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"Estou aqui mais um dia, no banheiro, sentado na bacia..."... Ha, tristeza, mais um fracasso, essa caminhada à procura de algo bom, como sempre, tem se mostrado difícil.
I loved the story and characters and wish to continue reading but you have stopped updating it. everything I find a great or just good I find out that they have stopped writing it
Los últimos 50 capítulos son una novela china generica, bofetadas, jóvenes maestros, dichos chinos, nombres chinos, sectas chinas, insultos chinos, etc. No es dragon ball. 1 estrella por falso, si quieres escribir una novela china escribe una novela china no uses dragon ball para tener más lectores.
I mean its decent but it Got to the point where i was reading this story just to laugh since its not the best but its still decent and i like long stories
Numbing cream cheese 🧀 the same time I don't have ah phone number is not working and I w there I'll come by the way I don't have to go out of annihilation and be
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it's one of the best I read so far hdjsjdbdjdksjsdbdjsjsjbdsjsidjddudbhubidugdbusinsniinsmidbuindunsybindijdbubydubsijsbusubsoksubnj
realmente increíble la historia, me encanta, el prota realmente me divirtió mucho, he estado esperando esta historia y espero que sigáis subiendo esta historia, espero con ansias el próximo co 👌👌👌👍👍👍
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This is good, but ... I'm sick of all this xianxia-type novel nonsense (Wanna be a hero, come straight out of hiding, show off and do nonsense with his enemies, and everyone around him insults, then the victim starts to worry ... that's where the crap starts again .. and finally after our MC showed his prowess .. the enemy asked for mercy .. and killed) it's always like that .. just kill damn it, lots of damn bullshit .. Sigh ~ and every time an enemy meets, it is repeated like the one above ~ Always like that damn ..
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It’s a good pass time Fanfic until chapter 50s. After that, it’s basically a cultivation novel one of the chinese wuxia thing. Clans and stuff you know.. So read it until chapter 53 and you can drop it.
good book I love both the books and how both books go different paths makes it so much more interesting. can't wait to read more. you did a good job on the personalities.
Author why there's no update to this novel I wanted to read more of this story but that not going to happen right because of the other novels thats why take your time to have fresh ideas in story update if you can ** love your novels
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The english and grammar is poor, which intern makes the story feel choppy and hard to read. Obviously the stories updates are none or few and far between. But I will say that you do well with the characters and the world they live in.
I hope author is still alive and well 😅😂 please continue this work it’s really a great fanfic!🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
IF AUTHOR IS STILL THERE THEN I WOULD REQUEST HIM TO CONTINUE PLEASE NEW CHAPTERS PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE 🔥🔥 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
So far nice plot story Need more mass chapter 😎😎😎😎😎 F6t7f6d67fuf7srryscuvitddye6cudusyduhydrd7uftytfggdyxygycudyfiutrtfduritgyjrftjyktcjufr5gduduufg9g9ucggifgifigghoudcugcufyohufuchhcuuchviudyhigfugigivifigghicfuudghgcigoicucghudfgif7guuhhjhoojhohhjoj
Is there anyone that knows proper English? I couldn't stand them. the story is inconsistent most of the time. sometimes the mc would make a dumb decision but atleast its bearable.
This us the first Dragonball fanfic i've ever read and I have to say that this one is very good. I truly enjoy reading this fanfic and I look forwards to how the story progresses. Keep up the good work Author and I hope you can update soon.
This novel is great and all but dude it's getting boring! I read this for a dragonball fanfic not a "cultivation novel" cause no matter how you say it this is clearly looking a lot like some cultivation novel -_- I've read so much cultivation novels that the cliche cultivation talks in the latest chapters sounds so cringy so please! Turn it back to dragonball.
it is really not that good. If your bored you can read this to pass your time though, Author doesn't know how to make a story up and just follows the plot. but he already ruined the plot. and power level makes no sense. It feels like he gets nerfed.
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Just keep going Just keep going Just keep going going Just keep going Just keep going Just keep going Just keep going Just keep going Just keep going
Good story, I can't wait for more chapters. ----------"-::'hxxhchfhhdcvvxbxbzb::-"-"-"-"-"-"--"-"-"-"-"-"-"-""--""-"-"-"-"-"-"-"--"-"-"'gdhdhdhdhdhdh
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I give a five star rating this is one of the best fan fix I read today I was reading it all day today hopefully we can get more then one update a week
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"Estou aqui mais um dia, no banheiro, sentado na bacia..."... Ha, tristeza, mais um fracasso, essa caminhada à procura de algo bom, como sempre, tem se mostrado difícil.
I loved the story and characters and wish to continue reading but you have stopped updating it. everything I find a great or just good I find out that they have stopped writing it
Los últimos 50 capítulos son una novela china generica, bofetadas, jóvenes maestros, dichos chinos, nombres chinos, sectas chinas, insultos chinos, etc. No es dragon ball. 1 estrella por falso, si quieres escribir una novela china escribe una novela china no uses dragon ball para tener más lectores.
I mean its decent but it Got to the point where i was reading this story just to laugh since its not the best but its still decent and i like long stories
Numbing cream cheese 🧀 the same time I don't have ah phone number is not working and I w there I'll come by the way I don't have to go out of annihilation and be
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it's one of the best I read so far hdjsjdbdjdksjsdbdjsjsjbdsjsidjddudbhubidugdbusinsniinsmidbuindunsybindijdbubydubsijsbusubsoksubnj
realmente increíble la historia, me encanta, el prota realmente me divirtió mucho, he estado esperando esta historia y espero que sigáis subiendo esta historia, espero con ansias el próximo co 👌👌👌👍👍👍
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Why did you stop writing WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
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This is good, but ... I'm sick of all this xianxia-type novel nonsense (Wanna be a hero, come straight out of hiding, show off and do nonsense with his enemies, and everyone around him insults, then the victim starts to worry ... that's where the crap starts again .. and finally after our MC showed his prowess .. the enemy asked for mercy .. and killed) it's always like that .. just kill damn it, lots of damn bullshit .. Sigh ~ and every time an enemy meets, it is repeated like the one above ~ Always like that damn ..
揭示劇透 It’s a good pass time Fanfic until chapter 50s. After that, it’s basically a cultivation novel one of the chinese wuxia thing. Clans and stuff you know.. So read it until chapter 53 and you can drop it.
good book I love both the books and how both books go different paths makes it so much more interesting. can't wait to read more. you did a good job on the personalities.
Author why there's no update to this novel I wanted to read more of this story but that not going to happen right because of the other novels thats why take your time to have fresh ideas in story update if you can ** love your novels
揭示劇透 The english and grammar is poor, which intern makes the story feel choppy and hard to read. Obviously the stories updates are none or few and far between. But I will say that you do well with the characters and the world they live in.
I hope author is still alive and well 😅😂 please continue this work it’s really a great fanfic!🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
IF AUTHOR IS STILL THERE THEN I WOULD REQUEST HIM TO CONTINUE PLEASE NEW CHAPTERS PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE 🔥🔥 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
So far nice plot story Need more mass chapter 😎😎😎😎😎 F6t7f6d67fuf7srryscuvitddye6cudusyduhydrd7uftytfggdyxygycudyfiutrtfduritgyjrftjyktcjufr5gduduufg9g9ucggifgifigghoudcugcufyohufuchhcuuchviudyhigfugigivifigghicfuudghgcigoicucghudfgif7guuhhjhoojhohhjoj
Is there anyone that knows proper English? I couldn't stand them. the story is inconsistent most of the time. sometimes the mc would make a dumb decision but atleast its bearable.
This us the first Dragonball fanfic i've ever read and I have to say that this one is very good. I truly enjoy reading this fanfic and I look forwards to how the story progresses. Keep up the good work Author and I hope you can update soon.
This novel is great and all but dude it's getting boring! I read this for a dragonball fanfic not a "cultivation novel" cause no matter how you say it this is clearly looking a lot like some cultivation novel -_- I've read so much cultivation novels that the cliche cultivation talks in the latest chapters sounds so cringy so please! Turn it back to dragonball.
it is really not that good. If your bored you can read this to pass your time though, Author doesn't know how to make a story up and just follows the plot. but he already ruined the plot. and power level makes no sense. It feels like he gets nerfed.
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Just keep going Just keep going Just keep going going Just keep going Just keep going Just keep going Just keep going Just keep going Just keep going
Good story, I can't wait for more chapters. ----------"-::'hxxhchfhhdcvvxbxbzb::-"-"-"-"-"-"--"-"-"-"-"-"-"-""--""-"-"-"-"-"-"-"--"-"-"'gdhdhdhdhdhdh
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I give a five star rating this is one of the best fan fix I read today I was reading it all day today hopefully we can get more then one update a week
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