3評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
與他人分享您的想法
寫檢討
I like santa god in the buff. I love the king, hes got a lot of character. 5 star for main character saying "XBAX GO HOME!" I like the story development. The world building needs to be worked on. But its only the start of the book. I love the character design.
Hey author here. I would appreciate Comments and reviews. It helps a lot since I’m a new writer.
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I like santa god in the buff. I love the king, hes got a lot of character. 5 star for main character saying "XBAX GO HOME!" I like the story development. The world building needs to be worked on. But its only the start of the book. I love the character design.
Hey author here. I would appreciate Comments and reviews. It helps a lot since I’m a new writer.
Keep up the good work . Keep up the good work .Keep up the good work .Keep up the good work .Keep up the good work .Keep up the good work .Keep up the good work .Keep up the good work .Keep up the good work .Keep up the good work .Keep up the good work .Keep up the good work .Keep up the good work .Keep up the good work .Keep up the good work .Keep up the good work .Keep up the good work .Keep up the good work .Keep up the good work .Keep up the good work .Keep up the good work .