摘要
Lucas has always been bullied at school but he finally got his nerve to ask the girl he always admired out.
"no, I don't like you and I already have a boyfriend" I fell on the ground Heartbroken and that how I met the devil teacher Avery.
"do you want that girl? If you want her, I will help you. But you won't be human anymore."
"I want her"
"She will never love you, but you will own her body"
"I don't care I want her"
Avery put on an evil smile "very well"
***note****
I get some of my ideas from "Pure love insult complex" but I use it just for a reference.
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its a good no one I just wish that you would have that it worked on more uploading it efficiency but besides that it's a pretty dope but novel
It’s pretty good the story is nice the only problem is that there are no pictures or drawings of the background or the characters you just use your imagination
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Bro,sigue publicando mas, amo tu novela en serio. Me gusta la personalidad del mc, pero si son la mafia... Como pringaos consiguen dinero o que pasara si se meten con otra mafia, tiene un equipo especializado para eso?... En fin, esta novela es una joya. O estoy muy enfermo
To be honest its not bad, but the MC really has no consequences for any of his actions, he does things on a whim which i dont think gives the story much depth, if your reading this story for the sex scenes then yeah its great albeit not very detailed, but to be honest at some point the sex overpowers the story making it all fall flat, unless sex is a major mechanic in the story then the MC shouldnt be doing it so much
More!!!!! More!!!!!!!!! Moooooooorrrrrrrrrreeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!.............................. Fuck yeah!! Mooooorrrreee!
( ✧Д✧) YES!!(๑˃̵ ᴗ ˂̵)و(๑˃̵ ᴗ ˂̵)و(๑˃̵ ᴗ ˂̵)و(๑˃̵ ᴗ ˂̵)و(๑˃̵ ᴗ ˂̵)و(๑˃̵ ᴗ ˂̵)و (￣∇￣) MORE UPDATES ∩( ✧Д✧)∩ ✺◟( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)◞✺ awesome story U・ᴥ・U
AMAZING!! Rough start but amazing "finish" 😍😍 I am definitely keeping up with this book! Absolutely loved it and read it all in one night! Can't wait for each new chapter update!!
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卷 1
- 1 I Don’t Like You 5 years ago
- 2 Ch 2: The Devils Plan 5 years ago
- 3 Ch: 3 Assault Continues 5 years ago
- 4 Ch 4: Gangster classman and the mansion 5 years ago
- 5 Ch 5: The Mafia 5 years ago
- 6 Ch:6 fun in the mansion 5 years ago
- 7 Ch 7: weekend no school 5 years ago
- 8 Ch 8: Saturday 5 years ago
- 9 CH 9: Apologizing to aria 5 years ago
- 10 Ch 10: conflict 5 years ago
- 11 Ch 11: confinement 5 years ago
- 12 Ch 12: Torture 5 years ago
- 13 Ch 13: Ayla and the Slave plan. 5 years ago
- 14 Ch 14: interrupted 5 years ago
- 15 Ch 15: Letting Suzuki out of the room 5 years ago
- 16 Ch 16: Aria’s sister 5 years ago
- 17 Ch: 17 Caught 5 years ago
- 18 Ch: 18 Pampering The Girls 5 years ago
- 19 Ch 19: making Mr. Lilith lose everything 5 years ago
- 20 Ch 20: Logan Beat Down 5 years ago
- 21 Ch 21: Suzuki obedience 5 years ago
- 22 Ch 22: Suzuki’s decision 5 years ago
- 23 Ch 23: invasion continues 5 years ago
- 24 Ch 24: Colette and Avery duo (rip bed) 5 years ago
- 25 Ch 25: hanging around the mansion 5 years ago
- 26 CH 26: Learning to drive 5 years ago
- 27 Ch 27: loli threesome 5 years ago
- 28 Ch 28: Trouble 5 years ago
- 29 Ch 29: torturing the brothers 5 years ago
I am not going to be so shameless to rate my own novel full stars... I will grade it how I see fit. writing quality 3. needs work... stability updates 5. I release every day! story development 4. could use a lot more work! Character design 4. I make each character unique! world background... this is a hard one I rate it 2 and a half if I could... I need to work on that!