Heretic in the Heavens

LV 11

vexum

Not gonna lie, I might be showing a bit of favoritism in this review... But I hope you all enjoy it as much as I like writing it, and thanks for reading!

LV 15

veladriel

The story is really well written and the plot is realy interesting. I also like the fact that the synopsis for the story isn't confusing for new readers.

LV 4

HaremEmpire

you'll regret not reading this story. The story not only develops the protagonist, but the way how the author dedicates chapters to other characters to further develop their background is absolutely amazing. Haven't really developed the world yet but the history of it all is definitely top-tier in my opinion. steady updates so you don't have to worry of lack of chapters for. The writing quality of this novel is great in my opinion, no stupid mistakes, paragraphs are separated properly so it doesn't look overly dense. If your looking for a good read the read this because the plot is already amazing.So overall I would give this novel a 5 star. (And sorry this is my first review) (Will update later in the story)

LV 3

BoredPanda

Writing quality is good, but too long paragraphs, there are wrongly placed commas, but the sentences are smooth. Try to cut the paragraph short though. Stability Updates is great so no complaints there. Story Development is good, although the concept is common, there are unique elements mixed in(I think) Character Design is also good, though you need to give a much detailed description. World Background, well, no complaints there I guess.

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