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[Congratulations, You are now a Criminal!]
WHAT--?
Branded as an untouchable genius by some, a madman by the majority, and a worthless piece of trash by all, he was just another jaded teenager trying to survive in the chaotic world of the 21st Century. Just one insignificant individual out of 1.3 Billion.
But when fate twisted his path and forced him into the clichéd trope of transmigration, he naively hoped for something different.
Yet again, reality proved to be a brutal disappointment
So what could a worn and weathered book possibly do to change what fate has ordained upon him?
"And WHO ARE YOU CALLING CRIMINAL?!?!?!"
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I Need Moar! DxD-JJK-(LOTM(power system)) He start as a devil so no trash slave MC. It's starting slowly tho, the JJK part is going to show itself around chapter 20 acording to the author. Ah and he is already sequence 8 (chp 21) so kinda fast.
In my opinion, the novel as a whole is meh.😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒
it has its flaws but other than some small errors this story is one of the best on this platform at least. it might be because my brain has rotted from mtl but this Isa good high quality story. Read it if you like good stories and antagonistic mc's.
I like it so far. I the way the worlds are mixed up seem logical, although the only negative i have so far is that if too many worlds are mixed together then i get lost among the characters. Other than that I enjoy this book very much... [current chapters: 18]
Clearly a very well written fic. You attention to detail is truly impeccable. And the concept behind the novels is 🤌🤌🤌 Keep posting ND this will easily be top WebNovel in no time🥇🎖️🏆
I do like this novel. There are some aspects of it that I personally dislike, but I think other people would like. It's a crossover work that includes AU elements for that to work, and I think the blending of the worlds is pretty well done, definitely from a power system view. The part I dislike personally is that for at least for the first 30 chapters or so, it's more of an OC story than AU if you get what I mean. Most fanfiction are very canon compliant, which is something I don't like. Then, there are about 3 different levels of AU fics. Level 1 is labelled as AU but is really still a canon retelling with a new character involved. Level 2 is still based on canon events initially but eventually goes into another direction based on the accumulation of small changes. Level 3 has 2 different routes, where either they have the characters in a different setting or setting itself has a lot of massive differences. An OC story, in my view, is essentially a story that's not really relevant to any of the source material's plot, and that can fit any of those categories. And that's where I fell this story land mostly so far and that's fine within itself but I felt from both the synopsis and the first chapter the aim for the story was the crossover not random unnecessary drama. Like again, I'm not saying it wasn't well written, but that is not the perception that this novel gave as to what it was going to be. That's changed after around chapter 30, which I do like, but it then makes all those previous chapters essentially a very long prologue. Like everything up till he gets to Japan. The structure of the novel is weird because of that. If you were writing a completely new story, just using the setting or because of the crossover, multiple settings, that would be fine, but then why are you now interfering with the plot. And if the wasn't the intention, then you essentially have unnecessarily long prologue that could have easily been cut down by half if not more. With that being said, it's not like it was uninteresting, it definitely was, and the writing quality is very high quality, and besides the Lord of Mysteries aspect not being that well explained in comparison, the actual crossover worlds have been pretty well explained in how everything fits in together. I'm definitely going to keep on reading, and I recommend it to anyone who sees this to give it a go.
I really liked the story, it's quite different from the norm we see around here, and the MC really shows realism. You can read it without fear of having fun, I'm just upset that my novel can't pass yours in collection, now I understand hahaha. If you want, I invite you to read my novel, I'm below you in the collection ranking.
author has done a great job tying the worlds together and creating a plot relevant to all of them. urge new readers to read past early sections where he unlocks Lotm power system which is a little confusing if you haven't seen it before but quickly becomes simple.
This has a lot of potential with the crossover worlds. I also really like the lotm power system. I like that you have to act a certain way to complete each sequence a lot. Hope you don't drop this author. Quick question, is the mc the only one with power from lotm? I kinda hope so....
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interesting fanfic, I like it, I hope you continue writing ............................................................................................................................
I havent read lotm but I like the book and the way it is progressing so far... The mc is a normal person that struggles to survive making the story realistic and enjoyable at the same time...
it was great but wasn't this supposed to be a JJK crossover not a Lord of The Mysteries crossover
I want to give this fanfic a higher rating, but the main character slowly is calling into an unstable pattern of sadism. with no explanation or driving character Arc. this leaves a bad taste and ultimately just disappoints. the story is a good read, but unstable character design and development hinder it slightly.
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Shameless Author-san here. This is my first book, I hope it matches you guy's expectations. I am still learning so I will improve as I continue writing this. But I have confidence that my current skill in writing is still palatable so don't hesitate to give it a try. Thank You :)))