/ Anime & Comics / [HIATUS] Pokémon - Battle Legend
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Reborn as the older brother of Ash Ketchum, watch as he takes the World of Pokémon by storm! Follow Alex as he challenges the Pokémon League, takes down evil organizations around the world, encounters legendaries and saves the World of Pokémon!—Cover by Toni Infante
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Good start so far not sure about update from preciouses review but from my POV it looks like this story was just added so keep it up cause it has great potential. Hopefully he doesn’t catch any trash Pokémon though like rattata or oddish because even there evolved forms aren’t that strong.
I can only describe this novel in one word, Awesome! The characters interact with each other well and the dialogues don't make them sound like robots, but actual people with emotions. The descriptions are good as they help me imagine in my head their expressions and actions. I just hope that the mc won't become a pervert, jerk, or a scummy person in the future. Also, will this become a harem? I'm just curious and I don't have any problems with harems as long as they're down well Because lf this fanfic, I got even more motivated to write my own pokemon fanfic, but that probably won't happen anytime soon. Also, my fanfic will likely have similar ideas to yours but I will not plagiarize anything. This fanfic is excellent and I hope that you will continue writing and not drop this as I have been missing a good pokemon fanfic to read.
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It's by far one of the better pokemon-centric novels out there; it isn't too cliché and has quite a proper story development. I would still prefer if it doesn't go towards a 'harem-setting' though and focuses more on character development, but we will have to see. So far, I have enjoyed the read.
I generally like the story, the display picture of it tends to change quite often tough so it's best to remember the name and look for that when you search through your library. I think it replaced a different story by the same author tough and I'm not sure why, since it was a good story too. Generally, anything that this author writes is interesting but like with all fanfics, you never know how many chapters they'll last since the authors don't get paid for writing them. This fic tough has a lot of potential, and is entertaining thus far so with some luck, it'll last a good while.
I've been trying a lot of Pokemon fanfictions lately, hoping to find another one that I like and this one finally shows promise. I really hope it isn't dropped.
good.+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Great pokemon fanfic,has a clean explanation on the pokemon's stat and abilities with the added bonus of auras.The trainers in this fanfic actually contribute something to the fight instead of being cheerleaders while the pokemon do the heavy lifting.If that isnt enough reason to read it then the simple fact that its about red is enough!.That iconic hat overshadowing his eyes ! The lack of dialogue when you fight him! The indifference to your 16 badges and your fully boosted team !
Honestly this is the first pokemon novel I like so far. Doesn't feel too forced in most aspects but like most has the problem with the MC overtraining his pokemon to levels far above what he currently needs, like for example his pikachu is already elite four level and he didn't challenge a gym at all, even his other pokemon are pretty strong.
I like the series but I wish you to have no harem because they will most likely be trophy wives that don't do much but I wish him to have Cynthia as GF because she is best girl
Great story you’ve got here. Love how your story is developing so far. It really is a story that is unique in a category that’s full of great story’s. Thank you for all the work you’ve done on this story so far.
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So this isn't Jessie and James from Team Rocket? Anyway, this team will get in their fucking face. I wonder when Giovanni meets Yesha after meeting Alex, what will be the reaction. Well, then he is his younger brother and he will probably think about using him, and after that he will receive BAD TIME from Alex, and before / after from Yesh. But especially from Alex for daring to touch his beloved brother... Unenviable for those who dare to touch Yesha. They will go through hell. But I hope for this sight! Hehe .. Many thanks! P.S. My apologies for the mistakes in the text. Thanks for this miracle paragraphs (no sarcasm, I'm serious). Thanks again and see you soon!
Really good story, hope author continues and gets rid of writers block. Also, a good way to get rid of writers block is to stop and relax for a bit and then reread the story for ideas.
Stability is really baaaaaaad, author keeps on writing different good novels but get one done at lest before doing another🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶
Good very good evil. D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D F F F F F F F F F F F F F F F F F F For F F Cf F For F F F F F xdxd
Man if you can start uploading more frequently then this novel is gonna be even better it's already amazing as it is, just needs that consistency.