it would be difficult to make a good evaluation of the story and characters based on the first 40 chapters. If you are comfortable reading sentences that sometimes make no sense and ignoring bad grammar you might enjoy the story, if not I would suggest looking for something else to read until these issues have been fixed.
An interesting beginning however it went down hill fast and never recovered, the MC is very one dimensional and lacks depth. A MC that should be highly intelligent and cunning is nothing more than little brat that is unnecessarily brutal to everyone that wrongs him in any little way. The story is a big disappointment and is best skipped
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This novel is very good and interesting to read. It is like an addiction for the reader. But the updating of the next chapters are very slow. Requesting the author to update the next chapters a bit fast please .
揭示劇透 🤢🤮 story xianxia cultivation + MC beta + MC super OP + MC stupid + MC schizophrenic + Names chinese or korean + story reset [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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1246 story dead and shit over 400+ chapters from 1246 chapter and counting another good author turns gold to shit for what pointless plot loop cause mc to strong got be nerfed
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