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Max stars to autor and here are random words to fill the count: I'll realy miss the guy is making his own system is the guy who is this again
All I have to say is that this author is a big PP chad. ☔⚡⚡⚡⚡☔⚡⚡⚡⚡☔⚡⚡⚡⚡☔⚡⚡⚡⚡☔⚡⚡⚡⚡☔⚡⚡⚡⚡☔⚡⚡⚡⚡☔⚡⚡⚡⚡☔⚡⚡⚡⚡☔⚡⚡⚡⚡☔⚡⚡⚡⚡☔⚡⚡⚡⚡☔⚡⚡⚡⚡☔⚡⚡⚡⚡☔⚡⚡⚡⚡☔⚡⚡⚡⚡☔ ☔⚡⚡⚡⚡☔⚡⚡⚡⚡☔⚡⚡⚡⚡☔⚡⚡⚡⚡☔
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Gente eu ti implorando eu sou muito ruim par esse assunto ! me respondam o bakugo e uma mulher? ou o ator está escrevendo erado pq eu to lendo esse tempo todo como se ele fosse mulher
Honestly. This is the best MHA fan-fic that I ever read. I really look forwards to more chapters. Thanks for your good and hard work author.
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Not gonna lie, this story keeps me hooked, need more update, the author is fast, but still, need more chapter as the contents is good.
This is a really enjoyable read; character interactions within this universe are seamless and their growth is realistic given the changes made to the original work. Looking forward to future chapters and how the story will develop from here.
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Writing Quality: 4/5. Good writing, especially for a fiction. Stability of Updates: 5/5. - Story Development: 5/5. Excellent development of the story. I particularly liked the saga not present in the original story. Character Design: 5/5. The vote would have been more a 3/5, since I do not really appreciate the harem, but at least here it is justified and does not affect the story too much. As mentioned in the part above, I liked the new evil character. World Background: 3/5. Little detailed and few new places.
Good updates ✅ Good plot ✅ Non retard MC ✅?!!?!!? Holy shit thats a rare one Non flat female characters ✅ Secondary characters that are not retarded? ✅ Yeah by now you should just read it
The story is so good 11/10👍, it's the best Mha story that you could find in webnovel so far😁. The only thing I will say there is no cliché or cringy weak beta self insert that talks about how he had a bad childhood, we should all cry for him and some deity pities him, sends him into another dimension 🙄.
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揭示劇透 I looked for ajin fanfics in this site, i came out empty. I looked for gamer fanfics in this site, i came out with just 3 books, this one is not one of them. I looked for my hero academia fanfics in this site, i got results, but this book is not one of them. I have not read it yet, but i'm exited. And for the love of god, webnovel, FIX YOUR DA*M SEARCH FUNCTION!!!
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Its a great fan fiction. It's character developement is well done. There is a lot of originality. It's a pretty mature comic with its violence and character "interaction". I enjoy it and the amount of chapters released. Its pretty good and it has a lot of potential. This who hearted opinion.
Love it i check back every day to see if it got updated. Cant wait to see how it develops.
Got threatened into writing this. I would love to do something about it but I am too lazy. Anyways it's a tra- good story and is bori- I mean fun to read.
One of the greatest my hero academia fanfictions I have ever read. XxxxxxxxxxxxxxXxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxXxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxXxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxXxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxXxxxxxxxxxxxxxxXxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxXxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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Hays! I really liked this novel but it just leaves a bad taste in the mouth when you force things like the part that suddenly the former hero who died is kendo's father and how easy it was for the mother to relax and even do small talks with all might even though her husband just died. Especially how izuku's obviously made response to someone who just lost someone. His reactions are all over the place, sometimes his calm, sometimes his happy, sometimes his embarassed. It doesn't feel like he's reacting to the death of the father of kendo, one of his only friends. I'm dropping this. All of the other novels i've read that tried to force a novel in a path just for something like a harem member or a next antagonist most often implodes on itself. It's a shame. That part about the hero dying because of an incompetent communications worker was mindblowing but the next thing is disappointing especially how weak willed all might became and how suddenly, a weak villain suddenly have the ability to hurt all might.
I have to say a ajin for a fan fic is very much welcomed in this oversaturated community of unoriginal ideas of the same thing and plot line. An ajin fanfic is really cool to see, I hope others can take note and write one as well.
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Max stars to autor and here are random words to fill the count: I'll realy miss the guy is making his own system is the guy who is this again
All I have to say is that this author is a big PP chad. ☔⚡⚡⚡⚡☔⚡⚡⚡⚡☔⚡⚡⚡⚡☔⚡⚡⚡⚡☔⚡⚡⚡⚡☔⚡⚡⚡⚡☔⚡⚡⚡⚡☔⚡⚡⚡⚡☔⚡⚡⚡⚡☔⚡⚡⚡⚡☔⚡⚡⚡⚡☔⚡⚡⚡⚡☔⚡⚡⚡⚡☔⚡⚡⚡⚡☔⚡⚡⚡⚡☔⚡⚡⚡⚡☔ ☔⚡⚡⚡⚡☔⚡⚡⚡⚡☔⚡⚡⚡⚡☔⚡⚡⚡⚡☔
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Gente eu ti implorando eu sou muito ruim par esse assunto ! me respondam o bakugo e uma mulher? ou o ator está escrevendo erado pq eu to lendo esse tempo todo como se ele fosse mulher
Honestly. This is the best MHA fan-fic that I ever read. I really look forwards to more chapters. Thanks for your good and hard work author.
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Not gonna lie, this story keeps me hooked, need more update, the author is fast, but still, need more chapter as the contents is good.
This is a really enjoyable read; character interactions within this universe are seamless and their growth is realistic given the changes made to the original work. Looking forward to future chapters and how the story will develop from here.
Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
Writing Quality: 4/5. Good writing, especially for a fiction. Stability of Updates: 5/5. - Story Development: 5/5. Excellent development of the story. I particularly liked the saga not present in the original story. Character Design: 5/5. The vote would have been more a 3/5, since I do not really appreciate the harem, but at least here it is justified and does not affect the story too much. As mentioned in the part above, I liked the new evil character. World Background: 3/5. Little detailed and few new places.
Good updates ✅ Good plot ✅ Non retard MC ✅?!!?!!? Holy shit thats a rare one Non flat female characters ✅ Secondary characters that are not retarded? ✅ Yeah by now you should just read it
The story is so good 11/10👍, it's the best Mha story that you could find in webnovel so far😁. The only thing I will say there is no cliché or cringy weak beta self insert that talks about how he had a bad childhood, we should all cry for him and some deity pities him, sends him into another dimension 🙄.
ALV PLUSSS UlTRAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaadbjdjsjwsbsdbdksksksndnzdjdjdjddnbdbsjsjx dvzhdhhdbdbdbhsjwjdbxbsbshdhd pra duwjw duwjw sus duwjw sus s sjsbd días z sjsbd. Sus s sus d sus deja dzus s sjsbd s sus s sjsbd. S sjsbd s sjsbd z praaaaa
揭示劇透 I looked for ajin fanfics in this site, i came out empty. I looked for gamer fanfics in this site, i came out with just 3 books, this one is not one of them. I looked for my hero academia fanfics in this site, i got results, but this book is not one of them. I have not read it yet, but i'm exited. And for the love of god, webnovel, FIX YOUR DA*M SEARCH FUNCTION!!!
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Its a great fan fiction. It's character developement is well done. There is a lot of originality. It's a pretty mature comic with its violence and character "interaction". I enjoy it and the amount of chapters released. Its pretty good and it has a lot of potential. This who hearted opinion.
Love it i check back every day to see if it got updated. Cant wait to see how it develops.
Got threatened into writing this. I would love to do something about it but I am too lazy. Anyways it's a tra- good story and is bori- I mean fun to read.
One of the greatest my hero academia fanfictions I have ever read. XxxxxxxxxxxxxxXxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxXxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxXxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxXxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxXxxxxxxxxxxxxxxXxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxXxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
JUST READING AGAIN JUST READING AGAIN JUST READING AGAIN JUST READING AGAIN JUST READING AGAIN JUST READING AGAIN JUST READING AGAINJUST READING AGAINJUST READING AGAIN
Hays! I really liked this novel but it just leaves a bad taste in the mouth when you force things like the part that suddenly the former hero who died is kendo's father and how easy it was for the mother to relax and even do small talks with all might even though her husband just died. Especially how izuku's obviously made response to someone who just lost someone. His reactions are all over the place, sometimes his calm, sometimes his happy, sometimes his embarassed. It doesn't feel like he's reacting to the death of the father of kendo, one of his only friends. I'm dropping this. All of the other novels i've read that tried to force a novel in a path just for something like a harem member or a next antagonist most often implodes on itself. It's a shame. That part about the hero dying because of an incompetent communications worker was mindblowing but the next thing is disappointing especially how weak willed all might became and how suddenly, a weak villain suddenly have the ability to hurt all might.
I have to say a ajin for a fan fic is very much welcomed in this oversaturated community of unoriginal ideas of the same thing and plot line. An ajin fanfic is really cool to see, I hope others can take note and write one as well.