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The no. 1 player in VRMMORPG, Two Worlds, fall under the scheme of his lifelong enemy. From the top of the heaven he crashed to the bottom of the world.
Being laughed at and with huge debt in his shoulder he try to get his revenge and conquer the game so no one will looked down on him anymore.
With his best friend, can he conquer the game?
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Ok from the starts this story is set to make anyone that thinks logical go insane. He was nr. 1 in the world with the best guild why accept the fight in the first place , but with that contract this crosses illogical thinking into retardation if the things were reverse yes that would have made some sens but even then why risk it , even as nr.2 the amount of money and influence he would have to risk it on a duel kinda idiotic .
Author here~~ Obviously, 5 stars since I'm the author. This is my first book. I hope you all can enjoy it! Release rate: 3 chapters a week (mon, wed, fri) with a random bonus chapter release.
Sorry but that mc goes from start full retardmode. He could avoid all of his downfall if he just be a little bit grown up and dont throw a tantrum like a little kid. I cant believe that he could be the no 1 player in the game after 8 years if he is that *****. The other players must haven been pretty trash if they needed that long to scheme against him
I tried, I really did. I don't think the story per se is that bad. It's mostly mediocre and cliche heavy. What made my rating fall under 3 stars is mostly the writing quality. The text is riddled with spelling errors and the grammar is all over the place. An editor or at least a proofreader could easily improve the quality by 1 star. The other point that I didn't like about this story would be the story development. MC makes a lot of really groundless and stupid decisions. Especially in the beginning, I get that the author tried to create a desperate/bad situation for his character but since most of the problems MC has come from his own stupidity I can't and won't feel sorry for him at all. All in all I would say, the writing quality (spelling, grammar) needs a lot of work and the story development is at most so so (readable if you have nothing better to read). The rest is average. Would only recommend if you have a lot of time to kill, aren't bothered by bad spelling/grammar and don't expect anything special. Hope I could help :)
While needing a bit of editing, this is a really good story. The MC falls to a schemer (not so sure he has the culprits right) and has to start all over. Previously, he was the No. 1 player in the massively popular MMORPG, completely maxed and a bit bored and waiting for the new upgrade. Now, due to sponsorship penalties, he has to earn some serious cash while hiding his new player identity (there are petty people out there...). I think it has great potential and can't wait to see what happens next!
I like the story. Sure the grammar needs to be touched up but it is still readable. What gets me is the fact that the mc is so moronic!😔💨 For a so called “#1” player the mc gets enraged by a small slight and that is ok he can get revenge when he gets stronger. The next day he immediately shows hostility and alerts the enemy even when he is far weaker in a lot of aspects. It’s just stupid. Why did I write this again? I don’t want to delete after I put so much time into this. 🤷♂️
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You ever watch DBZ, where one fight spans 10 episodes? This novel is similar, it tells a decent story once you get past the irritating start, but there is just too much filler. Author needs to stop rephrasing everything and just get to the point. Cut down on the unnecessary backstory, you don’t need that much world building. Really difficult to read and get into it.
Just how pathetic your mc is he is 10 years straight strongest player and doesn't even show a mentality of being like easily angered and one more thing 10 years of experience of playing the game he doesnt even know how other class works even a normal person to have this long experience playing something will know one thing or about other things You should just abolish this book this fucking book that oozes idiocy and maybe because the author is just like one Note fucking dont read this book
I dont even know how it is possible to associate Number1 player with a no brain mc? Even as a first story, im curious to know how author brain works? And even if we say okay its possible to be that strong and stupid, he played so long and deleted it like « oh there is no more fries »... no sadness, no sleepless night, no tears, nothing... he just fell asleep like he had the best day of his life.
A good novel... And it could be better... Hopefully you can always tries hard to improve and don't mind the harsh comment out there. You could not satisfy all people out there. Just give out your best!!
Wow I just found it out yesterday and I was instantly hooked I hope you continue this and don't listen to the complaining of how the MC is retarded That one complaining is the retarded one
This story has such bad grammar, that it actually gave me a headache trying to read it. It also jumps all over the place and the story setup just makes no sense.
Very good novel ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Great story and characters starts a little slow but builds up fast recommend to at least read the first couple chapters and the you'll be hooked and binge read the whole thing
This is going to be an honest review from someone who has read a fair amount of books and novels. To begin with you have a very cliche MC. Typical video game plot and leveling system which isn't necessarily a bad thing. The MC uses about 0% of his brain constantly which leads to lots of plot holes and making the readers angry with his stupid and illogical decisions. The book starts off with ok grammar if you can overlook the misuse of present and past tense as well as constant spelling errors but as it continues the grammar only gets worse. It gets so bad that almost every other sentence looks like a five year old wrote it and it honestly gives me a headache. The plot isn't that bad, its the grammar that needs to be fixed. Please hire someone to fix it.
i hope u can edit the first few chaps... good job i hope u can edit the first few chaps... good job i hope u can edit the first few chaps... good job i hope u can edit the first few chaps... good job i hope u can edit the first few chaps... good job
The mc is a total retard. In the beginning of chapter it's said that auron can drop the item also there is no contract time that said after the duel the guild and his character must instantly be deleted. He can first calm his mine assembly the elite team that got the potion and ask them first then investigate the cold bank acc and etc and make a proof to trap vice guild and detroy her then assembly the upper echelon of the guild, it's unreasonable if in the whole guild he is the only pillar there's must be someone that he can trust and give the equipment to him and give the leadership to another one so that they can't be bribe and keep each other check then delete the character and start new. I don't hate this kind of novel but this mc is total retard ...
I really like this story and the direction it is going but that being said it had a really rough start and you have to push through the first few chapters where the author forces the MC into a really bad situation where he has to dig himself out of it with the help of his best friend. I think this was workable and the story developed nicely but the biggest issue is the constant grammar errors and word choice that makes this book difficult to continue and the reason I dropped it once it went premium. If the author was able to get a proofreader or an editor i think i would pick the story up again! This is just one lousy opinion and I hope the author can keep working the best they can and continue to improve!
Good story lots of interesting skill combinations and upgrades ,also I suggest u combine the similar chapters to take the time to change between chapters but overall the story is awesome
I loved this book... M.C doesn't act like a god and the villains don't just wait for M.C to beat the shit out of them ... the book is pretty realistic not like the ones where M.C just time travels and hogs all resources ... completely deserving 5 stars..