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Heartless

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作者: My_Day

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To love a werewolf is bestiality they say, but then they go and say that love has no bounds.

I've seen love in its truest form, in every form, I've seen it all. And I know it's something I'll never be able to feel for I've learned not to feel since so long ago.

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kimmyvian

Synopsis is like a mystery that makes one curious.A pretty good 1st chap to increase the interest to continue reading. Make it a little less confusing & then it's good to go...

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Silent_C1own

Just here to support author And djsbakbfisnd eksnfaldnksndksnfkandjsndjsjdnskdbsjdbshdbsjdbsksowjrbfjshdjskkdnjdjsjxisjfjfdjsjhdbejdbebsjfwbsjdnwbdjfbwbxjfendngjwkxkfk

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Nikki_Mikki

Only the first chapter but the phrasing is a little rough. Gave a five and stability unless otherwise shown later...as only first chapter it leaves quite a few questions about the MC and the world around them. You don't know if it is modern or historical or fantasy world. It is a very vague chapter that I might conclude as a prologue or extended synopsis. As chapters progress may change rating.

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Africsmaafrics

Well i really got confused in between felt the book was somewhat evasive in understanding but i must commend the author your writing skills are on point and hope to see a less complicated novel by you Anyway i Loved the book.

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AsherGirl

The story wasn’t what I thought it would be based on the synopsis, but I enjoyed reading it anyway. The story left me with many questions though, it was one confusing thing to read.

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Merelyme

What? This ending didn't make sense at all.... It seemed like the author didn't know what to do with the story he/she developted and just ended it anyway. At fist it developted pretty well and the character was good too, but then started to happen things out of the blue with no explanation. Maybe it would be better if the author focus in only one story until it finish.... Because he/she got clomptetely lost in this one : (

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Little_Dino

Interesting short story. There's no real romance closure, but the author did a good job in the emotions that the characters expressed making this novel touching. I love the characters, but I just wish that we were able to have a little bit more backstory on the last pureblood vampyr. He just kinda suddenly appeared in the end. Though I am kinda happy that he only came at the end. I'm personally not too fond of the love ******** dramas. Plus it seems with the mc's character, she would kinda just act as if it was no big deal that someone was following her (that isn't the ml) I really like the author's story. Hopefully she/he can make another novel that is longer and planned.

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DivineShidi

I still don't know how to describe it.. but from the 1st to current chapter... Now I can get a little sync to this novel... can't wait for the next more chapter.. where the MC finally discover her love...

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Chapter 46: Extra (2) 6 years ago

卷 1

  1. 1
    My Childhood that never Existed Part 1 6 years ago
  2. 2
    My Childhood that Never Existed Part 2 6 years ago
  3. 3
    The Forest 6 years ago
  4. 4
    A nightmare to remember 6 years ago
  5. 5
    When the sun sets 6 years ago
  6. 6
    Dear mother 6 years ago
  7. 7
    Class 6 years ago
  8. 8
    Raceless 6 years ago
  9. 9
    Lunch 6 years ago
  10. 10
    Request 6 years ago
  11. 11
    Do you know why I'm like this? 6 years ago
  12. 12
    Immediant Death 6 years ago
  13. 13
    Daredevils 6 years ago
  14. 14
    One Day, One Day We'll Have Our Revenge 6 years ago
  15. 15
    The Story of How I Came To Be (Part 1) 6 years ago
  16. 16
    A Message of a Game to Play 6 years ago
  17. 17
    Kikimora 6 years ago
  18. 18
    Mournful 6 years ago
  19. 19
    The fruit is a part of the forest 6 years ago
  20. 20
    As the Dean Predicted 6 years ago
  21. 21
    Unnerving Smile 6 years ago
  22. 22
    How I met Death 6 years ago
  23. 23
    Unfeeling 6 years ago
  24. 24
    Are You Okay? 6 years ago
  25. 25
    Interbreeding 6 years ago
  26. 26
    To Break Away From the Heirarchy 6 years ago
  27. 27
    The Forest's Anger 6 years ago
  28. 28
    Blinding Smile 6 years ago
  29. 29
    Never Lost, Simply Forgotten 6 years ago
  30. 30
    Legend of the Rainbow Crow 6 years ago
  31. 31
    Special Chapter 6 years ago
  32. 32
    When Dawn Arrives 6 years ago
  33. 33
    Stagnant 6 years ago
  34. 34
    The Consequences 6 years ago
  35. 35
    Sometimes the Consequences Were Worth It 6 years ago
  36. 36
    The Haunted Bridge 6 years ago
  37. 37
    Careless 6 years ago
  38. 38
    Advice 6 years ago
  39. 39
    Don't tell 6 years ago
  40. 40
    Chaos 6 years ago
  41. 41
    Intoregation 6 years ago
  42. 42
    The News 6 years ago
  43. 43
    Why Did You Come Here? 6 years ago
  44. 44
    Epilogue 6 years ago
  45. 45
    Extra (1) 6 years ago
  46. 46
    Extra (2) 6 years ago
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