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I really love it and wish it was still going but the author has not posted in more then half a year but I still love it and hope he will start updating it again soon
When do you plan to update?? Author-san! When do you plan to update?? Author-san! When do you plan to update?? Author-san! When do you plan to update?? Author-san!
This is amazing, plz continue the storyline, love the characters. Kekrkrkrkrrrrrrrrrrghkgykgykgykytkgyktykgykyukyukyukykgukhukhhkuhukhukhkhukhkhkhukhukhkhukyukhukhukhukhukjhkhjkhjkhukhkhkhjkhkhjkhjkhkhkhkhkhkkhk
This has got to be the best MHA fanfic out there, dont know where the author is though.
Great story personally I think the synopsis should explain just a little about the story so i’m not going in soft-cocked and hesitant because I don’t know what to expect, love it tho.
not Bad I like the romance and relationship difficulty it's really ggood pls update it olifjjjjjjjjjjjjjbbbhbhhhhhjhjjjjjjjjjhnbnnhhhbbbbbbb
The premise of the story is nice and all but this story isn't for those who think this midoriya is different; still a pussy,naive and stupid. I really don't like this novel but that's just my view so read b4 drawing conclusions.✌
it seemed to me that I incorrectly expressed the re zero much more boring than your fanfiction. in my opinio. this is my first fanfic, but it's definitely the best. I like it much more re zero and many short stories that I have read before. my opinion is the opinion of a reader who has never written a book but I still think it's sooo cool. ..when I read to the last chapter that I found in the Russian translation and learned the news that the novel was thrown there was a very nasty feeling as if you were guilty of a dear person, but when I found out that the work was resumed and this news was out of date, I was delighted and read it in a clumsy googletranslator but it was still great thanks for your work.sorry if there are a lot of mistakes here i am terrible at english
I love it. Just keep on doing you pumping out these chapters. You shouldnt focous on other and should write for Yourself. its about wether you enjoy it or not. I personaly really love the story and would be sad if you stopped.
Ok,so this is a basically a good fanfic. the autor got a good imagination, combining the power of an ajin and the world of my hero academia, although it could be better, of course. there is also a foact, that is the MC is really overpowered, as you can't kill an ajin. maybe he could have some problem with control, but it hasn't appeared yet. so thank you for the story, and of course the author is back from a 6 month hiatus, so I think although it will be long, the author will finish this story, so it's a good idea, if you fear to begin the story and then it's dropped, to at least take it in your library, and then wait bit for more chapter, like the good squirrels we are all. thank you for the fanfic, author !
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This is a good novel and one of my favorites as it has so much story development that it is in its own level compared to any of the other ones I have read. even though the story goes slow it is quite enjoyable and entertaining and is hard to find flaws. Izuku is overpowered, but not to the point were he can beat anyone as you have constantly showed that there are many people that can challenge
I really like this story and want it to be continued, this is a great story and imo takes on a new angle. Usually when authors give Izuku a quirk like this, they make him automatically insane and don’t focus at all on story development. With this story it feels like your actually there along the entire way, watching him slowly lose his human morals as he himself is no longer human. It’s a really good read and the inly reason I didnt rate it higher was because the last update being 5+ months ago, and while the writing is some of the best on this app there are still a couple small mistakes that are easy to overlook. Overall this is a great read to kill time!
揭示劇透 I only started the series today, but I can say with confidence that I really enjoy it, saying as I’m already almost done. Then I saw that the last update was 5 months ago, is the series over? Or is it just on a hiatus?
The idea was school, but the MC is to much like canon, hes a beta and is aoways crying, really annoying tbh. As the story goea on it just gets more boring, personally for me, writing and update and story is 5 stars
Love this novel wish he would write this again I was reading this novel when it wasn't in the fanfiction section please continue writing it
I never would have thought to do such a crovers. BNHA x The Gamer. Demi-human. Good luck and good luck! In 2 days and I've read everything. I am waiting for more!
🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉 I like this LN so much I gave it 420 power stones. Can't wait for more. 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
I am the soul of my account Exp is my body and coin is my blood I have created countless reviews Unaware of the congruity Nor aware of the quality Withstood critics to create reviews Waiting for one's acceptance I have no shame. This is the easiest way My whole life was Unlimited Useless Reviews
After reading this fic, everything was good and all but to my experienced mind about reading doujins, everything from CH 1 to CH 120 was like a prelude to a disaster called NTR. It’s like the mc is hesitant about everything and the only thing lacking is someone like an old man to slowly take his harem away in front of his eyes and say, “Boy, because of your hesitation, your wives gave up on you, as a true man, i will take responsibility of your actions by ‘taking care’ of your wives for you” or something like that and the wives would reply immediately because they no longer love the mc. I know i know, i have a fcked up mind for thinking of this but can’t help it, I’ve seen many harem protags go down this way in hentai sites. I have no hate for your book, on the contrary, i love it very much but my mind just thought of this, too bad you are not updating anymore....
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I like the characters even if they are a tad bit changed but it doesn’t matter because it worked out wonderfully, I didn’t understand it at the beginning until I watched the ajin anime and I understood wtf an ajin was so it took a while I wish you could continue it but you may have your reasons. I think you did a great job and keep it up because I think you are pretty good at writing.
Я, надеюсь, что в гареме будут следующие люди: Кацука, Ицука, Тога, Леди Гора, Момо, Джиро. Фанфик хороший. Персонажи и сама история прописана, очень и очень хорошо.
i love the concept of this book and i want more of it and im just wondering if your going to continue it or have someone adopt it so it can grow even futher.
Мне очень очень очень очень очень очень очень очень очень очень очень очень очень очень сильно очень очень очень очень очень очень очень прям пи*¥$ц как очень очень очень очень очень понравилось
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I really love it and wish it was still going but the author has not posted in more then half a year but I still love it and hope he will start updating it again soon
When do you plan to update?? Author-san! When do you plan to update?? Author-san! When do you plan to update?? Author-san! When do you plan to update?? Author-san!
This is amazing, plz continue the storyline, love the characters. Kekrkrkrkrrrrrrrrrrghkgykgykgykytkgyktykgykyukyukyukykgukhukhhkuhukhukhkhukhkhkhukhukhkhukyukhukhukhukhukjhkhjkhjkhukhkhkhjkhkhjkhjkhkhkhkhkhkkhk
This has got to be the best MHA fanfic out there, dont know where the author is though.
Great story personally I think the synopsis should explain just a little about the story so i’m not going in soft-cocked and hesitant because I don’t know what to expect, love it tho.
not Bad I like the romance and relationship difficulty it's really ggood pls update it olifjjjjjjjjjjjjjbbbhbhhhhhjhjjjjjjjjjhnbnnhhhbbbbbbb
The premise of the story is nice and all but this story isn't for those who think this midoriya is different; still a pussy,naive and stupid. I really don't like this novel but that's just my view so read b4 drawing conclusions.✌
it seemed to me that I incorrectly expressed the re zero much more boring than your fanfiction. in my opinio. this is my first fanfic, but it's definitely the best. I like it much more re zero and many short stories that I have read before. my opinion is the opinion of a reader who has never written a book but I still think it's sooo cool. ..when I read to the last chapter that I found in the Russian translation and learned the news that the novel was thrown there was a very nasty feeling as if you were guilty of a dear person, but when I found out that the work was resumed and this news was out of date, I was delighted and read it in a clumsy googletranslator but it was still great thanks for your work.sorry if there are a lot of mistakes here i am terrible at english
I love it. Just keep on doing you pumping out these chapters. You shouldnt focous on other and should write for Yourself. its about wether you enjoy it or not. I personaly really love the story and would be sad if you stopped.
Ok,so this is a basically a good fanfic. the autor got a good imagination, combining the power of an ajin and the world of my hero academia, although it could be better, of course. there is also a foact, that is the MC is really overpowered, as you can't kill an ajin. maybe he could have some problem with control, but it hasn't appeared yet. so thank you for the story, and of course the author is back from a 6 month hiatus, so I think although it will be long, the author will finish this story, so it's a good idea, if you fear to begin the story and then it's dropped, to at least take it in your library, and then wait bit for more chapter, like the good squirrels we are all. thank you for the fanfic, author !
MORE CHAPTERS MORE CHAPTERSMORE CHAPTERS MORE CHAPTERSMORE CHAPTERS MORE CHAPTERSMORE CHAPTERS MORE CHAPTERSMORE CHAPTERS MORE CHAPTERSMORE CHAPTERS MORE CHAPTERSMORE
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This is a good novel and one of my favorites as it has so much story development that it is in its own level compared to any of the other ones I have read. even though the story goes slow it is quite enjoyable and entertaining and is hard to find flaws. Izuku is overpowered, but not to the point were he can beat anyone as you have constantly showed that there are many people that can challenge
I really like this story and want it to be continued, this is a great story and imo takes on a new angle. Usually when authors give Izuku a quirk like this, they make him automatically insane and don’t focus at all on story development. With this story it feels like your actually there along the entire way, watching him slowly lose his human morals as he himself is no longer human. It’s a really good read and the inly reason I didnt rate it higher was because the last update being 5+ months ago, and while the writing is some of the best on this app there are still a couple small mistakes that are easy to overlook. Overall this is a great read to kill time!
揭示劇透 I only started the series today, but I can say with confidence that I really enjoy it, saying as I’m already almost done. Then I saw that the last update was 5 months ago, is the series over? Or is it just on a hiatus?
The idea was school, but the MC is to much like canon, hes a beta and is aoways crying, really annoying tbh. As the story goea on it just gets more boring, personally for me, writing and update and story is 5 stars
Love this novel wish he would write this again I was reading this novel when it wasn't in the fanfiction section please continue writing it
I never would have thought to do such a crovers. BNHA x The Gamer. Demi-human. Good luck and good luck! In 2 days and I've read everything. I am waiting for more!
🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉 I like this LN so much I gave it 420 power stones. Can't wait for more. 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
I am the soul of my account Exp is my body and coin is my blood I have created countless reviews Unaware of the congruity Nor aware of the quality Withstood critics to create reviews Waiting for one's acceptance I have no shame. This is the easiest way My whole life was Unlimited Useless Reviews
After reading this fic, everything was good and all but to my experienced mind about reading doujins, everything from CH 1 to CH 120 was like a prelude to a disaster called NTR. It’s like the mc is hesitant about everything and the only thing lacking is someone like an old man to slowly take his harem away in front of his eyes and say, “Boy, because of your hesitation, your wives gave up on you, as a true man, i will take responsibility of your actions by ‘taking care’ of your wives for you” or something like that and the wives would reply immediately because they no longer love the mc. I know i know, i have a fcked up mind for thinking of this but can’t help it, I’ve seen many harem protags go down this way in hentai sites. I have no hate for your book, on the contrary, i love it very much but my mind just thought of this, too bad you are not updating anymore....
it was good it was good it was good it was good it was good it was goodit was good it was good it was good it was good it was good it was good it was good
I like the characters even if they are a tad bit changed but it doesn’t matter because it worked out wonderfully, I didn’t understand it at the beginning until I watched the ajin anime and I understood wtf an ajin was so it took a while I wish you could continue it but you may have your reasons. I think you did a great job and keep it up because I think you are pretty good at writing.
Я, надеюсь, что в гареме будут следующие люди: Кацука, Ицука, Тога, Леди Гора, Момо, Джиро. Фанфик хороший. Персонажи и сама история прописана, очень и очень хорошо.
i love the concept of this book and i want more of it and im just wondering if your going to continue it or have someone adopt it so it can grow even futher.