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As you can tell me the title, this fan fiction has clearly never been done before!...
Release schedule: This is a novel i'm making just for fun! Don't expect a regular release!
Status: Hiatus
This is just a novel i'm working on for the fun of it. I'm mainly focusing on this novel. Check it out!
https://www.webnovel.com/book/11182226306282205/The-Immortal-One
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The Immortal One
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Excellent. I like this style very much, even though protagonist is strong from the start. But the number of harem girls is too low (should be at least 9-10). In naruto universe, it is hard to make harem, since it has many balanced family. However, in one piece universe, you can even have you entire crews as your harem. So do your best, author. At least, you must include Nami, Robin, Boa Hancock, Jewelry Bonney, Marguerite, Vivi, Rebecca, Vinsmoke Reiju. As for someone from marine like Tashigi, that depends on your story. As for Shirahoshi, she is so damn gorgeous, but her personality and size made it hard for me to see the outcome. Perhaps you can add it. Yohohoho.
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Thanks for reading! This is probably a wish fulfillment novel so it may not follow the canon! Leave a review and if the review is lower than three starts please tell me what I can do to make the novel better, thanks!
Host must have at least 5 woman in his harem before becoming the pirate king! Failing to do so will result in losing your abilities, the system and manhood! Quest? Really? This is your fucking choice **** such quests There is no point in reading. 0/10 0/10 0/10 0/10 0/10 0/10 0/10 0/10 0/10 0/10 0/10 0/10 0/10 0/10
Great writing great story and great everything there is not one thing disatisfactory about this incredible novel I hope you don’t drop this and keep the updates steady
Naruto in Adventure Time? Even if it's terrible that idea alone is worth giving it a shot. Also just pointing it out since I need 140 but, there are WAY to many Naruto fanfics on this site come on people write about something else.
You should focus in this work rather than "The Immortal One". This work has more potential and it will be more different style than others. There are many with the same style as "The Immortal One". You can see from the numbers of viewers. Please increase update rate. And thank you for this work.
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I'm really anticipating later chapter for this novel I can't give it all fives yet because I haven't seen too much but I know its going to be good. Also please do at least 2 or more chapters per day
PLEASE LIKE THIS COMMENT SO AUTHOR CAN SEE THIS MESSAGE MORE CHAPTER IS GOOD LESS CHAPTER IS BAD NO CHAPTER AT ALL THAT'S VERY VERY BAD =======================