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(Being Rewritten, as of now when I have uploaded ch-25 on my one piece fic.)(Check out the rewrite)
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Well, it's a Marvel fanfic so that's a plus. It has an intelligent MC who uses his head. He isnt overpowered at the beginning but he has a lot of potential. It has good character development and we can understand the MC.
What can I say? THere have been many marevel fics popping up but this one is a notch above most as it does something new. First, mc is not human and doesn't try to act like one either which is a plus for me as I hate monster mc's that act human. Two, System but not info dump and only necessary information is shown. The abilities are fresh and new, I haven't seen most of them being used anywhere. Overall a decent marvel fic with a new concept.
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so far it's a nice story but not really sure about the update schedule. the way you write could be better. you could do better with the inner monologue and the pov switches. some of the inner monologues are sometimes just redundant but if done better could make it sound better. the main character has a nice development so far from what I read with the availability chapters but could have had more details. so far it's a very impressive story that could actually go somewhere if done right and if not dropped. hopefully, this story lasts
Novel's got potential, rate of update is ok, writing quality and grammar, there's no issue with them. I just wonder what the mc will do in marvel, learn magic or x gene? I don't, but overall, the story can get somewhere
The book is interesting and I am looking forward to the MC's future evolutions. it is really really really really really really really good good good.
love it I love all your books especially this one keep up the great work and if you need help I'm here to help you....................................
Well i liked it up to now. But i Really hope the mc doesn’t start to get cocky and think he doesn’t need to get stronger
This story has a good potential, I like the idea of putting a monster instead of being human, it has a lot of potential and I could see that the writing quality was improving since chapter 1, which is good, because I was a bit troubled with the text walls, but u did improve it, don't drop this, I will give you another review highlighting specific points in the story and ways to improve it.
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I NEED MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This will be my first rating for the story. It doesn't have enough chapters yet, so I can't review much, but I am getting bored of the grind, just make the dungeon time shorter and get to being in marvel already!
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the change in mc's ideology and way of acting when he reincarnated was too drastic. except for that, it's a fine story. exp.................
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This novel is very good and is one of the best but I have two questions, one is that when is the next update and the other is that when he evolves will he became a lord class monster or does he have a long way to go.
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Ima rate 5 stars because why not? Well, this story is different from the first Marvel one, that was rushed and I was just writing my own ideas. My writing style is not that good because I have not written many fanfic or anything. This is my third one, well whatever. So this story is about a guy which gets transported to the Marvel Universe but as a skeleton. But before going to the Marvel Universe, he is sent to a dungeon to power up. And he will evolve, he will not always be a skeleton neither he will ever become a human or a white knight or hero.