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(don't) break the circle

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作者: Luxae

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"Mom doesn't like it when I cause trouble. I know that. The displeased look on her face as she gets into the car only makes it all the more obvious."

A very short story about a boy who has been shaped by his life.

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Not too bed of a first chapter but unfortunately abandoned it seems. Pity. Another lost potential in this wast meadow of grass. Remember, yo may not be able to write well but writing is another muscle, the more you write, the easier it will become to write and write better.

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