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Remaking the novel dudes. It still has the same name, so go check it out
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Best RWBY ever........................................... ............................................................................ ............................................................................
It’s good, it’s just great, fantastic even Why do I need more characters? Is this 140 yet? Is this 140 yet? Is this 140 yet? 123456789101112131415161718192021222324252627282930313233343536373839404142434445464748495951525354555657585960616263646566676869707172737475767778798081828384858687888990919293949596979899100101102103104105106107108109110111112113114115116117118119120121122123124125126127128129130131132133134135136137138139140 Wait that’s way more, also that’s not how characters work opps :P
One of the best RWBY fanfics I've seen in this site. Grammar is good, Writing is good, everything about it is good. Each chapters is guaranteed to put a smile in your face while your reading.
Best RWBY fanfic i read so far. Cool MC. Nice story and writing. Good updates. I want moooooooòooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooore!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Really love the story so far and want to give my support to the author keep uploading them chapters!!!!
Best RWBY fan fic on Webnovel Keep updating Well written 11/10 would read again Good Plz no harem or 18+ Keep near plot plz Is this 140 characters yet?
Just want to to rate 😎😎😎😎😍😎😎😎😎😍😍😎😎😍😎😎😍😎😍😎😍😎😍😎😍😎😍😎😍😎😍😎😍😎😍😎😍😎😍😎😍😎😍😎😎😍😎😍😎😍😎😍😎😍😎😍😎😍😎😍😎😒😖😟😒😪😜😒😲😮😯😎😎😎😎😎
Honestly one of the best rwby and probably fan fic I've read so far its got a nice balance to it and the mc isn't stupidly op from the start and its nice seeing the mc have a human side for a change with no super ulterior motives and what not keep up the awesome work.
Love it. Nuff said ............................................. One hundred forty characters..!!!!!!!!!!"!"!"!"!"!"!"!"!"!"!"!"!"!"!"!"!"!"!"!"!"!"?"?"?"?"?"?"?"?"?"??"?"!"!"!"!"!?"!*!**!*!*! .....
I Really Really Really Love This. eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
This story is very nice and i hope will enjoy it ☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺ ☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺ ........................................................................... ☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺ .......................................................................... ☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺
I really like where everything is going and I hope this continues. I plan to keep reading a support it. I love the idea of mc being a teacher and elite student so he can still be a loner.
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more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
Pretty good 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
............ .......... ............................... .................... ...............................................hmmm I like it!!!....... I only read 2 fan-fic about rwby and gotta say this is better!!! MC is awesome!! (/'.')/
Good work .......................................................................................................................................................................................
Just want to rate I dont have anything to say 😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌
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The early chapters have some original plot dialogue but once you get passed those the story just gets much better with the mc doing his thing.
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- 1 Jin Rose (Fixed) 6 years ago
- 2 The Plot Begins (Fixed) 6 years ago
- 3 Definitely not a rip-off (Fixed) 6 years ago
- 4 A Big Surprise (Fixed) 6 years ago
- 5 Enrolled Together (Fixed) 6 years ago
- 6 Shenanigans in the Ship 6 years ago
- 7 An Encounter (Fixed) 6 years ago
- 8 Now in Beacon! 6 years ago
- 9 A Night in Beacon 6 years ago
- 10 Before the Test (Fixed) 6 years ago
- 11 No Partners so far 6 years ago
- 12 On to the temple 6 years ago
- 13 A Semblance? Perhaps 6 years ago
- 14 Jin did an Oopsie 6 years ago
- 15 Beginning of a Legend 6 years ago
- 16 Ozpin knows Everything 5 years ago
- 17 A Little Change 5 years ago
- 18 Professor Rose (Fixed) 5 years ago
- 19 A Classic Pre-faceslap (Fixed) 5 years ago
- 20 The Most Brutal Instructor in Beacon (Fixed) 5 years ago
- 21 Denied 5 years ago
- 22 Background Reveal and Bribes 5 years ago
- 23 Diaries of the Punisher #293 (Part 1) 5 years ago
- 24 Diaries of the Punisher #293 (Part 2) 5 years ago
- 25 Diaries of the Punisher #293 (Part 3) 5 years ago
- 26 Diaries of the Punisher #293 (End) 5 years ago
- 27 Some Weeks Later 5 years ago
- 28 Are you really Jin? (Fixed) 5 years ago
- 29 Getting the Slave Status 5 years ago
- 30 The Final Day 5 years ago
- 31 A Change That'll Affect Her Future 5 years ago
- 32 Ruby did an Oppsie 5 years ago
- 33 Do it Again and I'll Break your Legs 5 years ago
- 34 The Torture Training and its Origins 5 years ago
- 35 How Shameless of you Weiss 5 years ago
- 36 Still Angry 5 years ago
- 37 Yang Strikes Again 5 years ago
- 38 Combat Class is Next.....Possibly Jaunedice, later? 5 years ago
- 39 Announcement Important Please zread 5 years ago
- 40 Like the New Title Said 5 years ago
- 41 Prologue (A Glimpse into the Future) 5 years ago
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