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摘要
You have read Fanfics on how one lucky or unlucky guy would get picked by some random omnipotent being to relive his life in another world.
Well what if you were that R.O.B only less omnipotent [For now] and more immortal.
What happens when a man is reborn as Energy in the world of DC
Capable of using said energy to do anything imaginable.
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Excellent Fanfiction! Extremely accurate in addressing DC's absurdities. I hate how Superheroes actually care more about the lives and safety of villains than the people they claim to protect and the rest of the world, in-universe, sees this as an example of their heroism and unparalleled kindness." heroes"
Meh.😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒
Pretty Good Story, with interesting MC. I like the direction the story is taking. I would prefer if MC breaks the concept of either being a hero or villain and just does whatever he feels like.
The idea is very good but poorly executed, that is: your character is a being of energy and is practically omnipotent (he can do whatever he wants as long as he has enough energy) and of all the powers you can choose, do you think? Did you decide to give him a Sharingan? I also feel that everything is going too fast-this copy and past because its what i feel about this story
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The story has been alright so far, but it feels like every time we get a chapter with the MC we get 5 more without him. Sometimes it feels like he just stops existing. The author also hasn't really given me a reason to care about the MC as he is really apathetic. Feels like if nothing caught his interest then he would just spend years staring at a blank wall while gathering energy.
The MC will only have one girl, right? because it doesn't have the harem tag which is rare but doesn't mean it's a bad thing, so who will be the lucky one who gets to get the MC?
It seemed good, the typical author who thinks they are better than hired comic writers, which is technically true but also the authors are looking at comics extremely superficially and reaching the same conclusion which is annoying. Anyway, the fanfic goes into debate lording really quick and mc stumps superman in the marketplace of ideas, so cool! When the author didn’t want to think of how the argument would actually go and simply wrote “then everyone clapped and Albert Einstein gave me 40$” I thought that the author was just the same type of cancer of comic book writers
it was pretty good for a casual book it's not perfect or close to it but it's very well written for a casual book and I just like the concept of the character
Stories like this show just how low the standards are on here the only thing decent about this story is the update schedule. It’s a badly written edgelord with op powers and carbon copy characters
Edgelord MC with sharigan and no emotions. So this is basically gonna be a battle manga where he just kills a bunch of people and zero nuance will be had. Just a very lame way to do an OP MC.
I've read up to chapter 70, the protagonist is in maybe 1/3 of the chapters and that's being generous. The author continuously promises in the comments that "Oh I'll make the MC more active, oh I'll put the MC in more chapters, oh I'll stop making 3/4 of the novel from the POV everybody but the Mc" and yet fails to deliver time and time again giving out moronic excuses like "I just got so caught up in the world building (there is none) guys pwease forgive me🥹. This entire novel can be summarized by these few things. (•) Protagonist who's hardly in the novel and when he is he's pretty much a side character who does nothing but spout pseudo-intellectual gibberish every once in a while. (The overwhelming majority of text is from the POV of others.) (•) The novel, especially during the 20-50 chapter mark is riddled with Chinese-esque writing where you can find Chinese proverbs, metaphors and similarly Chinese plotlines; when I tell you this protagonist is the most passive incompetent Wuxia/Xianxia rip off MC I've ever seen I mean it. Every action from the MC mimics that of a Chinese young master from constantly making claims he doesn't back up to letting enemies go 24/7 to further the plot that never goes anywhere I mean the only character of relative importance that he's killed so far was (SPOILER ALERT) The Joker, every other character death (there aren't that many) were grunts and OC's. (•) The Author. As I mentioned before the author makes countless false promises claiming they'll improve their quality of work only for said promises to remain unfulfilled or for things to be made even worse. Often times you'll find comments criticizing or even asking the author simple questions regarding the novel to which the author will either respond with things such as "maybe" or "we'll see" like a corny teenager who think they're being mysterious; sometimes even liking comments but not responding to genuine questions from readers. ----------------------------------------------------------- Oh also! MC's first use of his power is to make a T-shirt, pants and give himself the mangekyou sharingan. Do with that what you will.
Muito bom! Uma das melhores FanFiction do DC Comics que já li! Personagem principal bastante inteligente. Só esperando um pouco de Romance. Gosto de harém, mas se tiver pelo menos uma heroína, também será bom, aposto na Kara, pois gosto bastante dela.
I love your story fam, yeah it has its flaws, but then again, which story doesn't? As long as it's entertaining, that's good enough for me. There are a few typos that you may have to correct, but then again, no big deal. Keep going man this has so much potential
It felt like a chore to read and it the main character is dull. I can't tell you if it gets better because I only read the first 5 chapters, but oh well give it a shot maybe it is something for you as it has potential.
i liked when he was emotionless but a lot of people did not like it so the author changed it...
Only 100 chapters already have more filler than Naruto xd, but excellent story(stop putting filler) 🫠🫠🫠🫠🫠🫠🫠🫠🫠🫠🫠🫠😗🫠🫠🫠🫠🫠🫠🫠🫠🫠🫠🙃🙃🙃🫠🫠🙃🙃🙃🫠🙃🫠🫠🫠🫠🫠🫠🫠
haven't read yet soon will just won't to say that the reviews that are overly negative for the most part aren't actual reviews. the real reviews seem to only have a problem with the main character nerfing him self to mutch. but that seems to be the only genuine complaint. will review again when I've actually read.
to be honest it's like the MC is a robot, i Don't mind overpowered even neutral MC but, seriously he isn't just boring he's basically a robot and that's what makes it boring , I honestly prefer reading parts that doesn't include the MC
it was good until recently the alice ai became his boss and he is not the kind of mc i was reading the fanfiction anymore , He lost his iq, and starts saving or keep compromising without any actual benefits, at the start the fanfiction felt fresh as there are very few fanfiction with total neutral mc but now its'snot what it used to be
The idea is very good but poorly executed, that is: your character is a being of energy and is practically omnipotent (he can do whatever he wants as long as he has enough energy) and of all the powers you can choose, do you think? Did you decide to give him a Sharingan? I also feel that everything is going too fast
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