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DONT BOTHER TO READ IT MC gets his body taken over in over 1000+ chapters and he starts again with no dimension, no bloodline, no beast, jsut crippled body, all his efforts gone down the drain because of some stupid decisions, the "Dayus" player he bashed and beat up schemed against him which led to his body being taken over, he lsot everything and probably gonna take 300 chapters to recover everything, so basically, the story(chapter1-1250), filler(1251-1400+).
its weird that you're trying to introduce technology where they are extremely redundant in a martial cultivation world/arcane world hybrid. MC can tame animals the size of houses and move so fast with the light element, he creates after images.. and you want to make motorcycles, hoverboards, caravan wagons and extremely odd weapons even you fine hard to describe. i understand you're an engineering student, but you wrote for the wrong genre. MC plays like a Katy Perry - Hot n Cold song. bipolar. in a world but not joining it.
It’s an amazing little piece of work, an interesting story and the chill-inducing oddysey of a psychopathic, mentally scarred, mass-murdering genocidal main character. As a power fantasy, it is amazing, but even outside the genre, it can still hold it’s own, with extremely complete and extravagant world building and mind-boggling plot.
Haven't read a single chaptor but just from the summary where the mc is said to be the greatest creator and the rest... But still can't deal with some rich people, I just gave up on the novel. His incompetency displayed from the summary . Seems he is even poor, so much for intelligence
Just read the free chapters. When you go over, the story just becomes bad. EXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXP
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Be able to write a novel like this, great work author! I’d love to see more. Do you have a discord for readers to join or any other social media I can follow?
The story was one of my first few on this app. tho the Mc is a little op it's somewhat justified. the story is good as well. tho I feel the mc could use some romance and more personal emotional building as I'm currently in the 950+ chapters. there isn't much as of now. I feel it could use a POV change to show what others are going through but it's not absolutely needed. overall I give it a 8.5/10. recommend reading to chap 15-20 to get a feel.
So far I have read to ch 1254 and plan on continuing till the end. This novel comes from an intelligent and imaginative mind. Yes the grammar has issues here and there but it’s nothing a professional editor cannot handle. Sam is one of my most favorite characters across the many novels I have read. The way his mind works is fascinating to me and I can appreciate his brand of gratuitous violence in the beginning lol. From that I’ve also appreciated his gradual changes over the series and the little mysteries throughout the story. Speaking of story, the world is quite complex though plot armor is a little too strong in my opinion. There is also the issue of situations feeling repetitive. These last few chapters have done well to address that. All in all I can’t wait to see where this long journey will lead to while enjoying the ride along the way!
very happy toooooooooooo read this book amazing story sam character is very very intresting[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
A very interesting story ,with a good plot. The language is a bit stilted with quite a few grammatical mistakes but as the author says english is not his first language. But other than that the pacing is OK.
a book where the MC is a beast cultivator, but never actually uses his beasts for anything except for a convenient ride or a power boost, the story was good for the first 400 chapters or so but after that it starts to drag on.
Amazing book the AUTHOR OF THIS BOOK MUST BE AMAZING TO WRITE SUCH A GOOD BOOK NICE JOB VwV
Im so disappointed on buying the chapter so much at the beginning the story is interesting good but it went all down when the mc become so orrogant a lot of armor plot i dont know what to say anymore i wish to take back all my stone Hahahaha (world background) is good though i love the sustem the beast so cute Oh i hate the romance of this story mf is so meeehhh even the romance so force xd
This was One of The first web novels i read abd over all I remember it being decent the only tihing is that it lost my attention about 100 chapters in but if you have nothing to read than you i would recommend this (maby its just nostalgia but the first part was really good)
I made it to chapter 6 and don't have a clue what I've read. The ammount of grammar issues distracts me entirely from the plot of the story.
Na maioria das histórias em que o interesse amoroso do protagonista morre no prólogo da historia daquela forma e o protagonista renasce em outro mundo , na maioria das vezes ela renasce também e provavelmente se torna uma princesa e depois tem todo aquele enredo onde o mc tem que da mó role pra ir atrás dela e tudo. Queria saber se isso também ira acontecer nessa história, ou não (o que eu iria curtir mais)?
Interesting story, was captivated from the beginning but recent updates is becoming boring. I am becoming tired already. The storey is becoming unnecessarily too long.
this book is awesome even tho there are some grammar mistakes and some tippos everything about it is awesome the plot character development and its stability
I gave 5 star even though im not even reading this yet. But I have a question, will he invent something from the modern world? Because the title has the term "Creator" on it, so Im assuming that he is an inventor. Then he is from a modern world where there's a gun, tank, choppers and etc. So I wanna asked if he is going to invent those things in his new world? Ps. Yes or No i will read this. I just want to spark my own curiosity. Ps2. I will read after I finished the one reading
the writing style ruined the mood. I tried to endure it but I failed 😂 by the way I wanna know who is sam's real love interest. do reply me if anyone knows!!😭
I had read to about 600+ chps It is good but not yet great. Some arcs were too long but boring. Mc has no goal which is understandable and it is mentioned in story but somehow it makes story losing its luster. Mc seems to be super genius but i don’t feel like it. As he claims to be many things. Sadly i see only plain OP MC. His friends are not much with characters . their personality were too shallow. Mc has to do almost everything for their sakes. idk if it is good way to introduce friend in this style. And his beast companions .... i am very frustrated about these .... because parts about his beasts are too liitle to nonnnnnn In my opinion, If author wrote about Mc’s beasts as friends, it would be better. His adventures with beasts are way more interesting as i assume from Author’s writing style. Lastly, parts about his invention and wars, tbh i skipped a lot of them haha. so no comment Only felt that it was okay to skip just to know the result. My thought for recommendation ? Okay to read if you are okay with Young master typed of plot and arrogant olders. And if you are not keen on some supreme plot and character growth. Oh grammar,typo and sentence, well if you don’t mind them you good to go It is long way to go for this novel to end so maybe it will be better but now at 600 , i don’t know if it reaches half way yet.. so i give up Anyway ... thank you for the story I do like it thou
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Its a really good book one of my favorites actually i have a thing for like mc who dont go out of there way to be mister save a hoe or like feel its obligatory for them ti have to be nice and say yes and stuff like that and like he very smart he dint trust just anybody and romance is no where to be seen for jow if it appears i just hope it dont affect the story to much 🥸✨✨
Haven't read the novel, but just by the great amount of chapters released weekly and the rating, I'll give you the good review so that the next novel you'll write, you'll consider writing it with a Harem 😁 i don't like novels without Harems. And if you want to write a good harem, you should consider reading: Reaper Of The Martial World(best harem of all novels I've read), Profane Prince of D4mnation (the main girls are OPs) and Nine Star Hegemon Body Art 👍 Or i don't know if by your own could create a better novel than those I've mentioned jaja
Hey it a great novel with an MC who knows how to use his brain. and no harem by the way. I just wanted to know when u will introducte the FL.
It is really good novel to read instead of other cultivation novel where MC would run away and cultivation and then come back for his revenge the MC uses his knowledge of past world to advantage. I like the author approach towards the things the way he combined morden technology and cultivation world materials. I would recommend it if you are looking for a fresh view on cultivation world and extremely smart and brutal MC.
I love the story... and I love more there's a no harem tag, I haven't read a lot of chapters because they're longer than I expected but I like the mc and almost every character, I like that he's not the kind of mc that do everything any girl tells him to do just because they're girls, I love that he's a good friend but he sees everyone in the same way... and if there's any romance I hope is with just one girl and he's not confused with any other.
I genuinely like this novel! One of the novels I'm most satisfied with. The mc is a perfect genius but not in terms of personality but I think it's what makes it interesting. After all, a perfect mc would be boring and if he used all his smarts all the time, there would be no challenge as he can just disappear from the crowd and manipulate everything to his desires. In addition, it's not like the mc doesn't know his flaws. It's just that he doesn't bother correcting his flaws because that's just who he is. The mc is arrogant with a lot of vanity and likes to be flashy but yeaaaah he's not the perfect mc but he's one of the most interesting MCs I've read
DONT BOTHER TO READ IT MC gets his body taken over in over 1000+ chapters and he starts again with no dimension, no bloodline, no beast, jsut crippled body, all his efforts gone down the drain because of some stupid decisions, the "Dayus" player he bashed and beat up schemed against him which led to his body being taken over, he lsot everything and probably gonna take 300 chapters to recover everything, so basically, the story(chapter1-1250), filler(1251-1400+).
its weird that you're trying to introduce technology where they are extremely redundant in a martial cultivation world/arcane world hybrid. MC can tame animals the size of houses and move so fast with the light element, he creates after images.. and you want to make motorcycles, hoverboards, caravan wagons and extremely odd weapons even you fine hard to describe. i understand you're an engineering student, but you wrote for the wrong genre. MC plays like a Katy Perry - Hot n Cold song. bipolar. in a world but not joining it.
It’s an amazing little piece of work, an interesting story and the chill-inducing oddysey of a psychopathic, mentally scarred, mass-murdering genocidal main character. As a power fantasy, it is amazing, but even outside the genre, it can still hold it’s own, with extremely complete and extravagant world building and mind-boggling plot.
Haven't read a single chaptor but just from the summary where the mc is said to be the greatest creator and the rest... But still can't deal with some rich people, I just gave up on the novel. His incompetency displayed from the summary . Seems he is even poor, so much for intelligence
Just read the free chapters. When you go over, the story just becomes bad. EXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXP
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Be able to write a novel like this, great work author! I’d love to see more. Do you have a discord for readers to join or any other social media I can follow?
The story was one of my first few on this app. tho the Mc is a little op it's somewhat justified. the story is good as well. tho I feel the mc could use some romance and more personal emotional building as I'm currently in the 950+ chapters. there isn't much as of now. I feel it could use a POV change to show what others are going through but it's not absolutely needed. overall I give it a 8.5/10. recommend reading to chap 15-20 to get a feel.
So far I have read to ch 1254 and plan on continuing till the end. This novel comes from an intelligent and imaginative mind. Yes the grammar has issues here and there but it’s nothing a professional editor cannot handle. Sam is one of my most favorite characters across the many novels I have read. The way his mind works is fascinating to me and I can appreciate his brand of gratuitous violence in the beginning lol. From that I’ve also appreciated his gradual changes over the series and the little mysteries throughout the story. Speaking of story, the world is quite complex though plot armor is a little too strong in my opinion. There is also the issue of situations feeling repetitive. These last few chapters have done well to address that. All in all I can’t wait to see where this long journey will lead to while enjoying the ride along the way!
very happy toooooooooooo read this book amazing story sam character is very very intresting[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
A very interesting story ,with a good plot. The language is a bit stilted with quite a few grammatical mistakes but as the author says english is not his first language. But other than that the pacing is OK.
a book where the MC is a beast cultivator, but never actually uses his beasts for anything except for a convenient ride or a power boost, the story was good for the first 400 chapters or so but after that it starts to drag on.
Amazing book the AUTHOR OF THIS BOOK MUST BE AMAZING TO WRITE SUCH A GOOD BOOK NICE JOB VwV
Im so disappointed on buying the chapter so much at the beginning the story is interesting good but it went all down when the mc become so orrogant a lot of armor plot i dont know what to say anymore i wish to take back all my stone Hahahaha (world background) is good though i love the sustem the beast so cute Oh i hate the romance of this story mf is so meeehhh even the romance so force xd
This was One of The first web novels i read abd over all I remember it being decent the only tihing is that it lost my attention about 100 chapters in but if you have nothing to read than you i would recommend this (maby its just nostalgia but the first part was really good)
I made it to chapter 6 and don't have a clue what I've read. The ammount of grammar issues distracts me entirely from the plot of the story.
Na maioria das histórias em que o interesse amoroso do protagonista morre no prólogo da historia daquela forma e o protagonista renasce em outro mundo , na maioria das vezes ela renasce também e provavelmente se torna uma princesa e depois tem todo aquele enredo onde o mc tem que da mó role pra ir atrás dela e tudo. Queria saber se isso também ira acontecer nessa história, ou não (o que eu iria curtir mais)?
Interesting story, was captivated from the beginning but recent updates is becoming boring. I am becoming tired already. The storey is becoming unnecessarily too long.
this book is awesome even tho there are some grammar mistakes and some tippos everything about it is awesome the plot character development and its stability
I gave 5 star even though im not even reading this yet. But I have a question, will he invent something from the modern world? Because the title has the term "Creator" on it, so Im assuming that he is an inventor. Then he is from a modern world where there's a gun, tank, choppers and etc. So I wanna asked if he is going to invent those things in his new world? Ps. Yes or No i will read this. I just want to spark my own curiosity. Ps2. I will read after I finished the one reading
the writing style ruined the mood. I tried to endure it but I failed 😂 by the way I wanna know who is sam's real love interest. do reply me if anyone knows!!😭
I had read to about 600+ chps It is good but not yet great. Some arcs were too long but boring. Mc has no goal which is understandable and it is mentioned in story but somehow it makes story losing its luster. Mc seems to be super genius but i don’t feel like it. As he claims to be many things. Sadly i see only plain OP MC. His friends are not much with characters . their personality were too shallow. Mc has to do almost everything for their sakes. idk if it is good way to introduce friend in this style. And his beast companions .... i am very frustrated about these .... because parts about his beasts are too liitle to nonnnnnn In my opinion, If author wrote about Mc’s beasts as friends, it would be better. His adventures with beasts are way more interesting as i assume from Author’s writing style. Lastly, parts about his invention and wars, tbh i skipped a lot of them haha. so no comment Only felt that it was okay to skip just to know the result. My thought for recommendation ? Okay to read if you are okay with Young master typed of plot and arrogant olders. And if you are not keen on some supreme plot and character growth. Oh grammar,typo and sentence, well if you don’t mind them you good to go It is long way to go for this novel to end so maybe it will be better but now at 600 , i don’t know if it reaches half way yet.. so i give up Anyway ... thank you for the story I do like it thou
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Its a really good book one of my favorites actually i have a thing for like mc who dont go out of there way to be mister save a hoe or like feel its obligatory for them ti have to be nice and say yes and stuff like that and like he very smart he dint trust just anybody and romance is no where to be seen for jow if it appears i just hope it dont affect the story to much 🥸✨✨
Haven't read the novel, but just by the great amount of chapters released weekly and the rating, I'll give you the good review so that the next novel you'll write, you'll consider writing it with a Harem 😁 i don't like novels without Harems. And if you want to write a good harem, you should consider reading: Reaper Of The Martial World(best harem of all novels I've read), Profane Prince of D4mnation (the main girls are OPs) and Nine Star Hegemon Body Art 👍 Or i don't know if by your own could create a better novel than those I've mentioned jaja
Hey it a great novel with an MC who knows how to use his brain. and no harem by the way. I just wanted to know when u will introducte the FL.
It is really good novel to read instead of other cultivation novel where MC would run away and cultivation and then come back for his revenge the MC uses his knowledge of past world to advantage. I like the author approach towards the things the way he combined morden technology and cultivation world materials. I would recommend it if you are looking for a fresh view on cultivation world and extremely smart and brutal MC.
I love the story... and I love more there's a no harem tag, I haven't read a lot of chapters because they're longer than I expected but I like the mc and almost every character, I like that he's not the kind of mc that do everything any girl tells him to do just because they're girls, I love that he's a good friend but he sees everyone in the same way... and if there's any romance I hope is with just one girl and he's not confused with any other.
I genuinely like this novel! One of the novels I'm most satisfied with. The mc is a perfect genius but not in terms of personality but I think it's what makes it interesting. After all, a perfect mc would be boring and if he used all his smarts all the time, there would be no challenge as he can just disappear from the crowd and manipulate everything to his desires. In addition, it's not like the mc doesn't know his flaws. It's just that he doesn't bother correcting his flaws because that's just who he is. The mc is arrogant with a lot of vanity and likes to be flashy but yeaaaah he's not the perfect mc but he's one of the most interesting MCs I've read