摘要
Lin Yang is ordinary student of 18 year old. he is true fan of Harry Potter movies and books. he considers himself friend of water. due to unforeseen circumstances he died. Is this the end of his journey or begining?
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標籤
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榜單 
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So far so good l, small spelling mistakes that can easily be corrected. The plot looks promising, also interested to know who his love interest will be. The concept is also unique ~ Looks like a beginners work, but with only a few mistakes. Keep up the good work!!! Really looking forward to the story