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This is a very good story , there are some little mistakes here and there but the comedy, and action is very good im a bit sad that its finished, i would probably read it again sometime and i hope to see another story as intresting as this one next time author makes another one[img=recommend][img=update]
Пишу на Русском ибо я человек Русский, и английский я не изучал вообще. Сужу я этот роман по своему не маленькому и не большому опыту прочтения других фанфиков и ранобэ. В принципе мне понравился этот роман, но видел и лучше. Мне было интересно читать наблюдать за персонажами , дошёл до 121 главы за 2 дня, но где-то на главе 110 +-5 я утратил смысл сюжета. Я думаю что следующие глав 20 автор писал обкуренный, потому как я не вижу смысла так портить роман у которого потенциал глав на 300+ и судя потому количеству глав которые он имеет (155). Я думаю что автор и сам утратил к нему интерес.
5/5 for a first book this is an op mc thing in dif world so if you dont like then shoo Nbhbhunhnnhnnhhnnhhnnnhnhnhnhnhnhnhnhnhnhnhnhnhnhnhnnhhnnhhnhnnhhnnhhnnhhnhnnh
this book I really liked everything the only thing I didn't like was the cover just because it didn't seem well done and could be better and the other books I really like the concept but did not like the books yet they making a lot of them and I hope I would like another one soon
One of my favorite ....... ..........., ,.,.,.,. ., . .. , , , ,. ., ., .,.,.,.,., ,., ,.,., , ., ., ,, .,,.,.,., .., ., , , ,.,., ,, ,, ,., , .,.
I liked it .....,......m.mm...,.,.,.,.,.,.,....m..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.......,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,. just to get the counter up
The female lead is OP, character development is good, writing is also good, the volume about attack on Titan is pretty funny to be honest (my opinion)
It was better than most gender bent novels and I can't get enough of it😁😁😁😁😁😘😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😉😉😁😁😁😉😁😁😉😉😁😉😁😁😉😘😉😁😉😁😉😁😉😁😁😉😉😁😉😉😁😁😁
It was interesting to see how the main character would do and experience. It was also all over the place sometimes making it slightly harder to understand.
Good Novel!! nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say,
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Great book keep writing also love where your going with it and ignore what's after this ljndojndojndojndokndoknkdokndoknxoknjxoknxx Jenison in dj dj Xbox u confounding who done do I find out what happened at sky high,he will do my homework?I'm exotic trail that is your day?or are interested to female transformation s o ok with u and s o t i i s o t tf stories Dragon Transformation chapter one ☝a big head back for hmmmm hdjdjxjdndj
I am not very good at writeing a review, but I think the book has a great story along with having a great idea to continue forward with. Extra
Good Novel! nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say,
揭示劇透 Guys, this one is gold, if you, like me, have already finished reading all chapters I recommend you this one : Endless Path: Infinite Cosmos, it's quite similar to this novel, exept that mc doesn't get reincarnated as some op guy or god but a human, and he will try to get stronger. currently 1316 chap for those who are interested.
AHHHHH, I wanted to use a power stone for this one, this novel is the best I have found on this website until now, I love the 'multiple story/adventures' side of this novel, it also uses others novels that I really enjoyed reading so, perfect for me, continue like that author !
A great book with a good story line and I can't get enough of it. I like it because the main character is a god which it is hard to find a mc who is a god and the story is nice. just wished there were more chapters
Good Novel! nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say,
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This is my second favorite series and I love how she is messing with different universes and knows everything about them because if her past life
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you should've made this your original, it has a great potential but it was destroyed by the fan art part😁😁
This is a very good story , there are some little mistakes here and there but the comedy, and action is very good im a bit sad that its finished, i would probably read it again sometime and i hope to see another story as intresting as this one next time author makes another one[img=recommend][img=update]
Пишу на Русском ибо я человек Русский, и английский я не изучал вообще. Сужу я этот роман по своему не маленькому и не большому опыту прочтения других фанфиков и ранобэ. В принципе мне понравился этот роман, но видел и лучше. Мне было интересно читать наблюдать за персонажами , дошёл до 121 главы за 2 дня, но где-то на главе 110 +-5 я утратил смысл сюжета. Я думаю что следующие глав 20 автор писал обкуренный, потому как я не вижу смысла так портить роман у которого потенциал глав на 300+ и судя потому количеству глав которые он имеет (155). Я думаю что автор и сам утратил к нему интерес.
5/5 for a first book this is an op mc thing in dif world so if you dont like then shoo Nbhbhunhnnhnnhhnnhhnnnhnhnhnhnhnhnhnhnhnhnhnhnhnhnhnnhhnnhhnhnnhhnnhhnnhhnhnnh
this book I really liked everything the only thing I didn't like was the cover just because it didn't seem well done and could be better and the other books I really like the concept but did not like the books yet they making a lot of them and I hope I would like another one soon
One of my favorite ....... ..........., ,.,.,.,. ., . .. , , , ,. ., ., .,.,.,.,., ,., ,.,., , ., ., ,, .,,.,.,., .., ., , , ,.,., ,, ,, ,., , .,.
I liked it .....,......m.mm...,.,.,.,.,.,.,....m..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.......,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,. just to get the counter up
The female lead is OP, character development is good, writing is also good, the volume about attack on Titan is pretty funny to be honest (my opinion)
It was better than most gender bent novels and I can't get enough of it😁😁😁😁😁😘😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😉😉😁😁😁😉😁😁😉😉😁😉😁😁😉😘😉😁😉😁😉😁😉😁😁😉😉😁😉😉😁😁😁
It was interesting to see how the main character would do and experience. It was also all over the place sometimes making it slightly harder to understand.
Good Novel!! nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say,
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Great book keep writing also love where your going with it and ignore what's after this ljndojndojndojndokndoknkdokndoknxoknjxoknxx Jenison in dj dj Xbox u confounding who done do I find out what happened at sky high,he will do my homework?I'm exotic trail that is your day?or are interested to female transformation s o ok with u and s o t i i s o t tf stories Dragon Transformation chapter one ☝a big head back for hmmmm hdjdjxjdndj
I am not very good at writeing a review, but I think the book has a great story along with having a great idea to continue forward with. Extra
Good Novel! nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say,
揭示劇透 Guys, this one is gold, if you, like me, have already finished reading all chapters I recommend you this one : Endless Path: Infinite Cosmos, it's quite similar to this novel, exept that mc doesn't get reincarnated as some op guy or god but a human, and he will try to get stronger. currently 1316 chap for those who are interested.
AHHHHH, I wanted to use a power stone for this one, this novel is the best I have found on this website until now, I love the 'multiple story/adventures' side of this novel, it also uses others novels that I really enjoyed reading so, perfect for me, continue like that author !
A great book with a good story line and I can't get enough of it. I like it because the main character is a god which it is hard to find a mc who is a god and the story is nice. just wished there were more chapters
Good Novel! nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say, nothing much to say,
揭示劇透 This is my second favorite series and I love how she is messing with different universes and knows everything about them because if her past life
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you should've made this your original, it has a great potential but it was destroyed by the fan art part😁😁