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Every day life was monochromatic for Seig, the people passing him looked the same. No colours. No sound. Every thing was dreary. He was deemed an outcast as his vacant look in his eyes makes him seem dead. Until, his maid showed him anime series. It was an explosion of colours which brought life into his eyes. From then he had always wanted to be like the main characters, making viewers look in awe as they show off their powers. Even when he was bullied for being liking anime he still kept a positive outlook by watching anime. It all paid off when he died a hero and was rewarded with something to help him achieve his dream in another world.
This is a fan fic I don't own any of the anime series I may mention in my fiction. Also this is my first ever time in writing stories so please be patient with me.
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寫檢討Who the **** put the tags there? What do you mean the MC isn’t willing to kill, killing is the only thing he knows. He ****ing kills everyone he doesn’t like. End of story. Maybe the he’ll break through puberty and suddenly be an angelic person in the future but not now.
I have to say this is the best web novel i have read on this site. IT IS SO GOOD AND EXITING to the point were you are not ON the HYPE train you ARE THE HYPE!!! TRAIN!!!!! no but seriously this is the best webnovel i've read in a damb long time so if you haven't read it already read it NOW! ignore the haters and read it. its fantastic
Why is it getting worse? Vol 1. was not bad but now it's just gone. Its like you're not even putting effort anymore. You really gotta stop rushing the story, stop writing like a robot and stop fucking skipping so much.
The story was good for early chapters, but then after the first 2 anime worlds the author really like to reset the MC power level by whatever means likes starting from baby again, memory lost, different power system in new world rendering previous powers useless. The worst started after the MC enter cultivation world. Previously the MC only use less then 40 years (excluding time spent in inner world to comprehend laws that should be around 130000years) to reached Divine level 1 power level but then He was forced to enter Daodalu cultivation world where he started from 0 again and spent 910000 years to create 1 spirit ring to get to spirit elder power level which was only level 4 in a world where level 10 should be below Divine level 1. He need to create 10 spirit rings to reach the apex of the world. Each spirit ring requires 1 million years to complete, and even though he can use time law to accelerate the process it'll still take millions years to complete while other people in the same daodalu world only require 100 years to reached level 10. HOW MANY ANIME WORLDS CAN HE COMPLETE IN 10 MILLIONS YEARS!!?!?!? Previously he only took 40 years to complete 3 worlds and reach divine level 1 and now!?!? 10 million s years to reach the same power level again! This is why I hate cultivation worlds. Their sense of time are ****ed up!!!
It was nice at first then it started to get bad. Don't know what more to say. I think you need to put the same amount of effort you put in volume 1 in vol 2 too, Really enjoyed it even though nothing was original. Good luck on writing.
First of all, the words that the author uses hurts my brain especially because he is either using them wrong, or spelling them wrong (Common example is "your" and "you're"). Secondly, the plot that the author uses has already been used and reused and there is absolutely nothing unique about the novel. The character design is poor, turning to an unfeeling human being to a total "weeaboo" (lack of a better term) who can't say anything without sounding completely retarded. And lastly, the worlds that the story is set in may be accurate, but as I have already mentioned, there are some fan fics out there that is a better version of this one. (I remember reading one months ago where he chose the Naruto world first and has better character development, and proper grammar. Granted the novel only has about 25 chapters so far so I can't really judge the character design and world background that much but just take this fan fic with a bit of salt and be ready to hurt your brain with so many grammar mistakes and generally turning off your brain because this is only good for passing time.
One of the Best Fan Fic Novel I ever read!!! One of the Best Fan Fic Novel I ever read!!! One of the Best Fan Fic Novel I ever read!!! One of the Best Fan Fic Novel I ever read!!! One of the Best Fan Fic Novel I ever read!!! One of the Best Fan Fic Novel I ever read!!! One of the Best Fan Fic Novel I ever read!!! One of the Best Fan Fic Novel I ever read!!! One of the Best Fan Fic Novel I ever read!!! One of the Best Fan Fic Novel I ever read!!!
don't get your hopes up it gets ruined in later chapter when he made a body for the system girl who will have the same power as him in chapter 40+ i don't recommend this you will get frustrated like hell the author is trying to fix it but it turned to none sense DONT READ IT ITS GARBAGE IT'LL MAKE YOU HATE THE AUTHOR SAME AS ME
Read this story all the way to the boku no hero arc and found the plot interesting. unfortunately every character swears like a sailor. This would be fine, but the swearing is used in a way to just be there and at times it can be cringey to read. It takes away from the story and hard to imagine these characters. I tried not to give this author too much hate as i understand he is new an he recognized his mistakes later into writing this story.
揭示劇透In fact our opinion does not matter! Because we suggest something like ... do not make it a harem! But it does the other way around! That's why the story falls!
I keep feeling like he too OP and time go by too quickly. It seem like he doesn't work too hard to improve after he turn 14-15. I also find myself lost because I have only seen a few of these anime and havent gotten too far into them so I feel very confuse. I can't picture anything to well its like more detail/description could be given. He was born in the first world and most skills are given to him. He doesn't do much to comprehend most anything. He can literally buy some skills and bloodline once he meet requirements. He can have multiple skills and bloodlines. When he goes to a new world he does not reincarnated or start over. He keeps the same abilities and power unless the next world is weaker then his power gets suppressed. One thing I dislike the most is the system is his love interest.
揭示劇透First thoughts: Horrible flow. Full of grammatical errors. Super rushed. Too OP way too soon. Bad character development since they literally say 10 sentences to each other. Gives them no chance to express their character. Unoriginal work. Bad world building since it's rushed.
If your going to read this. I recommend playing a good song during the fights. I played *rolling stone-paint it black* it fit perfectly. I like everything but theres *cough* to little chapters and if the aurthor trys to add diffrent fights and stuff that werent in the HA anime.
Lovely fanficton ...... I'm totally addicted to it. The first world where the MC goes is the 'my hero academia' world and honestly it's the best 'my hero academia' I've read till date . The one piece world feels diverse and unfettered an makes it an interesting read... There is also decent character development of MC ......a bit of romance is present acting as a topping to create a wonderful piece of art (though the romance may feel somewhat cringy or immature for some........it depends on one's Taste.... Personally I liked it quit a lot but would prefer if the romance was a bit more fleshed out.......). Coming to the writing style of the author .....it's fluid and would keep you hooked on, the action sequences are well paced . The chapter size is also good . Anyways I feel this is an excellent read and worth spending time on.
Why do people keep trying to sabotage this novel? Like seriously ... first they add false tags then they report it or something causing it to not be in the rankings ... like seriously GROW THE FUCK UP
This was a great novel, and the best thing was, that it was actually completed!!! The author, Reili dono, stayed true to his word and completed the novel!!! At first, the story was just another anime system fanfic that was gud, but what made it for me was that Reili dono used the anime worlds to create his own pseudo-original novel!!! Whoever the f*ck said this was a trashy novel, or something similar, is absolutely wrong, this novel is AMAZING and the grammar utilized wasn’t even bad, and after some editing, it’s of a pretty high level. Thx Reili soon for writing this novel
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Author please the next world must at least danmachi or UQ holder ,also tride adding some slice of life anime in the name of "holiday" change of mood from action to romance author~pleasee 😀🙁🙁 Pretty please ~~~^×^~~~ Good luck author 🤗
作者 Reili
1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read it wrong also 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wondering why you still reading this 8. You see the mistake right? (on7) 10. But did you see I skipped number 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw I doubled number 10 and skipped number 9 13. And did you see I skipped number 2 14. You got tricked 15. But did you see that I skipped number 12 16. You checked and wandered why am I wasting my time on this. ( You got tricked )