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Ayato Shikigami is an average 16-year-old otaku, who spends his days watching anime and playing RPG.
Reality had often failed him as he finds it so boring and dry, he found a way, a way he could escape reality by watching animes but even that was temporary.
One faithful day, when he was watching a scene from his favorite anime Aot, the scenes captivated him so much that he couldn't help but wish he was a part of the drama.
After he wishes to be in the titan world, he found himself in the mist of a battle, where the human went to war with the titan.
During the chaos, he finds out he got the ability to transform into a titan and learn a mysterious power for those he got in contact with.
Using this and his knowledge, he vowed to change the history of the story, save the eldains empire, and make sure Eren never goes rogue.
Note: This is my first fanfic! so don't expect something too extravagant, there will be mistakes here and there.
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I am a sect member of both harem and non-harem and now I have achieved balance and I have only one question................ who is the romantic interest
The FanFic is fresh the author is very nice and interact with the readers asking for suggestions for future plot. The Mc has an interesting power that I have not seen other authors use and overall I have no problems with it.
It's a pretty good 3.8 out of 5. The first 5~ or so chapters were a slight headache with a lot of misspellings but the Author is clearly improving at a great pace as you continue reading. Slight review disclaimer; 1/5 = Horrible 2/5 = Pretty Bad 3/5 = It's Alright 4/5 = I'll follow the novels updates 5/5 = I'm actively commenting and trying to chat it up with the author. This one right here turned up to be a 3.8. Due to my slight OCD over every misspelling, and acronyms tickling me the wrong way the score got lowered. Characters talking with short "yh, yh" as a substitute for "Yeah, yeah" don't sit well for me. I also spotted many instances of missing letters or misspellings such as 'house' for 'horse'. Riding houses is cool and all, but you know... Other times the character 'Eren' would be spelled 'Eran'. It's minor things, but they stick out to me. In conclusion, the story is interesting and I'd say stick around and follow it for a while. If you can swallow a MTL, this one is leagues beyond and the adventure in this alternate universe can be called exciting.
I don't get it, the starting is super bad, the MC was just sitting the whole 5 years then boom the colossal total appeared. Then Carla died, when did Eren even get the titan? How did the MC become a Titan? Too confusing. What are his cheats or does he even have one? Why was he caught/hostaged or something for no reason? It doesn't make sense. I am super frustrated 😩 The writing quality is good, but if you can make it interesting to read it will be best. You see there is no immersion or is it only for me? It is good don't get unmotivated by my review. I am in the court chapter now. Ohh, and if he did have a grudge against Annie he should have tried to kill the armoured and collosal too. it would have been good if two of them were exposed early. The direction the story would have taken would be interesting to see.
Just a story where the mc is transported inti the world of AoT and the world just bends over backwards for him.
finally a good attack on titan fanfic Ive tried reading some but they always drop midway so please keep with it bro plus I like where its going
Nothing really changed here, almost copy of the anime. Character didn't tell about future because author can't write after that. Chapters are short.
The whole premise of this story is so interesting. That's what originally drew me in. The author's great writing ability is what has kept me reading, though. There are so many details that make me feel like I've been dropped into this universe as well. Keep going! I can't wait to see what else you have in store for us
Jujur sulit untuk bertahan di bab bab awal, ini bukan attack on Titan yang saya tahu, plot kacau tanpa penjelasan. Akan bagus jika plot awal mirip dengan anime, lalu mulai ada perbedaan seiring adanya keputusan yang di ambil mc dalam cerita. Kecewa[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
I like the way the story is setup and their reunion is pretty touching. I prefer the time skips you did on a on the training parts those who read the manga and watched the anime find it boring so good job on that boring only complaint is how the h*ll is Ayato still alive after 5 years and some more backstory on ayato and his interaction when they were kids would show a more solid understanding of the story to those who arent familiar with how fanfics work
Okay, think it's time to leave a review so new readers can understand something before starting. 1) This isn't aot entirely, it's a Fanfic I'm sure you know, so something changes, please don't expect everything to be the same. 2) This was my first fanfic, breaks my heart to say but it isn't perfect, but I can proudly say the story is good. 3) I won't be revealing everything at once, there will be some chapters where you will question why, so reading to the end clears up alot of things. 4) The beginning started with me following the main story since the mc (Don't wanna reveal spoiler), but after the Trost ark, it became an Au, and I'm sure you'll find to enjoy it.