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Broly The Saiyan of Legend!

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作者: Draugzel

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Born to be the strongest of Saiyans, surpassing and dominate everyone around him! This was supposed to be his path! But in the end he became a stepping stone for Goku. Until an otherwordly soul takes over Broly's body and changes his future path...
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Huntsman

To be honest, I have no idea why this is rated so high. It's basically a normal cultivation fic disguised as a DB fanfic. The writing quality is fine, it isn't ground-breaking or anything, though one thing I did notice is the pacing of the first ten chapters(I haven't read past that point), which is incredibly off. And when I said incredibly, I do mean it. In 7 chapters, the author gave us two time-skips and some vague lines about MC merging his seperate personalities, we never got an explanation as to how his personalities got so ****ed up or how me merged the three, we're just supposed to believe some dude with no training somehow managed to fix his mental problems all by himself. If you watch DB, you'll know that Broly's anger problem is not something easily fixed. OG Broly has got decades to mellow out his personality in DB: Super Broly and he still wasn't able to snap out of his enraged state, then how much chance does a normal guy from Earth stand? And MC's personality is just horrid. It's like the author can't decide between ruthless and indifferent, explosive and stupid, or childish and naive so he just gave MC traits of all three. In the first few chapters, when Planet Vegeta is being destroyed, apparently it ripped reality apart and sent MC to fucking cloud-dimension or some ****(At this point, I realised I'd been duped into reading another one of those cultivation disguised as DB fic), but I thought 'Hey, let's keep reading, who knows? The author might just surprise me by subverting my expectations'. Spoiler: He didn't. So around seven chapters in, we're introduced to Gine- Goku's mother, who's supposed to be dead as established in DBS: Broly(There were only around six to seven survivors of Planet Vegeta), but whatever I guess. It's an alternate universe, who cares. Then came the city, which has a 'City Lord', which makes no sense because he's said to be the strongest on the planet, why the hell would he be a city lord? And why hasn't Frieza killed him yet. Guy has got 50 millions PL. Given enough time he can be a real threat to Frieza's reign and given Frieza's personality, I doubt he'd let such a threat be. And talking about threats, how did the saiyans survive? Frieza is not one to do stuff half-hearted, if he knew they were alive, he'd have murdered them all. And don't give me that bull**** about them escaping in middle of the explosion, that's bull**** and you know it. And our endearing MC. Why is he so weak? Broly has always been OP, he has no Godly training, no God Ki and he fucking kicked SSGB Goku and Vegeta's asses. Even non-canon Broly was able to completely fucking decimate four Super Saiyans and a Super Namekian and he was purposely supressed by his father with a mind-control device and I'm supposed to believe he got bitten by a wolf? And your logic makes no sense. You use Roshi and Krillin as examples for gravity training, but didn't take into factor that the Saiyan race was so powerful because of their high gravity world. It's literally stated repeatedly throughout the anime and the official guidebook. And then there's the energy crystal, and before we know it Broly is going to meditate for years like a fucking hermit to absorb herbs and ****. Wtf? I'm here to read about DB, not some ****ty cultivation fics. If I want that, I'd go pick one somewhere else. And wtf is up with chinese and their obsession with calling themselves 'father'? I don't know about chinese, but that's not a legitimate insult in English, and it makes you sound retarded. Don't even get me started with that lack of description. I came here to see hard Power-Leveling, MC using training method he remembered from his past life, but that also doesn't work out because of nerf and ****. I was promised a DB fic, instead I got a generic chinese cultivation fic that disregarded many of DB laws, has logic that makes no sense and OP MC who's nerfed for plot's sake. It's just fucking disappointing mate.

5yr
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MegaMacho

Damn, the Author really knows how to describe everything, i can imagine the whole scenario, the Protagonist growing, explanations about energies like LifeForce and stuff, the character improving and analysing, not the typical dumb protagonist....

6yr
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boob
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For the fan of dbz especially broly's fan in this story you can see a real legendary super saiyan fight and training again and again the author seem to realy respect the saiyans race "warriors race" no harem **** juste a pure tribute too the legendary super saiyans broly. A big thank you to the author for this gift

6yr
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Goksel

At first i kinda Like it but now i cant read you make harem its not readable every chapter some stupid *** chaps its just became disgusting there isnt related broly anymore i suggest all of you dont read waste of time!!!

5yr
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Draugzel

Author here! Don't know why I never did a review, but better late than never, I guess. This is the first novel I ever wrote, so I won't say that the characters, worldbuilding or story in general is something well written. Speaking of well written, my grammar is lacking, compared to other original authors, you find on this website, however, I try my best to edit them. I tested out some things by making the story not follow the Dragon Ball storyline. Most of the time I try to create something new and explore the multiverse of the Dragon Ball series. There are some interactions between Broly and the main cast, but it is mostly about Broly's way to the top and what he experiences on the way. I also wrote some explicit *** scenes but after a few times of writing them, I realized that it isn't something I want to write. It obviously isn't even close to the best fan fiction out there, but I still hope you can enjoy this little story I made up. Yours sincerely, Draugzel.

5yr
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AhmedAhmed

the story was good if it wanst for the fucking harem!! fucking harem!! ruining the fucking story ihave been skipping and skipping and skipping. EVEN THE FREAKING ORIGINIAL BROLY IS MILLIONS OF TIMES BETTER THAN HIM OH HOW I WOULD WISH THIS NOVEL TO GET BANNED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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5yr
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Ashwatthama

Just write novel Good going Keep working hard Don't drop You should know success always come slowly but definitely. Try to give a bundle of chapters directly I hope it's a good read Well but summary and title are cool.

6yr
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Slesk
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All In all I think this is a solid Fic. Now I wouldn't call this special but it has a certain charm because it deviates from the plot in the way it does. I'm a bit confused however due to the nature of the time passage. Sometimes I think the MC was ten years old, other times I think MC is 15, and then he is three to four years old. Maybe I'm reading too fast and could be confusing myself but that's a thing for me. Besides that I'm also somewhat skeptical of MC power growth, not of how fast it is but the contrary how slow it is. The guy is Broly the freaking Legendary Super Saiyan, if Saiyans are a blessed combat race then the Legendary Super Saiyan is like the ultimate supreme Saiyan and by all rights should grow faster than he is specially considering he is in a planet with greater gravity than his and moreover constantly fighting powerful beings. Well overall my opinion is that the story is a mid 4 stars, not quite 5 but not quite 3. Here's hoping the story remains functional till it's conclusion.

6yr
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Ashwatthama

Well if other want to see Goku Vegeta and all the stuff happens in anime Then you will be sorry This one is a new story with new people and new plot at least up to now Well this was not what I was searching So I m dropping Maybe other would like it Great story by the way don't drop it.

6yr
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Melshan

Muito bom a novel recomendo à todos a acompanhar, não vão se arrepender. ....................................................................................😎

6yr
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AlwaysReading

Although this book isn't a flawless masterpiece, I still would say it's easily within the top 3 of my personal favorites in this entire website. If you're looking down at the reviews trying to decide if this is worth a read than look no further my friend, for I've not regretted even a second of the time I spent reading this awesome adventure. If you give this book a chance I'm confident you won't regret it either, or your money back guaranteed!

6yr
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TheMMs

in the beginning it was meh, but now in cap 43 things started to get awesome..........................................................................

6yr
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zcxx
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This fic is TRASH. 1. Misleading title, the mc is not broly just some random saiyan 2. The setting is not even dbz universe it some chinese cultivation world. 3. Too much nonsense chapter.

3yr
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TheLostMushroom

Probably the weirdest DBZ fan-fic out there...Instead of working out and increasing his power, Broly decided to snort in some herb and enter seclusion...like seriously...can anyone imagine Broly sitting in the same spot and doing this stuff-_-Chinese Broly...maybe?

4yr
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Avadonia

The story itself isnt that bad but simply thé fact that a 3yo is 1m80 and have a few million powerlevel is ridiculous, and thé start is pretty stupid too, MC get reincarnated and his first reaction is i have a tail i must be a sayan ! Could have been so much more

5yr
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NAMI_SWAAAAAN

Without a doubt, this is an amazing fanfic. And I respect that the author completed the fanfic and did not drop it.Also I am going to miss those times where I waited for the new chapter to came every day but thanks for your hard work.I really enjoyed your fanfic.

5yr
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iAlexKing

History of Dragon Ball Z perfect in my view! Just keep up the great work as you write this story! Best lead character, you've created a Broly of total respect! So the legendary Super Sayajin should have been in history, a strong guy with the charisma and intelligence of a Leader, as well as powerful and able to grow to infinite levels! Best Character! Original characters very well worked and developed, each with its own personality in perfect sync with the story ... Perfect too!

6yr
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Space_Fox

Fantastic story, it's been a pleasure to follow it until the end. Good luck author~ 140...149...140...140...140...140...140...149...140...140...140...140...140...149...140...140...140...140...140...149...140...140...140...140...140...149...140...140...140...140...

5yr
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N_addictOoO

So far the author has done an excellent job in portraying of Brolyies personality. Lovin the original plot so far and am excited to see how you will link this plot to the dbz/super cannon.

6yr
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Doishi

i only read the first chapter but tge fact thats its broly and that you have decent grammer already made me want to write a review and im not too deep into the story yet but i hope for the best and that you don't drop it as it seems to happen to many of my favorite original novels😁

6yr
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Chapter 252: New Fanfic Just Saiyan 3 years ago

卷 1 : Perditus

  1. 1
    Reincarnation 6 years ago
  2. 2
    Trinity 6 years ago
  3. 3
    First Fight 6 years ago
  4. 4
    Survivor 6 years ago
  5. 5
    The Wolfking 6 years ago
  6. 6
    Gine 6 years ago
  7. 7
    CE 6 years ago
  8. 8
    The Past 6 years ago
  9. 9
    Daz 6 years ago
  10. 10
    Power Level 6 years ago
  11. 11
    Training 6 years ago
  12. 12
    Sparring Session 6 years ago
  13. 13
    Representatives 6 years ago
  14. 14
    Group Stage 6 years ago
  15. 15
    Battle 6 years ago
  16. 16
    PSS 6 years ago
  17. 17
    Draco 6 years ago
  18. 18
    Next Round 6 years ago
  19. 19
    Noyd 6 years ago
  20. 20
    Cana vs Buiko 6 years ago
  21. 21
    The top 5 6 years ago
  22. 22
    Zinjo vs Atrog 6 years ago
  23. 23
    Alea vs Broly 6 years ago
  24. 24
    Zinjo 6 years ago
  25. 25
    The Final Battle! 6 years ago
  26. 26
    City Lord's Palace 6 years ago
  27. 27
    Ki Cultivation 6 years ago
  28. 28
    The Problem 6 years ago
  29. 29
    Good Progress 6 years ago
  30. 30
    Inside the cave 6 years ago
  31. 31
    Mission Complete! 6 years ago
  32. 32
    Origin Crystal 6 years ago
  33. 33
    New Ability 6 years ago
  34. 34
    Attack 6 years ago
  35. 35
    Rescue 6 years ago
  36. 36
    Routine 6 years ago
  37. 37
    Oozaru 6 years ago
  38. 38
    Aura 6 years ago
  39. 39
    Perditus 6 years ago
  40. 40
    War 6 years ago
  41. 41
    Absorb 6 years ago
  42. 42
    Super Saiyan 6 years ago
  43. 43
    The Legend 6 years ago
  44. 44
    Will 6 years ago
  45. 45
    Newcomers 6 years ago
  46. 46
    Senses 6 years ago
  47. 47
    Back 6 years ago
  48. 48
    Transformation 6 years ago
  49. 49
    Gather 6 years ago
  50. 50
    Familiar 6 years ago
  51. 51
    Reunion 6 years ago
  52. 52
    Mastermind 6 years ago
  53. 53
    Struggle 6 years ago
  54. 54
    Rescue 6 years ago
  55. 55
    Clues 6 years ago
  56. 56
    Return 6 years ago
  57. 57
    After the war 6 years ago
  58. 58
    Journey 6 years ago
  59. 59
    Island 6 years ago
  60. 60
    Back in Elpis 6 years ago
  61. 61
    Trouble in the Headquarters 6 years ago
  62. 62
    Saiyans 6 years ago
  63. 63
    New Insights 6 years ago
  64. 64
    News 6 years ago
  65. 65
    Stable Rift 6 years ago
  66. 66
    Sparring 6 years ago
  67. 67
    Eyes 6 years ago
  68. 68
    'Spar' 6 years ago
  69. 69
    Rift 6 years ago
  70. 70
    Hotness 6 years ago
  71. 71
    Stabilizer 6 years ago
  72. 72
    Plans 6 years ago
  73. 73
    I have to leave 6 years ago
  74. 74
    Coronation 6 years ago

卷 2 : Universe 7

  1. 75
    Restraints 6 years ago
  2. 76
    Workout 6 years ago
  3. 77
    Breaking the Seal 6 years ago
  4. 78
    Bojack 6 years ago
  5. 79
    Not that bad 6 years ago
  6. 80
    Bragging 6 years ago
  7. 81
    Improvements 6 years ago
  8. 82
    Curse 6 years ago
  9. 83
    Origins Energy Crystal 6 years ago
  10. 84
    Robbery 5 years ago
  11. 85
    Radar 5 years ago
  12. 86
    Dragon Balls 5 years ago
  13. 87
    Take Over 5 years ago
  14. 88
    Healed up 5 years ago
  15. 89
    The Talk 5 years ago
  16. 90
    Revenge 5 years ago
  17. 91
    10 Years! 5 years ago
  18. 92
    Wish 5 years ago
  19. 93
    Porunga 5 years ago
  20. 94
    Arrival 5 years ago
  21. 95
    Mother 5 years ago
  22. 96
    You are weak! 5 years ago
  23. 97
    Lucy 5 years ago
  24. 98
    Deal 5 years ago
  25. 99
    I want to rule 5 years ago
  26. 100
    Last Line of Defense 5 years ago
  27. 101
    Shouldn’t have done this! 5 years ago
  28. 102
    Building 5 years ago
  29. 103
    Comet 5 years ago
  30. 104
    Open 5 years ago
  31. 105
    Origins Spirit Crystal 5 years ago
  32. 106
    House Moving 5 years ago
  33. 107
    Cooler 5 years ago
  34. 108
    Mom 5 years ago
  35. 109
    Business 5 years ago
  36. 110
    Zuno 5 years ago
  37. 111
    Legendary Ascended Super Saiyan 5 years ago
  38. 112
    Galactic Patrol as Guards 5 years ago
  39. 113
    Expanding Influence 5 years ago
  40. 114
    Sen and Sina 5 years ago
  41. 115
    Assassination 5 years ago
  42. 116
    Move out 5 years ago
  43. 117
    Starting with a Bang! 5 years ago
  44. 118
    Four Emperors 5 years ago
  45. 119
    Fight Begins! 5 years ago
  46. 120
    Fight continues! 5 years ago
  47. 121
    Fight ends! 5 years ago
  48. 122
    Next Challenge 5 years ago
  49. 123
    Unexpected Challengers 5 years ago
  50. 124
    Partially Ascended 5 years ago
  51. 125
    Androids vs. Broly 5 years ago
  52. 126
    Contact with Cell 5 years ago
  53. 127
    Improve or die! 5 years ago
  54. 128
    Preparation 5 years ago
  55. 129
    Expanding Senses 5 years ago
  56. 130
    Vegeta is mad! 5 years ago
  57. 131
    Perfect Cell 5 years ago
  58. 132
    First little bout 5 years ago
  59. 133
    Gohan goes in! 5 years ago
  60. 134
    Goku vs Aize 5 years ago
  61. 135
    Beam struggle 5 years ago
  62. 136
    Countdown 5 years ago
  63. 137
    After Towa! 5 years ago
  64. 138
    Going after the leader. 5 years ago
  65. 139
    Mechikabura 5 years ago
  66. 140
    To go even further beyond! 5 years ago
  67. 141
    To the rescue 5 years ago
  68. 142
    Go together 5 years ago
  69. 143
    Old villains 5 years ago
  70. 144
    The end of Mechikabura 5 years ago
  71. 145
    Back on Exousia 5 years ago
  72. 146
    Murder 5 years ago
  73. 147
    Revenge 5 years ago
  74. 148
    Resurrection 5 years ago
  75. 149
    Recover 5 years ago
  76. 150
    Attack 5 years ago
  77. 151
    Nemesis 5 years ago
  78. 152
    Counterattack 5 years ago
  79. 153
    Solutus 5 years ago
  80. 154
    Clash 5 years ago
  81. 155
    Similar 5 years ago
  82. 156
    Succeeded 5 years ago
  83. 157
    Floating Island 5 years ago
  84. 158
    Ruins 5 years ago
  85. 159
    Growing Super Saiyans 5 years ago
  86. 160
    The Chronicles of... 5 years ago
  87. 161
    Kulaan 5 years ago
  88. 162
    Landing 5 years ago
  89. 163
    Desert 5 years ago
  90. 164
    Temples 5 years ago
  91. 165
    Temples 2 5 years ago
  92. 166
    Destination 5 years ago
  93. 167
    Guards 5 years ago
  94. 168
    Challenger 5 years ago
  95. 169
    Island of trials 5 years ago
  96. 170
    Conversion 5 years ago
  97. 171
    Conversion 2 5 years ago
  98. 172
    Going back 5 years ago
  99. 173
    Leviathan 5 years ago
  100. 174
    Storm 5 years ago
  101. 175
    Reunion 5 years ago
  102. 176
    Leaving 5 years ago

作者 Draugzel