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A good novel... And it could be better... Hopefully you can always tries hard to improve and don't mind the harsh comment out there. You could not satisfy all people out there. Just give out your best!!
Wow I just found it out yesterday and I was instantly hooked I hope you continue this and don't listen to the complaining of how the MC is retarded That one complaining is the retarded one
Amazing novel,......................................................................................................………………………………………………………..……………………………………………………
good novel........................................................................................................................................................
Sorry but that mc goes from start full retardmode. He could avoid all of his downfall if he just be a little bit grown up and dont throw a tantrum like a little kid. I cant believe that he could be the no 1 player in the game after 8 years if he is that *****. The other players must haven been pretty trash if they needed that long to scheme against him
While needing a bit of editing, this is a really good story. The MC falls to a schemer (not so sure he has the culprits right) and has to start all over. Previously, he was the No. 1 player in the massively popular MMORPG, completely maxed and a bit bored and waiting for the new upgrade. Now, due to sponsorship penalties, he has to earn some serious cash while hiding his new player identity (there are petty people out there...). I think it has great potential and can't wait to see what happens next!
Author here~~ Obviously, 5 stars since I'm the author. This is my first book. I hope you all can enjoy it! Release rate: 3 chapters a week (mon, wed, fri) with a random bonus chapter release.
Ok from the starts this story is set to make anyone that thinks logical go insane. He was nr. 1 in the world with the best guild why accept the fight in the first place , but with that contract this crosses illogical thinking into retardation if the things were reverse yes that would have made some sens but even then why risk it , even as nr.2 the amount of money and influence he would have to risk it on a duel kinda idiotic .
A good novel... And it could be better... Hopefully you can always tries hard to improve and don't mind the harsh comment out there. You could not satisfy all people out there. Just give out your best!!
Wow I just found it out yesterday and I was instantly hooked I hope you continue this and don't listen to the complaining of how the MC is retarded That one complaining is the retarded one
Amazing novel,......................................................................................................………………………………………………………..……………………………………………………
good novel........................................................................................................................................................
Sorry but that mc goes from start full retardmode. He could avoid all of his downfall if he just be a little bit grown up and dont throw a tantrum like a little kid. I cant believe that he could be the no 1 player in the game after 8 years if he is that *****. The other players must haven been pretty trash if they needed that long to scheme against him
While needing a bit of editing, this is a really good story. The MC falls to a schemer (not so sure he has the culprits right) and has to start all over. Previously, he was the No. 1 player in the massively popular MMORPG, completely maxed and a bit bored and waiting for the new upgrade. Now, due to sponsorship penalties, he has to earn some serious cash while hiding his new player identity (there are petty people out there...). I think it has great potential and can't wait to see what happens next!
Author here~~ Obviously, 5 stars since I'm the author. This is my first book. I hope you all can enjoy it! Release rate: 3 chapters a week (mon, wed, fri) with a random bonus chapter release.
Ok from the starts this story is set to make anyone that thinks logical go insane. He was nr. 1 in the world with the best guild why accept the fight in the first place , but with that contract this crosses illogical thinking into retardation if the things were reverse yes that would have made some sens but even then why risk it , even as nr.2 the amount of money and influence he would have to risk it on a duel kinda idiotic .