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Daughter of snape

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作者: Parzival31820

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This is story of lonely and silent female black OOP soldier who died savings a child during a mission and got reincarnated by gods with some wish in harry potter in which she is the daughter of Professor Snape and Lily Evan's

----I DID NOT READ HARRY POTTER AND CHAPTERS ARE ACCORDING TO KNOWLEDGE WHICH I CAN GET, I HAVE TRIED TO FOLLOW ORIGINAL STORY---

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GreyKnights

its just a copy and pasty of She's A Snape the only thing thats not the same is the mc first name thats all thats changed .......................................................................

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MonsutaHa

Very cute, keep it up! I'm a Slytherin so I just love how you interpreted Professor Snape's daughter. Can't wait for more! Love it so much!

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SangN123

I enjoy the good read. I also like the character Snape for he was a unfornate cuck boi in all star cast of the Harry Potter world... MC is slowly getin OP and the changes can be said nil but with the fathe daughter duo... we shall see if they get well in the end

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mdrm
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So far, the book had been interesting and kinda fresh. I like the MC and how she tries to imitate her Dad. If I were to give some advice, I would recommend paying more attention to capital letters (like jax -> Jax) and punctuation since it is a bit confusing at times. It might help you if you download Grammarly. It helped me a lot 😉 Overall, the story is interesting, characters look fine and I'm looking forward to the new chapters.

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Artmemis99

plus plus plus plus plus plus plus plus plus plus plus plus plus plus plus plus plus plus plus plus plus plus plus plus plus plus plus plus plus plus plus plus plus plus plus plus s il vous plait plus de chapitre

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GhostTurtles

So far I love this story. I like what she did with the world and how it’s going. Definitely in my top 3. The only thing Is some of the grammar, but that’s fine. The storyline and character development is great and I really like it.

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