/ Anime & Comics / [DROPPED INDEFINITELY]SPIDER-MAN: THE WHITE SPIDER
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[I'm doing this as a way for me to practice, it's not Peter Parker nor a transmigrated individual, you will see many new villains, and some that are already known as well, but some might have a few if not many changes.
My objective is to learn how to write a superhero story, feel free to criticize my work.]
Victor Graham, unlike his colleagues, wasn't a genius, he doesn't excel in science, math, or any other subject, some would even call him your average joe.
But this is not by lack of trying, even if he is only 16 years old, he is an extremely ambitious boy and have many dreams.
He always thought that they would never happen, however, when his school was invited to visit the Oscorp Industries, an accident happened and gave him something that will forever change him.
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the best thing i ever read on mi intire life but cold have more chapters[img=update][img=exp]gggggggggggggggccvgggfgggggggcvvggggggggvccvvvvcv
The story is very well written till now. At least it has a way higher quality than the other fan fictions on this particular platform. The powers that have been exposed till now have high prospects and the suit to be used is also pretty awesome. I don't know where the story is going or how the response will be for introducing an OC love interest, but I will give it a 5 stars for now. I may change it later if I feel like it did not live up to it but for now, I'll see how it goes.