摘要
[Linguistics Skill: Lv0 (7/10)]
[Apothecary Skill: Lv1 (15/100)]
[Knight Breathing Skill: Lv2 (36/200)]
[Knight Breathing Skill Experience Point +1]
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In the year 3077 of the Berta calendar, during the era of confusion before wizards had reached the throne, he brought them 'Straight A Student Panel.' He stepped into the sorcerer world, perfected sorcerer knowledge, like a bright moon dispelling the mists of the era.
He was Ivan Marichardon, a pioneer of knowledge, he blazed trails for the way of the sorcerer.
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寫檢討The story is great and flows beautifully… the MC is careful and pace slowly like a true Magus… hope it will get more updates
Story is good but its a harem.. he already has 3 wives at 460+ another will be added probably.. will have 1 wife per 100 chapter if this goes on.. such a good story ruined for me..
I like sorcerer/mage books a lot and this one scratches that itch. Pacing is good, characters are good, world building is solid. I especially like how the system is just information of one’s self rather than a shop/quest/gacha abomination. Will be keeping up with this.
Love this story. The world building and characters are a level above most stories on this site.
this has good potential I can tell English isn't your first Language but everything takes time. I'd recommend grammarly to help you find any mistakes you might make. also I'd recommend that when your English is better go over and edit any mistakes so your story can go farther and get more people to love it.
Biggest issue right now: Needs major editing and grammar corrections. Needs an editor to keep up with the translator. Essentially Translation speed is very good, but lots of minor errors are left behind. Some major things at the beginning which may turn way potential readers. Pros: Overall it’s a good start. While we haven’t yet reached the level of strength and fame, MC shows in the synopsis, it’s a good start in setting up character and world building.
Initially the mc is depicted as hard working and the rewards are about what he deserves. However, eventually it’s like the author got bored of justifying why the mc should get thing so he just starts shoving bonuses down the mcs throat faster then he can swallow. A perfect example of this is that right after learning a technique that needs rare raw materials a friend appears and guides him to get the perfect material in no time all. It might have even been the same chapter. It’s just lazy writing. Also, a bunch of the time it feels more like reading a summary of a novel than reading an actual novel. I appreciate that some things take awhile and we don’t need to read about everything but as we go the author uses times skips more and more while providing less and less detail.
Better than MAGI WORLD. I’m a picky person so this is probably the highest rating I ever gave with a novel that has these kinds of mistakes. -some time skips are unpleasant but I like the recap. -Author sometimes writes erroneously. He would call others Ivan or name an item differently. Confuses me as a reader. -Too many side characters with weak karma to MC. -The first 100 chapters couldve been less… -Clarity Issues. -Can be a big novel if author doesnt rush it or die midway or get hit with Supremacy games disease.
its a gem. Mc is a goal focused person, so dont expect romance and so.. There are some grammatical errors but can be ignored in accordance to the good plot line. its a must read!
I like the book only issue I have is below. I reccomamd the book to those who just love a sorcerer honestly. Good read and I enjoyed my self I’m on chapter 274 —— Spoiler below He is cursed for over 200 chapters it’s growing old he is always pulled into somthing and he is beating other sorcerers with less than 10 total years of experience - I say 10 years because the curse mark has only hit twice which happens every 5 years and his already a level 2 sorcerer.
first of all, I dropped this novel at chapter 68. Ok now the story is not bad, actually kinda interesting how the system works and all, my problem is the way the story is told, i don't feel like I'm reading a novel, it feels like I'm reading update notes. From the start it is displayed to us how the author write this: skipping days (sometimes 2 days, sometimes 10 days, sometimes a month) and we get the level up messages, it got worse (for me) when he started to learn magic, because the author doesn't explain the magic system or anything... the MC just learns it and level it up like any other skill, the sword skills the MC has also are not explained, "Leveraging his agile steps, he unleashed his strongest strike, the trademark move of Bat's Eyes — 'Bat Ring Dance Stab.'" what is the "Bat Ring Dance Stab"? I'm pretty sure its a combination of 4 stabs... how are the stabs? and the footwork? does it have any aura around it? we don't know... the novel lacks character, or core, or meat for the reader to get attached to... sure I do like the events that are followed in the story... but i don't care about them at all.
so far it's good , the pace just a lil bit slow but still good with no sudden power up, still need to practice and work for it, the mc have a gold finger like any other reborn/transmigration story his was like a panel game to level up skill but with no system. overall if you like this kind of genre, then this one can be an option to read.
Review at chapter 59. So far, I am hooked on this story. Wish I had another few hundred chapters to binge. System used is simplified compared to most stories but that actually enhances this story and keeps the focus on world building and the MC.