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The story is good. I like it. I'm into school based stories and this one captures the type I enjoy. It's written pretty well sometimes I have you edit it in my head to make it sound better.
The story is good. I like it. I'm into school based stories and this one captures the type I enjoy. It's written pretty well sometimes I have you edit it in my head to make it sound better.